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Writing 
for Online 
Tim Currie 
tim.currie@ukings.ca 
@tscurrie
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Online Writing 
1. Structure 
2. Links 
3. Headlines & SEO 
4. Social Media
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Jakob Nielsen: 
 He researches usability: how 
people consume content online 
 At Sun Microsystems he 
investigated how people 
interacted with their computers 
 He authored a 1997 landmark 
study on Web usability NIELSEN NORMAN GROUP
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Nielsens Research 
Reading online is different from reading on 
paper (1997): 
 Most people dont read online  they scan 
 Only 16% read a page word for word 
 79% of readers scan a page first 
 Reading online is 25% slower than reading on 
paper
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Research By Nielsens Peers 
Stanford University/ 
Poynter Institute 
EyeTracker studies 
(2000 & 2004): 
 Eyes go to text first 
 Briefs/teasers are 
popular 
 A headline has less 
than 1 sec. of a site 
visitor's attention 
STANFORD UNIVERSITY
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Nielsens Research 
 People dont want to read a lot online. 
Why? 
 Body position 
 Eyestrain 
 Many web pages are authored for print 
 Its difficult to judge the end of the story 
 The web is action-driven. People love to 
click
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Nielsens Recommendations 
for Web Pages 
Text should be scannable: 
1) Highlighted keywords
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 Quartz: 
Everything that led to Colorados 
record-breaking flood, and why it 
will only get worse
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Nielsens Recommendations 
for Web Pages 
Text should be scannable: 
2) At least two levels of headlines
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 Toronto Star: 
Costa Concordia: Italian agency gives 
final OK to right cruise ship after 
checking weather conditions
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ONLINE WRITING 
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Nielsens Recommendations 
for Web Pages 
Text should be scannable: 
3) Bulleted lists
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 Globe and Mail: 
Unemployment, grim public housing 
fueling riots in Stockholm
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 Toronto Star: 
10 fees you should avoid
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 Buzzfeed: 
20 Uniquely Brilliant Business Cards 
 Buzzfeed: 
The Day Lehman Died
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Nielsens Recommendations 
for Web Pages 
4) One idea per paragraph; no more than 
three sentences in each 
5) Inverted pyramid style 
6)Write 50% less than you would in print 
on each page
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Clang! Creak! Tink, tink, tink tink. TING! 
In days past the sounds of a blacksmiths shop were among the 
most distinctive noises found in towns and villages across 
North America. The sounds of village smithy pounding, 
bending and twisting metal were commonplace in the 18th and 
19th centuries. 
Today, however, with commercial hardware stores in many 
malls, the sounds of an operating blacksmiths shop are pretty 
much relegated to the past. 
Or, maybe not, thanks to a new course offered at the Nova 
Scotia Community College. 
Most Nova Scotians under 60 have never heard the clang! 
tink, tink, tink! of a blacksmith at work. But a new course 
offered at the Nova Scotia Community College promises to 
introduce a new generation to the piercing, but once-familiar, 
sound.
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News Style Guide: 
It's tempting to start a longer piece with some 
scene-setting and a few rhetorical flourishes. 
This is called "throat clearing" and is the product 
of an age when a newspaper article was 
something to be settled into gently, like favorite 
armchair.
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"The place between 500 and 
800 words is the place you don't 
want to be. 
It's not short and fast and 
focused and shareable, [and] 
it's not long enough to be a real 
payoff for readers." 
Kevin Delaney, president 
& editor-in-chief
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Nielsens Recommendations 
for Web Pages 
6) Graphical elements  tables, charts, 
photos, maps  help people absorb 
information 
7) Casual language, sentence fragments 
work fine 
8) Hypertext links aid credibility
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A Newspaper Story
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An Online Story
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Nielsens Research 
(Mobile Devices, 2009) 
Observing user suffering during our 
sessions reminded us of the very first 
usability studies we did with traditional 
websites in 1994. 
It was that bad."
