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仂弍亶 亟亠仆, 于舒亢舒亠仄亠 从仂仍仍亠亞亳.
亊 - 亳亠仍 舒仆亞仍亳亶从仂亞仂 磶从舒 于 亳亠亠 于
亞仂仂亟亠 舒仍舒亳舒. 弌亠亞仂亟仆 仄仆亠 仂亠仍仂 弍
仗仂亟亠仍亳 仄仂亳仄 仂仗仂仄 舒弍仂, 从仂仂 
仗仂于仂亢 亟仍 仗仂亟亞仂仂于从亳 舒亳 从 亟舒亠
亟亳仆仂亞仂 仂亟舒于亠仆仆仂亞仂 亅从亰舒仄亠仆舒 仗仂
舒仆亞仍亳亶从仂仄 磶从. 亊 舒从舒亢 仂仍从仂 仂弍
仂亟仆仂仄, 仆仂 仂亠仆 于舒亢仆仂仄 亰舒亟舒仆亳亳  仆舒仗亳舒仆亳亳
仂亳仆亠仆亳  仍亠仄亠仆舒仄亳 舒亢亟亠仆亳, 于
从仂仂仂仄 舒亳仄 仆亠仂弍仂亟亳仄仂 于舒亰亳 于仂亠
舒亞仄亠仆亳仂于舒仆仆仂亠 仄仆亠仆亳亠 仆舒 仗仂弍仍亠仄仆
亠仄.
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舒亟仂 仂仄亠亳, 仂 仆舒舒 从仂仍舒 于仂 亢亠
6-亶 亞仂亟 舒弍仂舒亠 仗仂 亠弍仆亳从舒仄 束仆亞仍亳亶从亳亶 于
仂从亠損 亳亰亟舒亠仍于舒 束仂于亠亠仆亳亠損 亳
束Express Publishing損.  亠弍仆亳从亠 仗仂于仂亟亳
仗仍舒仆仂仄亠仆舒 舒弍仂舒 仗仂 仗仂亟亞仂仂于从亠 亠弍 从
亟舒仆仆仂仄 亳仗舒仆亳. 亅仂 舒亰仆仂仂弍舒亰仆亠
舒亠亞亳亳 仆舒仗亳舒仆亳 仂亳仆亠仆亳, 弍仂亞舒于仂
仍亠从亳亠从亳 亠亟亳仆亳 于 舒仄从舒 亠弍亠仄仂亶
亠仄舒亳从亳, 仂 于亟亠仍磳 亠亞仂 亠亟亳 亟亞亳
丕. 仂 亠, 从仂仆亠仆仂, 仆亠从仂仂亠
亰舒亟仆亠仆亳.
仂弍仍亠仄舒 亰舒从仍ム舒亠 于 仂仄, 仂 亠弍仆亳从 仆亠
仗仂仗亠于舒亠 亰舒 亠仄亳 亳亰仄亠仆亠仆亳礆亳 亳 亠弍仂于舒仆亳礆亳 从
亰舒亟舒仆亳 弌2, 从仂仂亠 弍仍亳 于仆亠亠仆 仗舒 仍亠
仆舒亰舒亟. 舒仗亳仄亠, 从仂仍亳亠于仂 舒弍亰舒亠于 亳 亳
仂仄仍亳仂于从舒. 亠 仂亟仆仂亶 仗仂仄亠仂亶 于 舒弍仂亠
磦仍磳 仂, 仂 亠亞仂亟仆 仆舒 从仆亳亢仆仂仄 仆从亠
仗亠亟舒于仍亠仆仂 弍亠亳仍亠仆仆仂亠 仄仆仂亢亠于仂
仍亳亠舒 束于 仗仂仄仂 舒亳仄 仗亳 仗仂亟亞仂仂于从亠
从 亅損. 仂, 从 仂亢舒仍亠仆亳, 仄仆仂亞亳亠 仗仂仂弍亳 仆亠
亳于舒ム 亳亰仄亠仆亠仆亳亶 于 从亠 亠, 舒 亳仆仂亞亟舒
仂舒于仍亠仆, 仄磪从仂 从舒亰舒, 仆亠亟仂弍仂仂于亠仆仂. 
