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Daniel has been waxing and scrubbing Mr. Miyagi's car for hours as part of his karate training. When he finishes, Daniel searches the house tiredly for Mr. Miyagi. He finds Mr. Miyagi meditating calmly in his bedroom, showing that while Daniel has been exhausting himself with physical work, Mr. Miyagi has been maintaining inner peace through meditation.

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Shot #1 Daniel/Mr. Miyagi riding in truck Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Lighting Sounds Intended Angle and Effect on Movement Audience Establishing Characters- Mr. Miyagi is shown Tracking/ High Diegetic The purpose of the establishing Shot Daniel and Mr. driving Daniel to his Dolly Key - truck shot is to convey Miyagi house over the (follows Lighting driving Mr. Miyagis Objects- Old railroad tracks in an truck over Non- unconventionality Truck, Oil old truck. railroad Diegetic (or possibly poverty). This Barrels, Daniel: Wait, you tracks) - flute may be suggested Railroad Tracks, own the oil music by having his Railroad companies, too? house near a Crossing Sign Miyagi: Not junkyard full of oil barrels. everything is as seem.
Shot #2 Daniel/Mr. Miyagi exiting truck Shot Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Angle Lighting Sounds Intended Type and Effect on Movement Audience High Characters- Daniel and Mr. Boom/ High Non- The purpose of the Angle Daniel and Mr. Miyagi reach his Crane- The Key Diegetic- boom/crane Miyagi house and get out of camera Lighting - flute is to suggest Objects- Old the truck. Daniel shows music how tiny Mr. Miyagis Truck, Old Cars, expresses his Miyagis house is in Fence, Shrubs, nervousness about house and comparison Small House the karate the to the tournament to Mr. background. junkyard, and, hence, Miyagi. his simple lifestyle.
Shot #3 Shot Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Angle Lighting Sounds Intended Type and Movement Effect on Audience Long Characters- Daniel Mr. Miyagi tells Tracking/Dolly High Diegetic- Placing Mr. Shot and Mr. Miyagi Daniel to respect (follows Daniel Key Daniels Miyagi in the the rival sensei, Objects- Old truck and Mr. Miyagi Lighting and Mr. center of the even if he finds frame may walking) Miyagis him wacko. emphasize his Mr. Miyagi (to footsteps stating Wacko Daniel): Wacko on dirt teacher teacher attitude attitude rest in rest in fist. fist while [Clenches fist] clenching his Stupid, but fact of fist. life.
Shot #4 Daniel Looks into Mr. Miyagis car Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Angle Lighting Sounds Intended and Effect on Movement Audience Medium Characters- Daniel looks into Zoom- The High Key N/A Having the Shot Daniel and Mr. Mr. Miyagis car. camera Lighting camera zoom in on Daniel Miyagi Mr. Miyagi then follows signifies his Object- Old car notices Daniel Daniel curiosity about peering into it. looking into the interior of Mr. Miyagis Mr. Miyagis car. car (possibly how old it is, etc.)
Shot #5 Mr. Miyagi brings water buckets Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Lighting Sounds Intended Angle and Effect on Movement Audience Eye-line Characters- Mr. Miyagi brings a N/A High Diegetic- The absence of Match Daniel and Mr. water bucket to Key Water dialogue suggests that Miyagi Daniel. Lighting bucket Miyagi wants Objects- Water No dialogue clinking Daniel to show buckets, old pride in his car, work. He wheelbarrow, presents this by fence carrying in the water buckets with a straight face.
Shot #6 Walk on road, hmm? Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Lighting Sounds Intended Angle and Effect on Movement Audience Medium Characters- Miyagi (to Daniel): The camera High Diegetic- The close-up Walk on road, Key helps define Mr. Shot Daniel and Mr. slowly Mr. Miyagis hand Miyagi hmm? Walk left zooms in Lighting Miyagi motions (such as side, safe. Walk hand-wringing Object- Old car on Miyagi making right side, safe. for squishing a Walk middle, as he squishing grape.) Also, the sooner or later explains his sound slow pacing of the [makes squish walk on action in the scene helps the gesture] get squish road audience grasp just like grape. analogy to the developing Here, karate, same friendship Daniel. thing. between him and
Shot #7 Mr. Miyagi ties headband on Daniel Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Lighting Sounds Intended Angle and Effect on Movement Audience Close-Up/ Characters- Mr. Miyagi ties Tilt- The High Diegetic- The close-up Medium Daniel and Mr. Daniels karate camera Key Headband foreshadows Shot Miyagi headband around his pivots Lighting being tied the closeness of Object- karate forehead. upward as around the bond that headband Daniel and Daniels will form Mr. Miyagi head between Daniel stand up for and Mr. Miyagi him to tie as they gain Daniels mutual respect. headband on.