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Nielsens Research 
(Mobile Phones, 2009) 
Poor experience because: 
 Small screens 
 Awkward input 
 Slow download 
 Sites not designed for 
mobile 
APPLE
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Nielsens Research 
(Tablets, 2011) 
1. Readtap asymmetry 
for websites 
2. Touchable areas were 
too small in many apps 
3. Accidental activation a big 
problem 
4. Low discoverability 
5. Users disliked typing 
APPLE
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Nielsens Recommendations 
for Headlines 
 The Issue: They are often displayed on 
their own, out of context
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Nielsens Recommendations 
for Headlines 
On the eve of a new show at the Museum of Modern Art that 
celebrates his seminal works, legendary multimedia artist 
Michael Snow talks to Sarah Milroy about his heady, 
experimental days in New York.
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Nielsens Recommendations 
for Headlines (& Subheads) 
1. Make it short & clear 
2. No teasers 
3. Write in plain 
language: no puns, 
no "cute" or "clever" 
headlines.
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Exercise 
http://goo.gl/75XKI0
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Headlines: Writing For SEO
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Headlines: Writing For SEO 
Military coffee supplier to take on Starbucks
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Headlines: Writing For SEO 
In headlines or meta descriptions: 
 Must contain searchable keywords 
 Plain, common words
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Headlines: Writing For SEO
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Writing Hypertext Links 
1. They are recommendations 
2. By nature they signify importance 
3. They build trust with readers by 
making the reporting transparent 
4. They allow readers to further their own 
interest
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Writing Hypertext Links
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Writing Hypertext Links 
 Chronicle Herald: 
Liberals vow to cut wait times, add 
family doctors
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Writing Hypertext Links
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Writing Hypertext Links
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Writing Hypertext Links
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Writing Hypertext Links
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Writing Hypertext Links
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Writing Hypertext Links
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Writing Hypertext Links 
 Three to five words 
Link to: 
 Official websites: 
products or organizations 
 Announcements 
(news release or report) 
 Related stories 
 Facts: statistics or 
comments
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Writing Hypertext Links 
 Indicate if content is other than a web 
page (Eg. PDF, video)
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Writing Hypertext Links 
Click here to read the advisory groups report. 
Better: 
The advisory group released its Recommendations for 
Waterfront Renewal (PDF) Tuesday. 
Check out this site for more information. 
The Heritage Trust of Nova Scotia has a list of 
properties it considers threatened by development.
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Writing Hypertext Links
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Writing Hypertext Links
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Writing for Social Media 
1. Keep it short
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Writing for Social Media 
2. Include links
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Writing for Social Media 
3. Make language casual
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Writing for Social Media 
4. Focus on action: 
 Watch the video clip 
 Follow it live 
 Read the full story 
 View the picture gallery
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Writing for Social Media 
4. Find the 
Nugget 
of Social
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Writing for Social Media
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Writing for Social Media 
In a news story, what is the Nugget of 
Social? 
1. A surprising fact 
2. A vivid quote that humanizes the story 
3. An issue or challenge that resonates
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Exercise: Whats the 
Nugget of Social? 
http://goo.gl/zZIWGT
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Writing for Social Media
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Writing for Social Media
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Writing for Social Media
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Exercise: Whats the Tweet? 