仂 仗亳于仂亟亳 从 仂仄, 仂 仂仆亳 仆亠 仂仍从仂 仆亠
仗仂仄仂亞舒ム, 舒 从仂亠亠 亰舒仗于舒ム 亟亠亠亶.
仂仂仄 于 于仂亠亶 舒弍仂亠  仂仗亳舒ム 仆舒
仗舒亢仆亠仆亳 亠弍仆亳从舒, 仆仂 仗亳 仂仄 仗亠亟仍舒亞舒
仂亰亟舒于舒 于仂亳 仂弍于亠仆仆亠 亠, 亳仗仂仍亰
仗仍舒仆 从亰舒仄亠仆舒亳仂仆仆仂亞仂 仂亳仆亠仆亳,
舒亰仆仂仂弍舒亰仆亠 从仍亳亠, 仗亳仆亠 于 仂仄 亢舒仆亠,
舒 舒从亢亠 亳亰于亠仆亠 舒亠亞亳亳 亳 舒从亳从亳. 亊
于亠亞亟舒 仂仗亳舒ム 仆舒 仂弍舒亰亠 亟仍 仗仂亟舒亢舒仆亳,
从仂仂亶 仂舒于仍 舒仄舒 仆舒 仂仆仂于亠 舒亰仆
亠弍仆 仗仂仂弍亳亶. 亅舒 舒弍仂舒 仂仗舒于亟于舒亠
亠弍, . 从. 亠仆亳从亳 仆亠仗仂亳亰于仂仍仆仂 亳 仍亠亞从仂
亰舒仗仂仄亳仆舒ム 仗仂仍亠亰仆亠 从 亳 仍亠从亳从 仗仂
亠仄亠.
丐舒从, 亠亞仂亟仆  仗仂从舒亢 仆亠从仂仂亠 仍亠仄亠仆
仂从仂于, 从仂仂亠  舒亰舒弍仂舒仍舒 于 舒仄从舒
亳亰亠仆亳 亠仄 束Against all odds損 于 11 从仍舒亠.
仂仆亠仆仂 亢亠, 舒 舒弍仂舒 亰舒仆亳仄舒亠 仆亠 仂亟亳仆
仂从. 舒 仗亠于仂仄 仂从亠 仄 亳亰舒亠仄 仄仂亟亠仍 亟仍
仗仂亟舒亢舒仆亳, 亠仄舒 从仂仂仂亞仂 亰于亳 仍亠亟ム亳仄
仂弍舒亰仂仄:
Society, at large, views the disabled as a pack
of retards who lack the natural ability to
understand, comprehend or think good for
themselves. What is your opinion? Do you agree
with this statement?
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亊 仗亠亟仍舒亞舒 亳亰亳 仂弍舒亰亠, 亳 仄
于仆亳仄舒亠仍仆仂 仗亠亠于仂亟亳仄 亠亞仂, 仂弍舒舒
于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠 仆舒 仍亠从亳亠从亳亠 亠亟亳仆亳 仗仂
亰舒亟舒仆仆仂亶 亠仄亠. Sample of the essay
Prior to the twentieth century there have been two opinions on people with disabilities. Out of sight and out of mind is the way in which people tend to deal with disabled
community. But the good news is  our society is ready to look at them differently.
Personally I guess, the disabled are just as same as someone else. To start with, it doesnt make sense to disgrace somebody if they look different. Thus, we come across courageous
handicapped people who refuse to give up and go on to live a fulfilling life. Today, they play sports and do almost everything like a normal person. I find it really amazing, that they
learn to beat the challenges and live a happier life. Moreover, it sounds so offensive when someone stares at them endlessly or even look at them with a downward angle!
Unfortunately, lots of my acquaintances view disabled as objects of fear and pity. The prevailing attitude is that such individuals are incapable of participating in or contributing to
society and that they must rely on charitable organizations.
Yet, Im absolutely sure that differently abled people dont want to be pitied. They just want to live a normal life. If a crippled man on the wheelchair needs your assistance, be
polite and ask him if you can help.
Coming to an end, I hope that people will focus on their personalities instead of focusing on the disability of people. It is not a persons fault if they are retarded. What makes them
feel different is calling them handicapped or special. Who are we to judge or look down upon someone with ridicule?
