The poem expresses a desire to move beyond hurtful words that divide people and cause emotional pain. Various metaphors are used to illustrate how jagged, sharp, acidic, and venomous words can damage relationships and sensitivity. The poet suggests speaking to each other in gentler, timid tones like a lamb using woolly words to stand strong against bitterness. Deeper words that are silent like the soul and expressed through smiles are presented as an even better way to communicate.
2. POEM by Barolong
Seboni
We do not need
these jaggered words
that dig a trench
between us
each time they are
uttered
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3. Stanza 1 analysis
In this stanza, the poet is expressing a desire
to move beyond "jagged words" that divide
people and create distance. The phrase
"jagged words" may refer to harsh or hurtful
words that can cause emotional pain and
disconnection. The metaphor of a "trench"
between people suggests a sense of isolation
and division. The repetition of the word
"uttered" emphasizes the impact of these
words on relationships.
5. Stanza 2.
those epithets
sharp like spokes
that pierce the heart
when spoken
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6. Stanza 2 analysis
The poet compares the "jagged words" to "epithets" or words used to describe someone or
something and describes them as "sharp like spokes." The metaphor of "sharp like spokes"
emphasizes the sharpness and painful impact of these words. The image of "piercing the heart"
evokes the emotional damage that these words can cause. The poet seems to be suggesting that
language can be used to hurt or divide people, and that it is important to use words with
care and compassion.
10. Stanza 3.
there is no room in my
cup
for these acidic words
of sarcasm
that corrode my
sensitivity
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11. Stanza 3 analysis
The metaphor of "no room in my cup"
suggests that the speaker does not have
the capacity to absorb or accept these
"acidic words of sarcasm." The image of
"corroding sensitivity" emphasizes the
damage that these words can cause to
one's emotions and sense of self. The poet
seems to be suggesting that it is important
to protect one's inner peace and emotional
well-being from such harmful words. This Photo by Unknown Author is licensed under CC BY-NC
13. Stanza 4
these cold and icy words tossed
to deaden the heart
venomous words
from your serpentine tongue
that infect the feeling.
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14. Stanza 4 analysis
The poet describes "cold and icy words" that are
"tossed" carelessly, with the intention of
"deadening the heart." The metaphor of
"venomous words" and a "serpentine tongue"
suggests that the speaker is experiencing hurtful
words that are intended to harm and cause pain.
The use of "infect" evokes the feeling of poison or
disease, suggesting that these words can have a
deeply negative impact on a person's emotional
state. This Photo by Unknown Author is licensed under CC BY-SA
15. Stanza 5
Let us speak, love
in gentler tones
timid as the lamb
is soft
woolly words
worn to stand strong against
the
cold-bitterness of the world.
16. Stanza 5 analysis
In contrast to the previous stanzas, this stanza offers
a more positive and hopeful message. The speaker
suggests that they should "speak, love" in "gentler
tones" and use "timid" words that are "woolly" and
comforting. The use of "lamb" evokes a sense of
innocence and vulnerability, and the metaphor of
"worn to stand strong" suggests that gentleness and
kindness can be a source of strength.
18. Stanza 6
Better still
let us search in our speech
for words deep as the soul is still
that will spell our thoughts
in the silence of our smiles.
19. Stanza 6 analysis
In this final stanza, the speaker suggests that
even better than "gentler" and "timid" words
are words that are "deep" and "still." These
words are associated with stillness, silence,
and reflection. The speaker suggests that the
best way to communicate may be through
"smiles" that convey understanding and
connection without the need for words.
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20. The end
"Gentle words bring life and health; a
deceitful tongue crushes the spirit.
Proverbs 15:4
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