http://goo.gl/QqpWpC

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  • 2. ONLINE WRITING 2 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Online Writing 1. Structure 2. Links 3. Headlines & SEO 4. Social Media
  • 3. ONLINE WRITING 3 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Jakob Nielsen: He researches usability: how people consume content online At Sun Microsystems he investigated how people interacted with their computers He authored a 1997 landmark study on Web usability NIELSEN NORMAN GROUP
  • 4. ONLINE WRITING 4 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Nielsens Research Reading online is different from reading on paper (1997): Most people dont read online they scan Only 16% read a page word for word 79% of readers scan a page first Reading online is 25% slower than reading on paper
  • 5. ONLINE WRITING 5 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Research By Nielsens Peers Stanford University/ Poynter Institute EyeTracker studies (2000 & 2004): Eyes go to text first Briefs/teasers are popular A headline has less than 1 sec. of a site visitor's attention STANFORD UNIVERSITY
  • 6. ONLINE WRITING 6 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Nielsens Research People dont want to read a lot online. Why? Body position Eyestrain Many web pages are authored for print Its difficult to judge the end of the story The web is action-driven. People love to click
  • 7. ONLINE WRITING 7 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Nielsens Recommendations for Web Pages Text should be scannable: 1) Highlighted keywords
  • 8. ONLINE WRITING 8 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Quartz: Everything that led to Colorados record-breaking flood, and why it will only get worse
  • 9. ONLINE WRITING 9 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Nielsens Recommendations for Web Pages Text should be scannable: 2) At least two levels of headlines
  • 10. ONLINE WRITING 10 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Toronto Star: Costa Concordia: Italian agency gives final OK to right cruise ship after checking weather conditions
  • 11. ONLINE WRITING 11 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS
  • 12. ONLINE WRITING 12 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Nielsens Recommendations for Web Pages Text should be scannable: 3) Bulleted lists
  • 13. ONLINE WRITING 13 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Globe and Mail: Unemployment, grim public housing fueling riots in Stockholm
  • 14. ONLINE WRITING 14 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS
  • 15. ONLINE WRITING 15 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Toronto Star: 10 fees you should avoid
  • 16. ONLINE WRITING 16 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Buzzfeed: 20 Uniquely Brilliant Business Cards Buzzfeed: The Day Lehman Died
  • 17. ONLINE WRITING 17 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS
  • 18. ONLINE WRITING 18 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Nielsens Recommendations for Web Pages 4) One idea per paragraph; no more than three sentences in each 5) Inverted pyramid style 6)Write 50% less than you would in print on each page
  • 19. ONLINE WRITING 19 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Clang! Creak! Tink, tink, tink tink. TING! In days past the sounds of a blacksmiths shop were among the most distinctive noises found in towns and villages across North America. The sounds of village smithy pounding, bending and twisting metal were commonplace in the 18th and 19th centuries. Today, however, with commercial hardware stores in many malls, the sounds of an operating blacksmiths shop are pretty much relegated to the past. Or, maybe not, thanks to a new course offered at the Nova Scotia Community College. Most Nova Scotians under 60 have never heard the clang! tink, tink, tink! of a blacksmith at work. But a new course offered at the Nova Scotia Community College promises to introduce a new generation to the piercing, but once-familiar, sound.
  • 20. ONLINE WRITING 20 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS News Style Guide: It's tempting to start a longer piece with some scene-setting and a few rhetorical flourishes. This is called "throat clearing" and is the product of an age when a newspaper article was something to be settled into gently, like favorite armchair.
  • 21. ONLINE WRITING 21 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS "The place between 500 and 800 words is the place you don't want to be. It's not short and fast and focused and shareable, [and] it's not long enough to be a real payoff for readers." Kevin Delaney, president & editor-in-chief
  • 22. ONLINE WRITING 22 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Nielsens Recommendations for Web Pages 6) Graphical elements tables, charts, photos, maps help people absorb information 7) Casual language, sentence fragments work fine 8) Hypertext links aid credibility
  • 23. ONLINE WRITING 23 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS A Newspaper Story
  • 24. ONLINE WRITING 24 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS An Online Story
  • 25. ONLINE WRITING 25 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Nielsens Research (Mobile Devices, 2009) Observing user suffering during our sessions reminded us of the very first usability studies we did with traditional websites in 1994. It was that bad."