 从舒亠于亠 亟仂仄舒仆亠亞仂 亰舒亟舒仆亳  仗仂 亠弍
亰舒从亠仗亳 仍亠从亳从 亳 仗仂亟亞仂仂于亳 从 弍亠亠亟亠 仗仂
仂亶 亢亳于仂亠仗亠亠亶 亠仄亠.
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仍 仂亞仂 仂弍 仗仂亞亰亳 亠弍 于 亠仄, 仆舒
于仂仂仄 仂从亠  仗仂从舒亰于舒 舒亞仄亠仆 亳仍仄舒
仗仂 亳仆于舒仍亳亟舒, 从仂仂亶 仆亠 仂舒磿 亳
仗仂亟仂仍亢舒亠 亢亳 舒从, 仂 仆亠 从舒亢亟亶 亰亟仂仂于亶
亠仍仂于亠从 仗仂仂弍亠仆 亠亳 仆舒 仂, 仂 仗仂亟 亳仍
从舒仍亠从亠. (亠仂亳 亳仍仄舒 亞仂于仂 仗仂-舒仆亰从亳, 仆仂 亠仄 亠仆仆亠亠.
仆仂亞亳亠 亠亞仂亟仆 仗仂亠舒ム 于仂仗亠亶从亳亠 舒仆, 于 仂仄 亳仍亠
个舒仆亳, 亳 亳仄亠ム 仂仗 仂弍亠仆亳 仆舒 仂仄 磶从亠.  仂仄 亢亠,
舒仆亞仍亳亶从亳亠 弍亳 磲仂仄 亳 亞仂仂于 仗亳亶亳 仆舒 仗仂仄仂.)
仂仍亠 仗仂仄仂舒  舒于仍 仗亠亠亟 亠弍舒仄亳
亟于亠 亠仍亳 仂从舒:
経笑火姉夷莞却 仍亠从亳从仂亶 仗仂 亠仄亠
継仂于亠亠仆于仂于舒 亠仆亳从亳 仆舒仗亳舒仆亳 亠
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丐亠仗亠 仄仂亢仆仂 仗亳仗亳 从 舒弍仂亠 仂 从仂亶
仂亳仆亠仆亳.  仆仂于舒 亳亰舒亠仄 仗仍舒仆.  仗亠于仂仄
舒弍亰舒亠, . 亠. 于仂 于于亠亟亠仆亳亳 仄 亟仂仍亢仆 仂仂弍亳 亠仄
仆舒亠亞仂 亠, 舒仗亠从 于 从仂仂仂仄 舒仄舒亳于舒亠
亟舒仆仆舒 亠仄舒 亳 于仂 仗仂亰亳亳. 仂仂亶, 亠亳亶 亳
亠于亠亶 舒弍亰舒  仂 仂仆仂于仆舒 舒 仆舒亠亞仂 亠,
亞亟亠 仂仄仍亳ム 仂仆仂亠仆亳亠 从 亟舒仆仆仂亶 仗仂弍仍亠仄亠
 舒亞仄亠仆舒亳亠亶 亳 仗亳仄亠舒仄亳. 舒亳于舒亠 于亠 于
仍仂亞亳仆 亠仗仂从: - 仄仂亠 仄仆亠仆亳亠 
仗仂亳于仂仗仂仍仂亢仆仂亠 仄仆亠仆亳亠  仄仂亳 从仂仆舒亞仄亠仆. 
仗仂仍亠亟仆亳亶 仗亶 舒弍亰舒 (亰舒从仍ム亠仆亳亠 亳仍亳, 亳仆舒亠
亞仂于仂, 于于仂亟) 亟仂仍亢亠仆 仗亠亠从仍亳从舒  于于亠亟亠仆亳亠仄,
仆仂 仆亠 弍 仗仂仄 仗仂于仂亠仆亳亠仄 仂仆仂于仆仂亶
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仂仄仍亳仂于从亳 亠仄. 亅仂 仍舒从仂仆亳仆亶 亠亰亳 于
仂弍仂弍亠仆仆仂仄 于亳亟亠.
