5. 丐舒从, 亠亞仂亟仆 仗仂从舒亢 仆亠从仂仂亠 仍亠仄亠仆
仂从仂于, 从仂仂亠 舒亰舒弍仂舒仍舒 于 舒仄从舒
亳亰亠仆亳 亠仄 束Against all odds損 于 11 从仍舒亠.
仂仆亠仆仂 亢亠, 舒 舒弍仂舒 亰舒仆亳仄舒亠 仆亠 仂亟亳仆
仂从. 舒 仗亠于仂仄 仂从亠 仄 亳亰舒亠仄 仄仂亟亠仍 亟仍
仗仂亟舒亢舒仆亳, 亠仄舒 从仂仂仂亞仂 亰于亳 仍亠亟ム亳仄
仂弍舒亰仂仄:
Society, at large, views the disabled as a pack
of retards who lack the natural ability to
understand, comprehend or think good for
themselves. What is your opinion? Do you agree
with this statement?
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6. 亊 仗亠亟仍舒亞舒 亳亰亳 仂弍舒亰亠, 亳 仄
于仆亳仄舒亠仍仆仂 仗亠亠于仂亟亳仄 亠亞仂, 仂弍舒舒
于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠 仆舒 仍亠从亳亠从亳亠 亠亟亳仆亳 仗仂
亰舒亟舒仆仆仂亶 亠仄亠. Sample of the essay
Prior to the twentieth century there have been two opinions on people with disabilities. Out of sight and out of mind is the way in which people tend to deal with disabled
community. But the good news is our society is ready to look at them differently.
Personally I guess, the disabled are just as same as someone else. To start with, it doesnt make sense to disgrace somebody if they look different. Thus, we come across courageous
handicapped people who refuse to give up and go on to live a fulfilling life. Today, they play sports and do almost everything like a normal person. I find it really amazing, that they
learn to beat the challenges and live a happier life. Moreover, it sounds so offensive when someone stares at them endlessly or even look at them with a downward angle!
Unfortunately, lots of my acquaintances view disabled as objects of fear and pity. The prevailing attitude is that such individuals are incapable of participating in or contributing to
society and that they must rely on charitable organizations.
Yet, Im absolutely sure that differently abled people dont want to be pitied. They just want to live a normal life. If a crippled man on the wheelchair needs your assistance, be
polite and ask him if you can help.
Coming to an end, I hope that people will focus on their personalities instead of focusing on the disability of people. It is not a persons fault if they are retarded. What makes them
feel different is calling them handicapped or special. Who are we to judge or look down upon someone with ridicule?
从舒亠于亠 亟仂仄舒仆亠亞仂 亰舒亟舒仆亳 仗仂 亠弍
亰舒从亠仗亳 仍亠从亳从 亳 仗仂亟亞仂仂于亳 从 弍亠亠亟亠 仗仂
仂亶 亢亳于仂亠仗亠亠亶 亠仄亠.
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9. 仂仄仍亳仂于从亳 亠仄. 亅仂 仍舒从仂仆亳仆亶 亠亰亳 于
仂弍仂弍亠仆仆仂仄 于亳亟亠.
仍 亰舒从亠仗仍亠仆亳 从 仗仂 亠弍 亳亰 仂弍舒亰舒
仂亳仆亠仆亳 于弍舒 仗亠亟仍仂亢亠仆亳, 仂舒亢舒ム亳亠 仂仆仂于仆
仄仍 仗舒舒亞舒舒, 舒 仗仂仂仄 仆舒亶亳 亟仂从舒亰舒亠仍于舒 亳
仗亳仄亠 从舒亢亟仂亶 亳亟亠亳. 舒亢亟亶 舒弍亰舒 仂 仄亳仆亳-亠,
仗仂从仂仍从 仂仆 仗亠亟舒于仍磳 仂弍仂亶 亰舒从仂仆亠仆仆亶 亠从.
从 仗亠亠仂亟亳仄 从 亠仆亳从舒仄. 舒亳仆舒亠仄
于于亠亟亠仆亳. 仗舒亢仆亠仆亳亳 亠弍仆亳从舒 仗亠亟仍舒亞舒ム
舒仗仂舒仆亠仆仆亠 仗仂仂弍 仆舒舒 亠. 仂从仂仍从 亞仍舒于仂亶
亰舒亟舒亠亶 于仗仍亠仆亳 磦仍磳 仗亳于仍亠 亳 亟亠亢舒 于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠
亳舒亠仍, 仄 仄仂亢亠仄: 仂弍舒亳 从 亳舒亠仍 于仂仗仂仂仄 亳仍亳
亳仗仂仍亰仂于舒 仗仂仍仂于亳, 仗仂亞仂于仂从, 亳舒 亳 .亟.
