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Ashley Morgan
On Tuesday January 28, 2014 Barack Obama delivered his State of the Union Address to
the members of Congress and to all fellow Americans in order to outline the national priorities.
In the beginning of President Obamas speech he states that more oil is being produced in the
United States, the deficits have been cut by more than half, and that America is the worlds
number one place to invest. During this speech he includes high points or positive aspects that
have occurred within the nation, negative aspects that need to be changed, and personal stories to
illustrate his points.
The main idea about his speech is that Congress needs to make efforts to help Americans
get ahead and be able to reach the American Dream. The high points include ideas about
economic growth, women deserve equal pay, immigration reform needs to occur, new jobs need
created, minimum wage needs to be increased, and more has to be done to help Americans save
for retirement. President Obama declared that no American can ever be denied the coverage of a
pre-existing health condition to show that change has been made and that more can be done to
help Americans live the best life possible. Another main point about his speech is that citizenship
must exist in order for us and the next generations to accomplish their dreams. At the end of his
speech he mentions a soldier who was almost killed in a roadside bomb. Cory Remsburg was in a
coma for months, couldnt talk, or barely move; however, he never quit and he realized that
nothing comes easy. President Obama added the story about Remsburg in his speech to show us
that America has never come easy and that everything is within our reach.
On the other hand President Obama adds negative aspects that need to be altered. He
recognizes that Americans do work hard and barely get by; therefore, he encourages Congress to
make changes to help Americans be able to reach their dreams. He acknowledges that all the
nation will not agree, that changes will not occur overnight, and that tough choices will be
debated on. In the low points of this speech Obama does declare that we make mistakes and that
we can become discouraged that the American Dream is an empty promise; however, he plans to
help Americans have the chances to make their dreams come true.
Throughout his speech he does a good job at addresses issues that he believes need to be
changed as well as stating some plans for change; however, he does acknowledge that change
will not occur immediately. Many Americans like to blame the President for everything wrong
that has occurred; however, the president is not the only person who is involved in the decision
making processes of the country. Throughout his speech he does use many rhetorical devices to
persuade his listeners by adding personal stories of citizens and by using the phrases such as let
get it done, our, and we to make every American feel that he is talking to them. I believe
that President Obama did a good job on addressing his desires and plans to Congress for the
upcoming year and hopefully the American Dream will be realistic to achieve.

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  • 1. Ashley Morgan On Tuesday January 28, 2014 Barack Obama delivered his State of the Union Address to the members of Congress and to all fellow Americans in order to outline the national priorities. In the beginning of President Obamas speech he states that more oil is being produced in the United States, the deficits have been cut by more than half, and that America is the worlds number one place to invest. During this speech he includes high points or positive aspects that have occurred within the nation, negative aspects that need to be changed, and personal stories to illustrate his points. The main idea about his speech is that Congress needs to make efforts to help Americans get ahead and be able to reach the American Dream. The high points include ideas about economic growth, women deserve equal pay, immigration reform needs to occur, new jobs need created, minimum wage needs to be increased, and more has to be done to help Americans save for retirement. President Obama declared that no American can ever be denied the coverage of a pre-existing health condition to show that change has been made and that more can be done to help Americans live the best life possible. Another main point about his speech is that citizenship must exist in order for us and the next generations to accomplish their dreams. At the end of his speech he mentions a soldier who was almost killed in a roadside bomb. Cory Remsburg was in a coma for months, couldnt talk, or barely move; however, he never quit and he realized that nothing comes easy. President Obama added the story about Remsburg in his speech to show us that America has never come easy and that everything is within our reach. On the other hand President Obama adds negative aspects that need to be altered. He recognizes that Americans do work hard and barely get by; therefore, he encourages Congress to make changes to help Americans be able to reach their dreams. He acknowledges that all the nation will not agree, that changes will not occur overnight, and that tough choices will be debated on. In the low points of this speech Obama does declare that we make mistakes and that we can become discouraged that the American Dream is an empty promise; however, he plans to help Americans have the chances to make their dreams come true. Throughout his speech he does a good job at addresses issues that he believes need to be changed as well as stating some plans for change; however, he does acknowledge that change will not occur immediately. Many Americans like to blame the President for everything wrong
  • 2. that has occurred; however, the president is not the only person who is involved in the decision making processes of the country. Throughout his speech he does use many rhetorical devices to persuade his listeners by adding personal stories of citizens and by using the phrases such as let get it done, our, and we to make every American feel that he is talking to them. I believe that President Obama did a good job on addressing his desires and plans to Congress for the upcoming year and hopefully the American Dream will be realistic to achieve.