Shot #8 Wax on, wax off Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Lighting Sounds Intended Angle and Effect on Movement Audience Low Characters- Mr. Miyagi instructs N/A High Diegetic- The intended Angle/ Daniel, Mr. Daniel on how to wax Key Mr. effect on the a car. audience is to Close- Miyagi Lighting Miyagi Miyagi (to Daniel): draw attention Up Objects- breathing Wax on, right hand. to Mr. Miyagis sponge, car Wax off, left hand. softly emphasis on Wax on, wax off. having Daniel Breathe in through breathe slowly nose, out the mouth. and quietly Wax on, wax off. Don't while waxing forget to breathe, very the car. important.
Shot #9 Whered these cars come from? Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Lighting Sounds Intended Angle and Effect on Movement Audience Two- Characters- Daniel: Whered N/A High Diegetic- The effect of the shot-reverse- Shot Daniel, Mr. these cars come Key Daniel and shot is to (Shot- Miyagi from? Lighting Mr. present Mr. Reverse- Objects- Old Mr. Miyagi: Miyagi Miyagis Shot) car, Detroit. talking response to wheelbarrow what he feels is an irrelevant question, which he briefly answers and then continues to walk away.
Shot #10 Daniel scrubbing Mr. Miyagis car Shot Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Angle Lighting Sounds Intended Type and Movement Effect on Audience Close- Characters- Mr. Miyagi Zoom- The Rear Diegetic- The camera zooms in to Up Daniel walks away, camera Lighting Sponge hint at how Objects- leaving zooms in scrubbing vigorously sponge, old car Daniel alone on Daniel Daniel scrubs to scrub the scrubbing the dirt off Miyagis car. car doors. the car Likewise, the doors. rapid editing of the scene also achieves this.
Shot #11 Wax on, wax off... (again) Shot Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Angle Lighting Sounds Intended Type and Movement Effect on Audience Wipe Characters- Mr. Miyagi N/A Low Key Diegetic- The low key Daniel, Mr. comes back to Lighting Daniel and lighting Miyagi Daniel waxing Mr. Miyagi illustrates Objects- sponge, the car. He talking, that several old car, small then reinforces sponges hours have house (in the importance brushing passed while background) of wax on, against car Daniel has right hand, been waxing wax off, left the car. hand.
Shot #12 Daniel finishes waxing the car Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Angle Lighting Sounds Intended and Movement Effect on Audience Medium Characters- Daniel Tilt- The Low Key N/A Here, the Shot Daniel, Mr. finishes camera Lighting absence of Miyagi waxing the follows dialogue may Objects- Daniel as he suggest that cars hood sponge scrubs the Daniel is and bumper. lower part of becoming too No dialogue the car. tired to speak.
Shot #13 Daniel finishes waxing the car Shot Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Angle Lighting Sounds Intended Type and Movement Effect on Audience Low Characters- Daniel calls for Tracking/Dolly Low Key N/A The low key Angle Daniel Mr. Miyagi to -The camera Lighting lighting Objects- old see his finished follows behind intensifies cars (in work in waxing Daniel as he Daniels background) the car. He walks into Mr. exhaustion anxiously Miyagis house. after hours of begins to look washing and for him. waxing the car.
Shot #14 Daniel tries to find Mr. Miyagi Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Angle Lighting Sounds Intended and Movement Effect on Audience Long Characters- Daniel Tracking- Low Diegetic- Having the camera track Shot Daniel slowly walks The camera Key Daniels Daniel as he Objects- through Mr. follows Lighting footsteps walks through paper Miyagis behind on the house may lanterns, kitchen Daniel as hardwood suggest Daniels refrigerator before he walks floor nervousness entering his through the and anxiety as bedroom. house. to Mr. Miyagis whereabouts.
Shot #15 Daniel finds Mr. Miyagi meditating Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Angle Lighting Sounds Intended and Movement Effect on Audience Long Characters- Daniel pauses N/A Front Diegetic- The front lighting conveys serenity Shot Daniel and Mr. to stare at Mr. Lighting Mr. Miyagi and inner calm Miyagi Miyagi meditating while Mr. Miyagi Objects- small meditating. He and meditates. Placing Daniel behind candles, paper then walks out breathing Miyagi may lanterns, beds in evoke Daniels astonishment. surprise when he notices this.