仍 亰舒从亠仗仍亠仆亳 从  仗仂 亠弍 亳亰 仂弍舒亰舒
仂亳仆亠仆亳 于弍舒 仗亠亟仍仂亢亠仆亳, 仂舒亢舒ム亳亠 仂仆仂于仆
仄仍 仗舒舒亞舒舒, 舒 仗仂仂仄 仆舒亶亳 亟仂从舒亰舒亠仍于舒 亳
仗亳仄亠 从舒亢亟仂亶 亳亟亠亳. 舒亢亟亶 舒弍亰舒  仂 仄亳仆亳-亠,
仗仂从仂仍从 仂仆 仗亠亟舒于仍磳 仂弍仂亶 亰舒从仂仆亠仆仆亶 亠从.
 从 仗亠亠仂亟亳仄 从 亠仆亳从舒仄. 舒亳仆舒亠仄 
于于亠亟亠仆亳.  仗舒亢仆亠仆亳亳 亠弍仆亳从舒 仗亠亟仍舒亞舒ム
舒仗仂舒仆亠仆仆亠 仗仂仂弍 仆舒舒 亠. 仂从仂仍从 亞仍舒于仂亶
亰舒亟舒亠亶 于仗仍亠仆亳 磦仍磳 仗亳于仍亠 亳 亟亠亢舒 于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠
亳舒亠仍, 仄 仄仂亢亠仄: 仂弍舒亳 从 亳舒亠仍  于仂仗仂仂仄 亳仍亳
亳仗仂仍亰仂于舒 仗仂仍仂于亳, 仗仂亞仂于仂从, 亳舒 亳 .亟.
First paragraph techniques:
 addressing the reader directly, Have you ever wondered what the world would be like if there were no laws?
 using the quotation/saying/direct speech, As the saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy; or
As Marshall Mcluhan said, There are no passengers on Spaceship Earth, we are all crew
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舒亠仄 仂弍舒舒 于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠 亠弍 仆舒 亠仆亳从,
亳仗仂仍亰亠仄 于 仂弍舒亰亠: Out of sight and out of mind.
仂亟仂仍亢舒 舒弍仂 仆舒亟 于仗仍亠仆亳亠仄,  仗仂 亠弍
亳亰亳 于仂亰仄仂亢仆亠 从仍亳亠 亳 仗仂仗舒 亰舒仄亠仆亳
于于亠亟亠仆亳亠 于 仄仂亟亠仍亳 亟仍 仗仂亟舒亢舒仆亳 仗亳仄亠舒仄亳, 亟舒仆仆仄亳
于 仗亠亰亠仆舒亳亳.
 A much debated topic that has been in the news recently is whether or not there should be
 Over the last decade there has been a huge increase (an alarming drop) in the number of people who
 In almost every country you will find a society that
 In recent years, there has been a growing trend towards doing
 For hundreds of years, people have enjoyed doing
 People have always had a strong desire to
仆舒仍仂亞亳仆 舒弍仂 仗仂亟亠仍于舒亠仄  亰舒从仍ム亠仆亳亠仄.
弍舒舒 于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠 舒亳 仆舒 仂, 仂 亠仆亳从亳 仗亠于仂亞仂 亳
仗仂仍亠亟仆亠亞仂 仗舒舒亞舒仂于 仗亠亠从仍亳从舒ム. 仂仂仄, 亠仍亳 于仂
于于亠亟亠仆亳亳 弍仍舒 仗仂亠弍仍亠仆舒 仗仂仍仂于亳舒, 仂 仆亠 仆舒亟仂
亰仍仂仗仂亠弍仍 仂亶 舒亠亞亳亠亶 于 亰舒从仍ム亠仆亳亳.
 give the reader something to consider, The world would be a much more dangerous place if there werent any
laws.
 end with a saying/ quotation, As Ann Sanders once said, The hard way is the right way. or, As the saying goes,
The apple doesnt fall far from the tree
 a rhetorical question, Arent teenagers part of society, after all?
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 仆仂于舒 仂弍舒舒 于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠 亠弍 仆舒 亠仆亳从,
亳仗仂仍亰亠仄 于 仂弍舒亰亠: Who are we to judge or look down
upon someone with ridicule?
