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Poem analysis
POEM by Barolong Seboni
POEM by Barolong
Seboni
We do not need
these jaggered words
that dig a trench
between us
each time they are
uttered
This Photo by Unknown Author is licensed under CC BY-SA
Stanza 1 analysis
In this stanza, the poet is expressing a desire
to move beyond "jagged words" that divide
people and create distance. The phrase
"jagged words" may refer to harsh or hurtful
words that can cause emotional pain and
disconnection. The metaphor of a "trench"
between people suggests a sense of isolation
and division. The repetition of the word
"uttered" emphasizes the impact of these
words on relationships.
english poem analysis.pptx
Stanza 2.
those epithets
sharp like spokes
that pierce the heart
when spoken
This Photo by Unknown Author is licensed under CC BY-ND
Stanza 2 analysis
 The poet compares the "jagged words" to "epithets" or words used to describe someone or
something and describes them as "sharp like spokes." The metaphor of "sharp like spokes"
emphasizes the sharpness and painful impact of these words. The image of "piercing the heart"
evokes the emotional damage that these words can cause. The poet seems to be suggesting that
language can be used to hurt or divide people, and that it is important to use words with
care and compassion.
Epithets
spokes
english poem analysis.pptx
Stanza 3.
there is no room in my
cup
for these acidic words
of sarcasm
that corrode my
sensitivity
This Photo by Unknown Author is licensed under CC BY-SA-NC
Stanza 3 analysis
 The metaphor of "no room in my cup"
suggests that the speaker does not have
the capacity to absorb or accept these
"acidic words of sarcasm." The image of
"corroding sensitivity" emphasizes the
damage that these words can cause to
one's emotions and sense of self. The poet
seems to be suggesting that it is important
to protect one's inner peace and emotional
well-being from such harmful words. This Photo by Unknown Author is licensed under CC BY-NC
english poem analysis.pptx
Stanza 4
these cold and icy words tossed
to deaden the heart
venomous words
from your serpentine tongue
that infect the feeling.
This Photo by Unknown Author
Stanza 4 analysis
 The poet describes "cold and icy words" that are
"tossed" carelessly, with the intention of
"deadening the heart." The metaphor of
"venomous words" and a "serpentine tongue"
suggests that the speaker is experiencing hurtful
words that are intended to harm and cause pain.
The use of "infect" evokes the feeling of poison or
disease, suggesting that these words can have a
deeply negative impact on a person's emotional
state. This Photo by Unknown Author is licensed under CC BY-SA
Stanza 5
Let us speak, love
in gentler tones
timid as the lamb
is soft
woolly words
worn to stand strong against
the
cold-bitterness of the world.
Stanza 5 analysis
 In contrast to the previous stanzas, this stanza offers
a more positive and hopeful message. The speaker
suggests that they should "speak, love" in "gentler
tones" and use "timid" words that are "woolly" and
comforting. The use of "lamb" evokes a sense of
innocence and vulnerability, and the metaphor of
"worn to stand strong" suggests that gentleness and
kindness can be a source of strength.
Woolly
Stanza 6
Better still
let us search in our speech
for words deep as the soul is still
that will spell our thoughts
in the silence of our smiles.
Stanza 6 analysis
 In this final stanza, the speaker suggests that
even better than "gentler" and "timid" words
are words that are "deep" and "still." These
words are associated with stillness, silence,
and reflection. The speaker suggests that the
best way to communicate may be through
"smiles" that convey understanding and
connection without the need for words.
This Photo by Unknown Author is licensed under CC BY
The end
"Gentle words bring life and health; a
deceitful tongue crushes the spirit.
Proverbs 15:4
References
 Bucali, A. (2019, March 30). Literary techniques poetry analysis 2. Literary Techniques Poetry
Analysis 2. Retrieved August 18, 2023, from /inal11/literary-techniques-
poetry-analysis-2-138817351
 College, C. (2018, November 6). Poetry Analysis Basics. Poetry Analysis Basics | PPT. Retrieved
August 18, 2023, from /debgoodlett/poetry-analysis-basics
 chrome96. (2013, December 10). English 30-1 Riddle Poetry Analysis. English 30-1 Riddle Poetry
Analysis. Retrieved August 18, 2023, from /chrome96/english-301-
riddle-poetry-analysis
 Harvey, H. (2009, July 16). POETRY ANALYSIS -TPCASTT. POETRY ANALYSIS -TPCASTT. Retrieved
August 18, 2023, from /hharvey102/poetry-analysis-tpcastt-1730240
 Bansi, B. (2021, August 26). Poetry Devies. Poetry Devies. Retrieved August 18, 2023, from
/BenrikaBansi/poetry-devies

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  • 1. Poem analysis POEM by Barolong Seboni
  • 2. POEM by Barolong Seboni We do not need these jaggered words that dig a trench between us each time they are uttered This Photo by Unknown Author is licensed under CC BY-SA
  • 3. Stanza 1 analysis In this stanza, the poet is expressing a desire to move beyond "jagged words" that divide people and create distance. The phrase "jagged words" may refer to harsh or hurtful words that can cause emotional pain and disconnection. The metaphor of a "trench" between people suggests a sense of isolation and division. The repetition of the word "uttered" emphasizes the impact of these words on relationships.