First paragraph techniques:
addressing the reader directly, Have you ever wondered what the world would be like if there were no laws?
using the quotation/saying/direct speech, As the saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy; or
As Marshall Mcluhan said, There are no passengers on Spaceship Earth, we are all crew
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10. 舒亠仄 仂弍舒舒 于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠 亠弍 仆舒 亠仆亳从,
亳仗仂仍亰亠仄 于 仂弍舒亰亠: Out of sight and out of mind.
11. 仂亟仂仍亢舒 舒弍仂 仆舒亟 于仗仍亠仆亳亠仄, 仗仂 亠弍
亳亰亳 于仂亰仄仂亢仆亠 从仍亳亠 亳 仗仂仗舒 亰舒仄亠仆亳
于于亠亟亠仆亳亠 于 仄仂亟亠仍亳 亟仍 仗仂亟舒亢舒仆亳 仗亳仄亠舒仄亳, 亟舒仆仆仄亳
于 仗亠亰亠仆舒亳亳.
A much debated topic that has been in the news recently is whether or not there should be
Over the last decade there has been a huge increase (an alarming drop) in the number of people who
In almost every country you will find a society that
In recent years, there has been a growing trend towards doing
For hundreds of years, people have enjoyed doing
People have always had a strong desire to
仆舒仍仂亞亳仆 舒弍仂 仗仂亟亠仍于舒亠仄 亰舒从仍ム亠仆亳亠仄.
弍舒舒 于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠 舒亳 仆舒 仂, 仂 亠仆亳从亳 仗亠于仂亞仂 亳
仗仂仍亠亟仆亠亞仂 仗舒舒亞舒仂于 仗亠亠从仍亳从舒ム. 仂仂仄, 亠仍亳 于仂
于于亠亟亠仆亳亳 弍仍舒 仗仂亠弍仍亠仆舒 仗仂仍仂于亳舒, 仂 仆亠 仆舒亟仂
亰仍仂仗仂亠弍仍 仂亶 舒亠亞亳亠亶 于 亰舒从仍ム亠仆亳亳.
give the reader something to consider, The world would be a much more dangerous place if there werent any
laws.
end with a saying/ quotation, As Ann Sanders once said, The hard way is the right way. or, As the saying goes,
The apple doesnt fall far from the tree
a rhetorical question, Arent teenagers part of society, after all?
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To express opinion: In my opinion/view, It seems to me that, the way I see it, To my mind, I (strongly/completely)
agree/disagree/believe that, I am totally against, I am sure that, I (dont) think/believe that, If you ask me, I doubt
whether, What I like aboutis that,
To introduce contrasting viewpoint: On the other hand, However, Although, Whereas, While, It is argued that,
Opponents of this view say, There is a different point of view that, There are people who (may) think that, It can
be argued that, Some people would argue that, A different opinion holds that, In spite of/Despite, On the contrary,
According to
To introduce counter-argument: Yet, However, But
To conclude: To sum up, In conclusion, All in all, All things considered, Taking everything into account, In other
words, In short/brief,
舒从亠仗亳于 于仆亠仆亳亠 于磶从亳 仄仂亢仆仂 仗亳仗亳 从
于仆亠仆亳仄. 仆仂于舒 舒弍仂舒亠仄 仗仂 亰仆舒从仂仄仂仄 仗仍舒仆:
仆舒仂亟亳仄 仗亳仄亠 于 仂亳仆亠仆亳亳
亳亰舒亠仄 亳仆仂仆亳仄亳仆亠 仍亳仆从亠
仗仂亠弍仍磳仄 亳 于 仂弍于亠仆仆 仗亠亟仍仂亢亠仆亳 仂亞仍舒仆仂 仆舒亠亶 亠仄亠
To list points: First of all, In the first place, Firstly/Secondly, To start with, To begin with
To add more points: Also, Moreover, What is more, Furthermore, In addition, Besides, Apart from this, Another
point/thing/argument/(dis)advantage is, As well as this, Another major reason
To introduce examples: for example/instance, as an example, take (the money), such as, in particular, especially, To
illustrate/show what I mean
To extend your ideas: In this way, That would mean, As a result (of this), If this happens, By doing this, Because of this,
Due to this
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