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Pitch feedback

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David Dac
David Dac

The document provides feedback from judges on a student film pitch. The judges enjoyed the presentation but suggested improving character identification. They liked the original plot idea but said to clarify some elements. The judges felt the narrative sound idea was original but to ensure timing alignment of image and sound. They advised finalizing the schedule soon to avoid stress and ensure filming is not delayed. The judges liked the title sequence idea but warned to ensure text is easily readable and visible. Overall, the judges enjoyed the pitch and their feedback highlighted areas to focus on for improvement.

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Pitch Feedback
About the Presentation • When we finished presenting, they really enjoyed it because we had parts that were funny and the music that was playing throughout also made it enjoyable. They told us it was a good pitch and very presentable.
About the Plot • We were told that the plot was really good and understandable, however, we were also told to improve the way the identity of the characters would be displayed, so it looks better overall. • Also, they mentioned how it was original and that they really liked the idea but to try make it just slightly clearer.
About the Sound • When we explained the how our sound was going to be arranged, they said that it was a good and original idea because not a lot of people have done narratives before. Also, they told us to be careful with the timing between both the image and the sound; it has to make sense.
About Schedule • When they asked us about the schedule, we didn’t really had a final idea about when we would be doing what because some of us were unable at some times so we needed to get that sorted out. • They told us to plan it as soon as possible because filming would be very soon and if we fell behind it would be a lot of stress for us.
About Title Sequence • After we explained how we were planning to have our title sequence, they liked the idea but they told us to be careful of the way we write the titles because they have to be easy to read and to understand. Also they have to be big enough for them to be seen. Overall, they liked the idea.
Overall • The judges really enjoyed our pitch and we found their feedback really useful because it gives us an idea of where we are at and what we need to be paying more attention at. • We might change the structure of the title sequence after what they’ve told us.

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  • 2. About the Presentation • When we finished presenting, they really enjoyed it because we had parts that were funny and the music that was playing throughout also made it enjoyable. They told us it was a good pitch and very presentable.
  • 3. About the Plot • We were told that the plot was really good and understandable, however, we were also told to improve the way the identity of the characters would be displayed, so it looks better overall. • Also, they mentioned how it was original and that they really liked the idea but to try make it just slightly clearer.
  • 4. About the Sound • When we explained the how our sound was going to be arranged, they said that it was a good and original idea because not a lot of people have done narratives before. Also, they told us to be careful with the timing between both the image and the sound; it has to make sense.
  • 5. About Schedule • When they asked us about the schedule, we didn’t really had a final idea about when we would be doing what because some of us were unable at some times so we needed to get that sorted out. • They told us to plan it as soon as possible because filming would be very soon and if we fell behind it would be a lot of stress for us.
  • 6. About Title Sequence • After we explained how we were planning to have our title sequence, they liked the idea but they told us to be careful of the way we write the titles because they have to be easy to read and to understand. Also they have to be big enough for them to be seen. Overall, they liked the idea.
  • 7. Overall • The judges really enjoyed our pitch and we found their feedback really useful because it gives us an idea of where we are at and what we need to be paying more attention at. • We might change the structure of the title sequence after what they’ve told us.