  • 5. Stanza 2. those epithets sharp like spokes that pierce the heart when spoken This Photo by Unknown Author is licensed under CC BY-ND
  • 6. Stanza 2 analysis The poet compares the "jagged words" to "epithets" or words used to describe someone or something and describes them as "sharp like spokes." The metaphor of "sharp like spokes" emphasizes the sharpness and painful impact of these words. The image of "piercing the heart" evokes the emotional damage that these words can cause. The poet seems to be suggesting that language can be used to hurt or divide people, and that it is important to use words with care and compassion.
  • 10. Stanza 3. there is no room in my cup for these acidic words of sarcasm that corrode my sensitivity This Photo by Unknown Author is licensed under CC BY-SA-NC
  • 11. Stanza 3 analysis The metaphor of "no room in my cup" suggests that the speaker does not have the capacity to absorb or accept these "acidic words of sarcasm." The image of "corroding sensitivity" emphasizes the damage that these words can cause to one's emotions and sense of self. The poet seems to be suggesting that it is important to protect one's inner peace and emotional well-being from such harmful words. This Photo by Unknown Author is licensed under CC BY-NC
  • 13. Stanza 4 these cold and icy words tossed to deaden the heart venomous words from your serpentine tongue that infect the feeling. This Photo by Unknown Author
  • 14. Stanza 4 analysis The poet describes "cold and icy words" that are "tossed" carelessly, with the intention of "deadening the heart." The metaphor of "venomous words" and a "serpentine tongue" suggests that the speaker is experiencing hurtful words that are intended to harm and cause pain. The use of "infect" evokes the feeling of poison or disease, suggesting that these words can have a deeply negative impact on a person's emotional state. This Photo by Unknown Author is licensed under CC BY-SA
  • 15. Stanza 5 Let us speak, love in gentler tones timid as the lamb is soft woolly words worn to stand strong against the cold-bitterness of the world.
  • 16. Stanza 5 analysis In contrast to the previous stanzas, this stanza offers a more positive and hopeful message. The speaker suggests that they should "speak, love" in "gentler tones" and use "timid" words that are "woolly" and comforting. The use of "lamb" evokes a sense of innocence and vulnerability, and the metaphor of "worn to stand strong" suggests that gentleness and kindness can be a source of strength.
  • 18. Stanza 6 Better still let us search in our speech for words deep as the soul is still that will spell our thoughts in the silence of our smiles.
  • 19. Stanza 6 analysis In this final stanza, the speaker suggests that even better than "gentler" and "timid" words are words that are "deep" and "still." These words are associated with stillness, silence, and reflection. The speaker suggests that the best way to communicate may be through "smiles" that convey understanding and connection without the need for words. This Photo by Unknown Author is licensed under CC BY
  • 20. The end "Gentle words bring life and health; a deceitful tongue crushes the spirit. Proverbs 15:4
  • 21. References Bucali, A. (2019, March 30). Literary techniques poetry analysis 2. Literary Techniques Poetry Analysis 2. Retrieved August 18, 2023, from /inal11/literary-techniques- poetry-analysis-2-138817351 College, C. (2018, November 6). Poetry Analysis Basics. Poetry Analysis Basics | PPT. Retrieved August 18, 2023, from /debgoodlett/poetry-analysis-basics chrome96. (2013, December 10). English 30-1 Riddle Poetry Analysis. English 30-1 Riddle Poetry Analysis. Retrieved August 18, 2023, from /chrome96/english-301- riddle-poetry-analysis Harvey, H. (2009, July 16). POETRY ANALYSIS -TPCASTT. POETRY ANALYSIS -TPCASTT. Retrieved August 18, 2023, from /hharvey102/poetry-analysis-tpcastt-1730240 Bansi, B. (2021, August 26). Poetry Devies. Poetry Devies. Retrieved August 18, 2023, from /BenrikaBansi/poetry-devies