  • 26. ONLINE WRITING 26 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Nielsens Research (Mobile Phones, 2009) Poor experience because: Small screens Awkward input Slow download Sites not designed for mobile APPLE
  • 27. ONLINE WRITING 27 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Nielsens Research (Tablets, 2011) 1. Readtap asymmetry for websites 2. Touchable areas were too small in many apps 3. Accidental activation a big problem 4. Low discoverability 5. Users disliked typing APPLE
  • 28. ONLINE WRITING 28 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS
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  • 30. ONLINE WRITING 30 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS
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  • 33. ONLINE WRITING 33 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS
  • 34. ONLINE WRITING 34 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS
  • 35. ONLINE WRITING 35 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Nielsens Recommendations for Headlines The Issue: They are often displayed on their own, out of context
  • 36. ONLINE WRITING 36 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Nielsens Recommendations for Headlines On the eve of a new show at the Museum of Modern Art that celebrates his seminal works, legendary multimedia artist Michael Snow talks to Sarah Milroy about his heady, experimental days in New York.
  • 37. ONLINE WRITING 37 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS
  • 38. ONLINE WRITING 38 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS
  • 39. ONLINE WRITING 39 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Nielsens Recommendations for Headlines (& Subheads) 1. Make it short & clear 2. No teasers 3. Write in plain language: no puns, no "cute" or "clever" headlines.
  • 40. ONLINE WRITING 40 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Exercise http://goo.gl/75XKI0
  • 41. ONLINE WRITING 41 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Headlines: Writing For SEO
  • 42. ONLINE WRITING 42 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Headlines: Writing For SEO Military coffee supplier to take on Starbucks
  • 43. ONLINE WRITING 43 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Headlines: Writing For SEO In headlines or meta descriptions: Must contain searchable keywords Plain, common words
  • 44. ONLINE WRITING 44 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Headlines: Writing For SEO
  • 45. ONLINE WRITING 45 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing Hypertext Links 1. They are recommendations 2. By nature they signify importance 3. They build trust with readers by making the reporting transparent 4. They allow readers to further their own interest
  • 46. ONLINE WRITING 46 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing Hypertext Links
  • 47. ONLINE WRITING 47 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing Hypertext Links Chronicle Herald: Liberals vow to cut wait times, add family doctors
  • 48. ONLINE WRITING 48 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing Hypertext Links
  • 49. ONLINE WRITING 49 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing Hypertext Links
  • 50. ONLINE WRITING 50 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing Hypertext Links
  • 51. ONLINE WRITING 51 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing Hypertext Links
  • 52. ONLINE WRITING 52 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing Hypertext Links
  • 53. ONLINE WRITING 53 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing Hypertext Links
  • 54. ONLINE WRITING 54 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing Hypertext Links
  • 55. ONLINE WRITING 55 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing Hypertext Links Three to five words Link to: Official websites: products or organizations Announcements (news release or report) Related stories Facts: statistics or comments
  • 56. ONLINE WRITING 56 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing Hypertext Links Indicate if content is other than a web page (Eg. PDF, video)
  • 57. ONLINE WRITING 57 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing Hypertext Links Click here to read the advisory groups report. Better: The advisory group released its Recommendations for Waterfront Renewal (PDF) Tuesday. Check out this site for more information. The Heritage Trust of Nova Scotia has a list of properties it considers threatened by development.