弌仍亠亟ム亳仄 舒亞仂仄 仂从舒 磦仍磳 舒弍仂舒 仂 于磶从舒仄亳
亳仍亳, 从舒从 仄 亳 仆舒亰于舒亠仄, 仍亳仆从亠舒仄亳.  仆亳 亰舒于亳亳 仗亠
仆舒亠亞仂 仂亳仆亠仆亳 亳 于 从亳亠亳亳 1 (仂亟亠亢舒仆亳亠) 亳 于
从亳亠亳亳 2 (仂亞舒仆亳亰舒亳 亠从舒). 弍舒舒 于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠
亟亠亠亶 仆舒 于舒亢仆仂 从舒从 于仆亠仆亳, 舒从 亳 于仆亠仆仆亳 仍亳仆从亠仂于.
 仗亠于 仂亠亠亟 仆舒亳仆舒 仂舒弍舒于舒 于仆亠仆亳亠 仍亳仆从亠舒,
.亠. 于磶从亳 仄亠亢亟 舒弍亰舒舒仄亳. 舒弍仂舒 仗仂于仂亟亳 仗仂 仂亶 亢亠
亠仄亠:
 仆舒仂亟亳仄 仗亳仄亠 于 仂亳仆亠仆亳亳
 亳亰舒亠仄 亳仆仂仆亳仄亳仆亠 仍亳仆从亠
 仗仂亠弍仍磳仄 亳 于 仂弍于亠仆仆 仗亠亟仍仂亢亠仆亳 仂亞仍舒仆仂 仆舒亠亶 亠仄亠
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External linkers
 To express opinion: In my opinion/view, It seems to me that, the way I see it, To my mind, I (strongly/completely)
agree/disagree/believe that, I am totally against, I am sure that, I (dont) think/believe that, If you ask me, I doubt
whether, What I like aboutis that,
 To introduce contrasting viewpoint: On the other hand, However, Although, Whereas, While, It is argued that,
Opponents of this view say, There is a different point of view that, There are people who (may) think that, It can
be argued that, Some people would argue that, A different opinion holds that, In spite of/Despite, On the contrary,
According to
 To introduce counter-argument: Yet, However, But
 To conclude: To sum up, In conclusion, All in all, All things considered, Taking everything into account, In other
words, In short/brief,
舒从亠仗亳于 于仆亠仆亳亠 于磶从亳 仄仂亢仆仂 仗亳仗亳 从
于仆亠仆亳仄.  仆仂于舒 舒弍仂舒亠仄 仗仂 亰仆舒从仂仄仂仄 仗仍舒仆:
 仆舒仂亟亳仄 仗亳仄亠 于 仂亳仆亠仆亳亳
 亳亰舒亠仄 亳仆仂仆亳仄亳仆亠 仍亳仆从亠
 仗仂亠弍仍磳仄 亳 于 仂弍于亠仆仆 仗亠亟仍仂亢亠仆亳 仂亞仍舒仆仂 仆舒亠亶 亠仄亠
 To list points: First of all, In the first place, Firstly/Secondly, To start with, To begin with
 To add more points: Also, Moreover, What is more, Furthermore, In addition, Besides, Apart from this, Another
point/thing/argument/(dis)advantage is, As well as this, Another major reason
 To introduce examples: for example/instance, as an example, take (the money), such as, in particular, especially, To
illustrate/show what I mean
 To extend your ideas: In this way, That would mean, As a result (of this), If this happens, By doing this, Because of this,
Due to this
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 从舒亠于亠 亟仂仄舒仆亠亞仂 亰舒亟舒仆亳 从 仂仄
仂从  仗仂 亠弍 仆舒仗亳舒 仂亳仆亠仆亳亠-
舒亢亟亠仆亳亠 仗仂 仂亶 亠仄亠.
弌仍亠亟ム亳亶 于仂亶 仂从 于 舒仄从舒 仂亶 亢亠
亠仄  仂亞舒仆亳亰 于 于亳亟亠 亟亳从亳亳. 亠弍舒
亢亠 于 仗仂仍仆仂亶 仄亠亠 仂于仍舒亟亠仍亳 仍亠从亳从仂亶 仂从舒,
仂仆亳 亰仆舒ム 于于仂亟仆亠 仍仂于舒 亳 于舒亢亠仆亳 亟仍
于亠亟亠仆亳 仗仂舒  舒亞仄亠仆舒亳亠亶 亳 仂仆亳
于舒弍仂舒仍亳 于仂 仗仂亰亳亳 于 仂仄 于仂仗仂亠, .从.
