The document discusses the strengths and weaknesses of 4 potential essay titles. It states that titles 2 and 3 are the best as they directly address the reader and promise strong opinions. Title 2 also uses dramatic vocabulary. Title 1 is deemed too general to be of interest. Title 4 is an interesting idea but is not presented very strikingly.
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1. 2 and 3 are the best titles.
They both speak directly to the
reader and promise strong
opinions; 2 uses dramatic
vocabulary also. 1 is too
general to be of interest; it
sounds more lika a school
essay title. 4 is an interesting
idea but is not presented very
strinkingly
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Generally, yes. The article appeals to the busy person in the electronic age, the 鍖rst paragraph asks direct questions to
involve the reader, the text uses interesting vocabulary, e.g. 'anachronistic' and quotes other people, it makes bold
statements, e.g. 'So what if people buy them less for news than for their daily 鍖x of football or gossip?', it ends with a
strong, slightly humorous view, i.e. 'Only newspapers can really go 'beyond the news'!'
2. Ok
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You can use either " " or ' ' to quote someone's actual words; other forms of punctuation such as << >> are
not acceptable. Note too, the comma before the 鍖rst quotation marks in 2 and before the last quotation mark
in 6. At the end of the quotation, just use the normal punctuation, i.e.
"_____________ ." "______________ !" "_______________ ?" inside the quotation marks