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  • 2. Shot #1 Daniel/Mr. Miyagi riding in truck Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Lighting Sounds Intended Angle and Effect on Movement Audience Establishing Characters- Mr. Miyagi is shown Tracking/ High Diegetic The purpose of the establishing Shot Daniel and Mr. driving Daniel to his Dolly Key - truck shot is to convey Miyagi house over the (follows Lighting driving Mr. Miyagis Objects- Old railroad tracks in an truck over Non- unconventionality Truck, Oil old truck. railroad Diegetic (or possibly poverty). This Barrels, Daniel: Wait, you tracks) - flute may be suggested Railroad Tracks, own the oil music by having his Railroad companies, too? house near a Crossing Sign Miyagi: Not junkyard full of oil barrels. everything is as seem.
  • 3. Shot #2 Daniel/Mr. Miyagi exiting truck Shot Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Angle Lighting Sounds Intended Type and Effect on Movement Audience High Characters- Daniel and Mr. Boom/ High Non- The purpose of the Angle Daniel and Mr. Miyagi reach his Crane- The Key Diegetic- boom/crane Miyagi house and get out of camera Lighting - flute is to suggest Objects- Old the truck. Daniel shows music how tiny Mr. Miyagis Truck, Old Cars, expresses his Miyagis house is in Fence, Shrubs, nervousness about house and comparison Small House the karate the to the tournament to Mr. background. junkyard, and, hence, Miyagi. his simple lifestyle.
  • 4. Shot #3 Shot Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Angle Lighting Sounds Intended Type and Movement Effect on Audience Long Characters- Daniel Mr. Miyagi tells Tracking/Dolly High Diegetic- Placing Mr. Shot and Mr. Miyagi Daniel to respect (follows Daniel Key Daniels Miyagi in the the rival sensei, Objects- Old truck and Mr. Miyagi Lighting and Mr. center of the even if he finds frame may walking) Miyagis him wacko. emphasize his Mr. Miyagi (to footsteps stating Wacko Daniel): Wacko on dirt teacher teacher attitude attitude rest in rest in fist. fist while [Clenches fist] clenching his Stupid, but fact of fist. life.
  • 5. Shot #4 Daniel Looks into Mr. Miyagis car Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Angle Lighting Sounds Intended and Effect on Movement Audience Medium Characters- Daniel looks into Zoom- The High Key N/A Having the Shot Daniel and Mr. Mr. Miyagis car. camera Lighting camera zoom in on Daniel Miyagi Mr. Miyagi then follows signifies his Object- Old car notices Daniel Daniel curiosity about peering into it. looking into the interior of Mr. Miyagis Mr. Miyagis car. car (possibly how old it is, etc.)
  • 6. Shot #5 Mr. Miyagi brings water buckets Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Lighting Sounds Intended Angle and Effect on Movement Audience Eye-line Characters- Mr. Miyagi brings a N/A High Diegetic- The absence of Match Daniel and Mr. water bucket to Key Water dialogue suggests that Miyagi Daniel. Lighting bucket Miyagi wants Objects- Water No dialogue clinking Daniel to show buckets, old pride in his car, work. He wheelbarrow, presents this by fence carrying in the water buckets with a straight face.
  • 7. Shot #6 Walk on road, hmm? Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Lighting Sounds Intended Angle and Effect on Movement Audience Medium Characters- Miyagi (to Daniel): The camera High Diegetic- The close-up Walk on road, Key helps define Mr. Shot Daniel and Mr. slowly Mr. Miyagis hand Miyagi hmm? Walk left zooms in Lighting Miyagi motions (such as side, safe. Walk hand-wringing Object- Old car on Miyagi making right side, safe. for squishing a Walk middle, as he squishing grape.) Also, the sooner or later explains his sound slow pacing of the [makes squish walk on action in the scene helps the gesture] get squish road audience grasp just like grape. analogy to the developing Here, karate, same friendship Daniel. thing. between him and
  • 8. Shot #7 Mr. Miyagi ties headband on Daniel Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Lighting Sounds Intended Angle and Effect on Movement Audience Close-Up/ Characters- Mr. Miyagi ties Tilt- The High Diegetic- The close-up Medium Daniel and Mr. Daniels karate camera Key Headband foreshadows Shot Miyagi headband around his pivots Lighting being tied the closeness of Object- karate forehead. upward as around the bond that headband Daniel and Daniels will form Mr. Miyagi head between Daniel stand up for and Mr. Miyagi him to tie as they gain Daniels mutual respect. headband on.