于舒亰亳仍亳 于仂 仂从 亰亠仆亳 于 亟仂仄舒仆亳
仂亳仆亠仆亳.
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仂仍亠 舒弍仂 于 仗舒舒  于弍亳舒 亳
舒仆亳从舒: 亠仍亠从仂仄仄亠仆舒仂 亳 亟于舒
仂弍亠亠亟仆亳从舒, 亳仄亠ム亳亠 舒亰仆亠 仂从亳 亰亠仆亳.
亠弍舒 亳仆亠仆亳ム 亟亠弍舒, 亞仂仂 亰舒亳舒
于仂 仂从 亰亠仆亳.
仂仄仄亠仆舒仂 仗仂亟于仂亟亳 亳仂亞 亟亳从亳亳,
仗舒 于亠亳 仗仂 从 仄亳仆仂仄 亠亠仆亳.
 亰舒于亠舒ム亳仄 舒仗仂仄 仆舒亠亶 舒弍仂 于
舒仄从舒 亠仄 束Against all odds損 磦仍磳
仗仂于亠从舒 仂亳仆亠仆亳亶. 亠弍舒 仗仂仍舒ム
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亟仂仗仂仍仆亳亠仍仆亠 亠仄 仂亠仆亳于舒仆亳 亳 舒仄亳
于仗舒ム 于 仂仍亳 从仗亠仂于, 仗仂于亠 舒弍仂
于仂亳 仂亟仆仂从仍舒仆亳从仂于. 亅仂 仆亠亰舒仄亠仆亳仄亶 仂仗
亟仍 舒亳. 仆亳 仂亠仆 亞仍弍仂从仂 仗仂仆亳从舒ム
亳 仂于仍舒亟亠于舒ム 从仂亶 仂亳仆亠仆亳, 仂弍舒舒
于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠 仆舒 亠弍仂于舒仆亳, .从. 仂仆亳 于仗舒ム
仂于亠亠仆仆仂 于 亳仆仂亶 仂仍亳. 亅舒 仂亠仆仂仆舒
仗仂亠亟舒, 仗仂 仄仂亠仄 仄仆亠仆亳, 仂弍磶舒亠仍仆仂
亟仂仍亢仆舒 仗亳于仂于舒 于 仗仂亟亞仂仂于从亠 从
从亰舒仄亠仆.
舒于亠舒 于仂亠 于仗仍亠仆亳亠,  仂
仗仂弍仍舒亞仂亟舒亳 舒 亰舒 于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠, 仗仂亢亠仍舒
于亠仄 仗亠仂仄 于 仆亠仗仂仂仄 亟亠仍亠, 舒 舒从亢亠
仄仆 亳 于仂亠从亳 亠仆亳从仂于.
弌仗舒亳弍仂 亰舒 于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠.
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  • 10. 舒亠仄 仂弍舒舒 于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠 亠弍 仆舒 亠仆亳从, 亳仗仂仍亰亠仄 于 仂弍舒亰亠: Out of sight and out of mind.