  • 58. ONLINE WRITING 58 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing Hypertext Links
  • 59. ONLINE WRITING 59 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing Hypertext Links
  • 60. ONLINE WRITING 60 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing for Social Media 1. Keep it short
  • 61. ONLINE WRITING 61 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing for Social Media 2. Include links
  • 62. ONLINE WRITING 62 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing for Social Media 3. Make language casual
  • 63. ONLINE WRITING 63 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing for Social Media 4. Focus on action: Watch the video clip Follow it live Read the full story View the picture gallery
  • 64. ONLINE WRITING 64 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing for Social Media 4. Find the Nugget of Social
  • 65. ONLINE WRITING 65 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing for Social Media
  • 66. ONLINE WRITING 66 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing for Social Media In a news story, what is the Nugget of Social? 1. A surprising fact 2. A vivid quote that humanizes the story 3. An issue or challenge that resonates
  • 67. ONLINE WRITING 67 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Exercise: Whats the Nugget of Social? http://goo.gl/zZIWGT
  • 68. ONLINE WRITING 68 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS
  • 69. ONLINE WRITING 69 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing for Social Media
  • 70. ONLINE WRITING 70 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing for Social Media
  • 71. ONLINE WRITING 71 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Writing for Social Media
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  • 74. ONLINE WRITING 74 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS
  • 75. ONLINE WRITING 75 JOUR 5153: REPORTING, WRITING & EDITING THE NEWS Exercise: Whats the Tweet? http://goo.gl/QqpWpC

Editor's Notes

  1. Participant in Nielsen study (1997):If Im not doing something, I dont feel like I am being productive.
  2. HeadDeckImageCaptionLede
  3. Narrative story with items grouped together
  4. Listicles!Applicability to news? Not always
  5. ListicleStory is purposefully written as a list
  6. Re: BuzzFeed We thought Nielsens idea about bullet lists could only apply to textBut visual bullet lists work great.Can news be done in lists? (The Day Lehman Died)BuzzFeed Adds Politico Writer Ben Smith
  7. HUffPost
  8. So this original research was (relatively) conducted in the stone age. What about today?July 2009iPhone weather (easy)What time is this movie playing at your local theatre (it took participants AGES)Cant get anything done!Apps helpShow Google Now on iPhone?
  9. Fat finger problem
  10. 2 years later Content that was large enough to read but too small to tap.Xx3.particularly in apps lacking a Back button.4. People didn't know what was touchable5. avoided the registration process
  11. What is it? Content that is reused in different forms
  12. Heres a page from the Chronicle Herald.Clever!: millionaires / power execs? Get it?
  13. Yes, indeed, people with money tend to have influence.And The point?(its lost without the visual reference to Emera)
  14. Teasers see red circleNielsen:Microcontent needs to be pearls of clarity: you get 40-60 characters to explain your macrocontent.
  15. Search vs socialLike our Globe headline earlier, the headline makes sense w/ a photo.But weve got another problem no keywords
  16. Search engines pay attention to headings in HTML an h1 or h2 tagAlso What is it?Getting ranked higherAvoid politically correct language1) We might say visually challenged no no one searches for that.
  17. Get it? Connie Francis song (1958): Whos sorry now?But the keywords dont need to be be visible on the page -- in the deck or second-tier headline -- in order to be usefulTake a look at the blurb n this Googl result: Why globalization is no threat to this gorgeous Indian outlitWhere did Google get the text for its description?Its called a meta tag and its a second Rendered as what Google calls a snippet
  18. Think its changed?Sept. 15, 2013Why not a link to the party platforms?
  19. This linked text is not great.Where does the link look like its going?[next page] lets see where it actually goes .
  20. Not about How to build engagement How Facebook and Twitter work how the FB algorithm worksOr about what kind of content works best in social mediaWish I could but Some basic guidelines:
  21. FB:VideoImageLinktext
  22. Bradshaw examplesIts not about reading its about doing
  23. Ottawa Citizen columnistTheres a nugget of detail that attracts conversationOften its not the headlineWhy?: I know how much orange juice costs!F-35 fighter jets $30 billion? $100 billion?
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  25. This is a story from a couple of week earlier on the same topic.Take a look at the headline Now see what the social snippet is:
  26. Emotion does well in soclal mediaSocial is about youGood is a positive emotionWeb headline is longer than the tweet
  27. Heres someone whoMichael Babadstark naked!!Greece in chaosInsolvencyI always click on his Globe headline in my email box.I can almost Sometimes Im disappointed but I always clickGreat story in the NYT yesterday about Business InsiderGreat headlines like housing disaster often not accurate.What do you think?
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