  • 9. Shot #8 Wax on, wax off Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Lighting Sounds Intended Angle and Effect on Movement Audience Low Characters- Mr. Miyagi instructs N/A High Diegetic- The intended Angle/ Daniel, Mr. Daniel on how to wax Key Mr. effect on the a car. audience is to Close- Miyagi Lighting Miyagi Miyagi (to Daniel): draw attention Up Objects- breathing Wax on, right hand. to Mr. Miyagis sponge, car Wax off, left hand. softly emphasis on Wax on, wax off. having Daniel Breathe in through breathe slowly nose, out the mouth. and quietly Wax on, wax off. Don't while waxing forget to breathe, very the car. important.
  • 10. Shot #9 Whered these cars come from? Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Lighting Sounds Intended Angle and Effect on Movement Audience Two- Characters- Daniel: Whered N/A High Diegetic- The effect of the shot-reverse- Shot Daniel, Mr. these cars come Key Daniel and shot is to (Shot- Miyagi from? Lighting Mr. present Mr. Reverse- Objects- Old Mr. Miyagi: Miyagi Miyagis Shot) car, Detroit. talking response to wheelbarrow what he feels is an irrelevant question, which he briefly answers and then continues to walk away.
  • 11. Shot #10 Daniel scrubbing Mr. Miyagis car Shot Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Angle Lighting Sounds Intended Type and Movement Effect on Audience Close- Characters- Mr. Miyagi Zoom- The Rear Diegetic- The camera zooms in to Up Daniel walks away, camera Lighting Sponge hint at how Objects- leaving zooms in scrubbing vigorously sponge, old car Daniel alone on Daniel Daniel scrubs to scrub the scrubbing the dirt off Miyagis car. car doors. the car Likewise, the doors. rapid editing of the scene also achieves this.
  • 12. Shot #11 Wax on, wax off... (again) Shot Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Angle Lighting Sounds Intended Type and Movement Effect on Audience Wipe Characters- Mr. Miyagi N/A Low Key Diegetic- The low key Daniel, Mr. comes back to Lighting Daniel and lighting Miyagi Daniel waxing Mr. Miyagi illustrates Objects- sponge, the car. He talking, that several old car, small then reinforces sponges hours have house (in the importance brushing passed while background) of wax on, against car Daniel has right hand, been waxing wax off, left the car. hand.
  • 13. Shot #12 Daniel finishes waxing the car Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Angle Lighting Sounds Intended and Movement Effect on Audience Medium Characters- Daniel Tilt- The Low Key N/A Here, the Shot Daniel, Mr. finishes camera Lighting absence of Miyagi waxing the follows dialogue may Objects- Daniel as he suggest that cars hood sponge scrubs the Daniel is and bumper. lower part of becoming too No dialogue the car. tired to speak.
  • 14. Shot #13 Daniel finishes waxing the car Shot Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Angle Lighting Sounds Intended Type and Movement Effect on Audience Low Characters- Daniel calls for Tracking/Dolly Low Key N/A The low key Angle Daniel Mr. Miyagi to -The camera Lighting lighting Objects- old see his finished follows behind intensifies cars (in work in waxing Daniel as he Daniels background) the car. He walks into Mr. exhaustion anxiously Miyagis house. after hours of begins to look washing and for him. waxing the car.
  • 15. Shot #14 Daniel tries to find Mr. Miyagi Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Angle Lighting Sounds Intended and Movement Effect on Audience Long Characters- Daniel Tracking- Low Diegetic- Having the camera track Shot Daniel slowly walks The camera Key Daniels Daniel as he Objects- through Mr. follows Lighting footsteps walks through paper Miyagis behind on the house may lanterns, kitchen Daniel as hardwood suggest Daniels refrigerator before he walks floor nervousness entering his through the and anxiety as bedroom. house. to Mr. Miyagis whereabouts.
  • 16. Shot #15 Daniel finds Mr. Miyagi meditating Shot Type Character/Object Action/Dialogue Camera Angle Lighting Sounds Intended and Movement Effect on Audience Long Characters- Daniel pauses N/A Front Diegetic- The front lighting conveys serenity Shot Daniel and Mr. to stare at Mr. Lighting Mr. Miyagi and inner calm Miyagi Miyagi meditating while Mr. Miyagi Objects- small meditating. He and meditates. Placing Daniel behind candles, paper then walks out breathing Miyagi may lanterns, beds in evoke Daniels astonishment. surprise when he notices this.