  • 11. 仂亟仂仍亢舒 舒弍仂 仆舒亟 于仗仍亠仆亳亠仄, 仗仂 亠弍 亳亰亳 于仂亰仄仂亢仆亠 从仍亳亠 亳 仗仂仗舒 亰舒仄亠仆亳 于于亠亟亠仆亳亠 于 仄仂亟亠仍亳 亟仍 仗仂亟舒亢舒仆亳 仗亳仄亠舒仄亳, 亟舒仆仆仄亳 于 仗亠亰亠仆舒亳亳. A much debated topic that has been in the news recently is whether or not there should be Over the last decade there has been a huge increase (an alarming drop) in the number of people who In almost every country you will find a society that In recent years, there has been a growing trend towards doing For hundreds of years, people have enjoyed doing People have always had a strong desire to 仆舒仍仂亞亳仆 舒弍仂 仗仂亟亠仍于舒亠仄 亰舒从仍ム亠仆亳亠仄. 弍舒舒 于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠 舒亳 仆舒 仂, 仂 亠仆亳从亳 仗亠于仂亞仂 亳 仗仂仍亠亟仆亠亞仂 仗舒舒亞舒仂于 仗亠亠从仍亳从舒ム. 仂仂仄, 亠仍亳 于仂 于于亠亟亠仆亳亳 弍仍舒 仗仂亠弍仍亠仆舒 仗仂仍仂于亳舒, 仂 仆亠 仆舒亟仂 亰仍仂仗仂亠弍仍 仂亶 舒亠亞亳亠亶 于 亰舒从仍ム亠仆亳亳. give the reader something to consider, The world would be a much more dangerous place if there werent any laws. end with a saying/ quotation, As Ann Sanders once said, The hard way is the right way. or, As the saying goes, The apple doesnt fall far from the tree a rhetorical question, Arent teenagers part of society, after all? 13 14
  • 12. 仆仂于舒 仂弍舒舒 于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠 亠弍 仆舒 亠仆亳从, 亳仗仂仍亰亠仄 于 仂弍舒亰亠: Who are we to judge or look down upon someone with ridicule? 弌仍亠亟ム亳仄 舒亞仂仄 仂从舒 磦仍磳 舒弍仂舒 仂 于磶从舒仄亳 亳仍亳, 从舒从 仄 亳 仆舒亰于舒亠仄, 仍亳仆从亠舒仄亳. 仆亳 亰舒于亳亳 仗亠 仆舒亠亞仂 仂亳仆亠仆亳 亳 于 从亳亠亳亳 1 (仂亟亠亢舒仆亳亠) 亳 于 从亳亠亳亳 2 (仂亞舒仆亳亰舒亳 亠从舒). 弍舒舒 于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠 亟亠亠亶 仆舒 于舒亢仆仂 从舒从 于仆亠仆亳, 舒从 亳 于仆亠仆仆亳 仍亳仆从亠仂于. 仗亠于 仂亠亠亟 仆舒亳仆舒 仂舒弍舒于舒 于仆亠仆亳亠 仍亳仆从亠舒, .亠. 于磶从亳 仄亠亢亟 舒弍亰舒舒仄亳. 舒弍仂舒 仗仂于仂亟亳 仗仂 仂亶 亢亠 亠仄亠: 仆舒仂亟亳仄 仗亳仄亠 于 仂亳仆亠仆亳亳 亳亰舒亠仄 亳仆仂仆亳仄亳仆亠 仍亳仆从亠 仗仂亠弍仍磳仄 亳 于 仂弍于亠仆仆 仗亠亟仍仂亢亠仆亳 仂亞仍舒仆仂 仆舒亠亶 亠仄亠 15
  • 13. External linkers To express opinion: In my opinion/view, It seems to me that, the way I see it, To my mind, I (strongly/completely) agree/disagree/believe that, I am totally against, I am sure that, I (dont) think/believe that, If you ask me, I doubt whether, What I like aboutis that, To introduce contrasting viewpoint: On the other hand, However, Although, Whereas, While, It is argued that, Opponents of this view say, There is a different point of view that, There are people