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By Theo Ferguson and Daniel Lio
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What does the protagonist face that causes conflict?
An imaginary Poppy announces shes pregnant which upsets Sweet as he doesnt think hes ready to be a dad. This causes conflict between the two characters. Poppy then leaves the caf辿 upset after an argument with Sweet about him not wanting the child.
How do these escalate in complexity/Intensity?
Sweet tries to apologise although Poppy doesnt want to know. Sweets character is trying to normalise the situation and trying to get rid of the conflict. In Sweets desperate attempts he offers things such as crisps and a cup of tea. After Poppy refuses to have sex with him Sweets efforts to seduce her fail, resulting in him begging her for sex which again fails.
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Sweets character admits that his relationship is failing then meets new love Daisy and begins dating her despite him already having a girlfriend showing that Sweet is desperate. Sweet finds out Poppy wasnt really pregnant and gets back with her, but then becomes greedy when and continues having sex with Daisy too.
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Sweet, Poppy and Daisy end up having a three way happy relationship. Everything seems like its going well. Daisy and poppy get too intimate for Sweet . Poppy and Daisy dump Sweet and get together as a couple making Sweet very upset and angry and making the audience feel sad for.
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An angry Sweet blame Stitch for his failed relationship and hits him. Sweet learns that Stitch fancies him and they end up getting becoming lovers.

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Analysis of narrative structure in a short narrative

  • 1. By Theo Ferguson and Daniel Lio
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  • 4. What does the protagonist face that causes conflict?
  • 5. An imaginary Poppy announces shes pregnant which upsets Sweet as he doesnt think hes ready to be a dad. This causes conflict between the two characters. Poppy then leaves the caf辿 upset after an argument with Sweet about him not wanting the child.
  • 6. How do these escalate in complexity/Intensity?
  • 7. Sweet tries to apologise although Poppy doesnt want to know. Sweets character is trying to normalise the situation and trying to get rid of the conflict. In Sweets desperate attempts he offers things such as crisps and a cup of tea. After Poppy refuses to have sex with him Sweets efforts to seduce her fail, resulting in him begging her for sex which again fails.
  • 8.
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  • 11. Sweets character admits that his relationship is failing then meets new love Daisy and begins dating her despite him already having a girlfriend showing that Sweet is desperate. Sweet finds out Poppy wasnt really pregnant and gets back with her, but then becomes greedy when and continues having sex with Daisy too.
  • 12.
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  • 15. Sweet, Poppy and Daisy end up having a three way happy relationship. Everything seems like its going well. Daisy and poppy get too intimate for Sweet . Poppy and Daisy dump Sweet and get together as a couple making Sweet very upset and angry and making the audience feel sad for.
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  • 17. An angry Sweet blame Stitch for his failed relationship and hits him. Sweet learns that Stitch fancies him and they end up getting becoming lovers.

Editor's Notes

  • #4: Meets poppy, gets in a relationship with her.
  • #8: Being extra nice to her to not make things in the realtionship worse.
  • #10: Masturbates, gives up
  • #12: Sweets character admits that his relationship fails then meets new love Daisy and begins dating her despite him already having a girlfriend. This shows that Sweets character knows his relationship
  • #14: Stitch tells Daisy Sweet is cheating. Angry Daisy catches them having sex and confronts him.
  • #16: Sweets character admits that his relationship fails then meets new love Daisy and begins dating her despite him already having a girlfriend. This shows that Sweets character knows his relationship
  • #18: Sweets character admits that his relationship fails then meets new love Daisy and begins dating her despite him already having a girlfriend. This shows that Sweets character knows his relationship