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Take Notes
Developed by: Thomas Fortunato
Outline
Read Think
 The doctor is a person who
looks after the sick people
and prescribes medicines
so that the patient recovers
fast. In order to become a
doctor, a person has to
study medicine. Doctors
lead a hard life. Their life is
very busy. They get up
early in the morning and go
to the hospital. They work
without taking a break.
They always remain polite
so that patients feel
comfortable with them.
Since doctors work so hard
we must realise their value.
 What is the subject?
 What is the location
(setting)?
 Who are the people?
 What are they doing?
 What does the author
think?
 Is there a problem?
 How many points is the
author making?
 Whats the solution?
 How does it conclude?
Outline
 Subject: Doctors work hard
 Location: Hospital?
 People: doctors, sick people
 Doing: helping sick people,
prescribe medicine
 Author: their life is hard, long
hours, medical school
 Problem: no
 Points: must study, busy, long
hours, be polite , value (5)
 Solution: no
 Conclusion: we must value
them
I. Doctors work hard
a) Help sick people
b) Prescribe medicine
c) Remain polite
II. Points
a) Long hours
b) Medical school
III. Conclusion
a) Value them
Take notes
Paraphrase
 Doctors work very hard. They help
sick people by prescribing medicine
while remaining polite so that patients
are comfortable. They also work long
hours and have to go to medical
school. They dont take breaks either.
Therefore, we should remember how
valuable doctors are.
Compare
Original Paraphrased
 The doctor is a person who
looks after the sick people and
prescribes medicine so that
the patient recovers fast. In
order to become a doctor, a
person has to study medicine.
Doctors lead a hard life. Their
life is very busy. They get up
early in the morning and go to
the hospital. They work
without taking a break. They
always remain polite so that
patients feel comfortable with
them. Since doctors work so
hard we must realise their
value
 Doctors work very hard.
They help sick people by
prescribing medicine
while remaining polite so
that patients are
comfortable. They also
work long hours and
have to go to school for a
long time. They dont
take breaks either.
Therefore, we should
remember how valuable
doctors are.
Now you try!
Read Think
 Eid al-Fitr (Feast of the
Breaking of the Fast) is one
of the most important festivals
of Muslims. It is a feast that
celebrates the end of the
fasting during the Ramadan.
During the holy month of
Ramadan, Muslims fast from
dawn to sunset and they eat
and drink only after sunset.
Fasting during the month of
Ramadan is one of the acts
that should be mandatorily
observed by Muslims during
their life. Eid al-Fitr falls on the
first day of the month of
Shawwaal
 What is the subject?
 What is the location
(setting)?
 Who are the people?
 What are they doing?
 What does the author
think?
 Is there a problem?
 How many points is the
author making?
 Whats the solution?
 How does it conclude?
Work on separate sheet of
paper!
Take notes Outline
 Subject:
 Location:
 People:
 Doing:
 Author:
 Problem:
 Points:
 Solution:
 Conclusion:
I. _______________
a) _______________
b) _______________
c) _______________
II. _______________
a) _______________
b) _______________
c) _______________
III. _______________
a) _______________
b) _______________
Paraphrase
Now you try!
Original Paraphrase
 Eid al-Fitr (Feast of the
Breaking of the Fast) is one
of the most important festivals
of Muslims. It is a feast that
celebrates the end of the
fasting during the Ramadan.
During the holy month of
Ramadan, Muslims fast from
dawn to sunset and they eat
and drink only after sunset.
Fasting during the month of
Ramadan is one of the acts
that should be mandatorily
observed by Muslims during
their life. Eid al-Fitr falls on the
first day of the month of
Shawwaal
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1. Read
2. Think
3. Take Notes
4. Outline
5. Paraphrase

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Paraphrase TJ paragraph

  • 1. Read Think Take Notes Developed by: Thomas Fortunato Outline
  • 2. Read Think The doctor is a person who looks after the sick people and prescribes medicines so that the patient recovers fast. In order to become a doctor, a person has to study medicine. Doctors lead a hard life. Their life is very busy. They get up early in the morning and go to the hospital. They work without taking a break. They always remain polite so that patients feel comfortable with them. Since doctors work so hard we must realise their value. What is the subject? What is the location (setting)? Who are the people? What are they doing? What does the author think? Is there a problem? How many points is the author making? Whats the solution? How does it conclude?
  • 3. Outline Subject: Doctors work hard Location: Hospital? People: doctors, sick people Doing: helping sick people, prescribe medicine Author: their life is hard, long hours, medical school Problem: no Points: must study, busy, long hours, be polite , value (5) Solution: no Conclusion: we must value them I. Doctors work hard a) Help sick people b) Prescribe medicine c) Remain polite II. Points a) Long hours b) Medical school III. Conclusion a) Value them Take notes
  • 4. Paraphrase Doctors work very hard. They help sick people by prescribing medicine while remaining polite so that patients are comfortable. They also work long hours and have to go to medical school. They dont take breaks either. Therefore, we should remember how valuable doctors are.
  • 5. Compare Original Paraphrased The doctor is a person who looks after the sick people and prescribes medicine so that the patient recovers fast. In order to become a doctor, a person has to study medicine. Doctors lead a hard life. Their life is very busy. They get up early in the morning and go to the hospital. They work without taking a break. They always remain polite so that patients feel comfortable with them. Since doctors work so hard we must realise their value Doctors work very hard. They help sick people by prescribing medicine while remaining polite so that patients are comfortable. They also work long hours and have to go to school for a long time. They dont take breaks either. Therefore, we should remember how valuable doctors are.
  • 6. Now you try! Read Think Eid al-Fitr (Feast of the Breaking of the Fast) is one of the most important festivals of Muslims. It is a feast that celebrates the end of the fasting during the Ramadan. During the holy month of Ramadan, Muslims fast from dawn to sunset and they eat and drink only after sunset. Fasting during the month of Ramadan is one of the acts that should be mandatorily observed by Muslims during their life. Eid al-Fitr falls on the first day of the month of Shawwaal What is the subject? What is the location (setting)? Who are the people? What are they doing? What does the author think? Is there a problem? How many points is the author making? Whats the solution? How does it conclude?
  • 7. Work on separate sheet of paper! Take notes Outline Subject: Location: People: Doing: Author: Problem: Points: Solution: Conclusion: I. _______________ a) _______________ b) _______________ c) _______________ II. _______________ a) _______________ b) _______________ c) _______________ III. _______________ a) _______________ b) _______________
  • 9. Now you try! Original Paraphrase Eid al-Fitr (Feast of the Breaking of the Fast) is one of the most important festivals of Muslims. It is a feast that celebrates the end of the fasting during the Ramadan. During the holy month of Ramadan, Muslims fast from dawn to sunset and they eat and drink only after sunset. Fasting during the month of Ramadan is one of the acts that should be mandatorily observed by Muslims during their life. Eid al-Fitr falls on the first day of the month of Shawwaal
  • 10. Paraphrase in 5 Steps 1. Read 2. Think 3. Take Notes 4. Outline 5. Paraphrase