who (may) think that, It can be argued that, Some people would argue that, A different opinion holds that, In spite of/Despite, On the contrary, According to To introduce counter-argument: Yet, However, But To conclude: To sum up, In conclusion, All in all, All things considered, Taking everything into account, In other words, In short/brief, 舒从亠仗亳于 于仆亠仆亳亠 于磶从亳 仄仂亢仆仂 仗亳仗亳 从 于仆亠仆亳仄. 仆仂于舒 舒弍仂舒亠仄 仗仂 亰仆舒从仂仄仂仄 仗仍舒仆: 仆舒仂亟亳仄 仗亳仄亠 于 仂亳仆亠仆亳亳 亳亰舒亠仄 亳仆仂仆亳仄亳仆亠 仍亳仆从亠 仗仂亠弍仍磳仄 亳 于 仂弍于亠仆仆 仗亠亟仍仂亢亠仆亳 仂亞仍舒仆仂 仆舒亠亶 亠仄亠 To list points: First of all, In the first place, Firstly/Secondly, To start with, To begin with To add more points: Also, Moreover, What is more, Furthermore, In addition, Besides, Apart from this, Another point/thing/argument/(dis)advantage is, As well as this, Another major reason To introduce examples: for example/instance, as an example, take (the money), such as, in particular, especially, To illustrate/show what I mean To extend your ideas: In this way, That would mean, As a result (of this), If this happens, By doing this, Because of this, Due to this 16-19 20-23
  • 14. 从舒亠于亠 亟仂仄舒仆亠亞仂 亰舒亟舒仆亳 从 仂仄 仂从 仗仂 亠弍 仆舒仗亳舒 仂亳仆亠仆亳亠- 舒亢亟亠仆亳亠 仗仂 仂亶 亠仄亠. 弌仍亠亟ム亳亶 于仂亶 仂从 于 舒仄从舒 仂亶 亢亠 亠仄 仂亞舒仆亳亰 于 于亳亟亠 亟亳从亳亳. 亠弍舒 亢亠 于 仗仂仍仆仂亶 仄亠亠 仂于仍舒亟亠仍亳 仍亠从亳从仂亶 仂从舒, 仂仆亳 亰仆舒ム 于于仂亟仆亠 仍仂于舒 亳 于舒亢亠仆亳 亟仍 于亠亟亠仆亳 仗仂舒 舒亞仄亠仆舒亳亠亶 亳 仂仆亳 于舒弍仂舒仍亳 于仂 仗仂亰亳亳 于 仂仄 于仂仗仂亠, .从. 于舒亰亳仍亳 于仂 仂从 亰亠仆亳 于 亟仂仄舒仆亳 仂亳仆亠仆亳. 24-25
  • 15. 仂仍亠 舒弍仂 于 仗舒舒 于弍亳舒 亳 舒仆亳从舒: 亠仍亠从仂仄仄亠仆舒仂 亳 亟于舒 仂弍亠亠亟仆亳从舒, 亳仄亠ム亳亠 舒亰仆亠 仂从亳 亰亠仆亳. 亠弍舒 亳仆亠仆亳ム 亟亠弍舒, 亞仂仂 亰舒亳舒 于仂 仂从 亰亠仆亳. 仂仄仄亠仆舒仂 仗仂亟于仂亟亳 亳仂亞 亟亳从亳亳, 仗舒 于亠亳 仗仂 从 仄亳仆仂仄 亠亠仆亳. 亰舒于亠舒ム亳仄 舒仗仂仄 仆舒亠亶 舒弍仂 于 舒仄从舒 亠仄 束Against all odds損 磦仍磳 仗仂于亠从舒 仂亳仆亠仆亳亶. 亠弍舒 仗仂仍舒ム 26 27
  • 16. 亟仂仗仂仍仆亳亠仍仆亠 亠仄 仂亠仆亳于舒仆亳 亳 舒仄亳 于仗舒ム 于 仂仍亳 从仗亠仂于, 仗仂于亠 舒弍仂 于仂亳 仂亟仆仂从仍舒仆亳从仂于. 亅仂 仆亠亰舒仄亠仆亳仄亶 仂仗 亟仍 舒亳. 仆亳 仂亠仆 亞仍弍仂从仂 仗仂仆亳从舒ム 亳 仂于仍舒亟亠于舒ム 从仂亶 仂亳仆亠仆亳, 仂弍舒舒 于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠 仆舒 亠弍仂于舒仆亳, .从. 仂仆亳 于仗舒ム 仂于亠亠仆仆仂 于 亳仆仂亶 仂仍亳. 亅舒 仂亠仆仂仆舒 仗仂亠亟舒, 仗仂 仄仂亠仄 仄仆亠仆亳, 仂弍磶舒亠仍仆仂 亟仂仍亢仆舒 仗亳于仂于舒 于 仗仂亟亞仂仂于从亠 从 从亰舒仄亠仆.
  • 17. 舒于亠舒 于仂亠 于仗仍亠仆亳亠, 仂 仗仂弍仍舒亞仂亟舒亳 舒 亰舒 于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠, 仗仂亢亠仍舒 于亠仄 仗亠仂仄 于 仆亠仗仂仂仄 亟亠仍亠, 舒 舒从亢亠 仄仆 亳 于仂亠从亳 亠仆亳从仂于. 弌仗舒亳弍仂 亰舒 于仆亳仄舒仆亳亠. 28