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Ranju Shrestha

This document appears to be a graded assignment submission for a course on ethical decision making. The 3,231 word essay discusses a case study involving a patient who suffered a cardiac arrest. The submission received an overall grade of 23/30. The instructor provided positive feedback, noting the clear writing and demonstration of principles. However, they suggested linking the discussion of teamwork more closely to how it could have improved the scenario for the patient, staff, and family.

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Shrestha, 220118916, HSNS566, Ethical decision making.pdf by Ranju Shrestha FILE TIME SUBMITTED 22-AUG-2016 11:16PM SUBMISSION ID 697251824 WORD COUNT 3231 CHARACTER COUNT 18811 80721_RANJU_SHRESTHA_SHRESTHA__220118916__HSNS566__ET HICAL_DECISION_MAKING_959183_382355938.PDF (275.57K)
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I would have liked to have seen these discussions linked more closely to the case throughout this section rather than just linked here at the end
some good references Ranju
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QM QM QM FINAL GRADE 23/30 Shrestha, 220118916, HSNS566, Ethical decision making.pdf GRADEMARK REPORT GENERAL COMMENTS Instructor Ranju, a good assignment-you write clearly and have demonstrated a good understanding of the principles that apply in the case. Good use of current ref erences to support your work. I would have liked to have seen your discussion in the last section on teamwork more closely linked specif ically to the scenario and how things could have been improved f or this patient and the staf f and the f amily. I have moderated this paper and agree with the overall comments and grade - sally PAGE 1 PAGE 2 Expression Expression Text Comment. will Strikethrough. Awk. Awkward: The expression or construction is cumbersome or dif f icult to read. Consider rewriting. Text Comment. of Comment 2 why -explain why this is the case Text Comment. of an ACD Good Good point
QM QM QM QM QM QM QM QM QM Text Comment. been PAGE 3 Text Comment. service Text Comment. the Good Good point Text Comment. ess Text Comment. s Text Comment. theref ore what principle was applied here by the paramedics? Good Good point Good Good point Good Good point Comment 3 that is assuming that the ACD was lodged with the health service -it may not have been PAGE 4 Good Good point Good Good point Good Good point Good Good point Good Good point
QM QM QM PAGE 5 Good Good point Comment 4 how could this have been achieved-provide a strategy to illustrate PAGE 6 Comment 5 so apply this discussion above more specif ically to the case? Comment 6 good point but make the relevance to this case Good Good point PAGE 7 Good Good point Comment 7 shared decision making, f amily conf rences Text Comment. I would have liked to have seen these discussions linked more closely to the case throughout this section rather than just linked here at the end PAGE 8 Text Comment. some good ref erences Ranju PAGE 9 PAGE 10 PAGE 11

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  • 1. Shrestha, 220118916, HSNS566, Ethical decision making.pdf by Ranju Shrestha FILE TIME SUBMITTED 22-AUG-2016 11:16PM SUBMISSION ID 697251824 WORD COUNT 3231 CHARACTER COUNT 18811 80721_RANJU_SHRESTHA_SHRESTHA__220118916__HSNS566__ET HICAL_DECISION_MAKING_959183_382355938.PDF (275.57K)
  • 4. servicethe esss therefore what principle was applied here by the paramedics?
  • 8. I would have liked to have seen these discussions linked more closely to the case throughout this section rather than just linked here at the end
  • 13. QM QM QM FINAL GRADE 23/30 Shrestha, 220118916, HSNS566, Ethical decision making.pdf GRADEMARK REPORT GENERAL COMMENTS Instructor Ranju, a good assignment-you write clearly and have demonstrated a good understanding of the principles that apply in the case. Good use of current ref erences to support your work. I would have liked to have seen your discussion in the last section on teamwork more closely linked specif ically to the scenario and how things could have been improved f or this patient and the staf f and the f amily. I have moderated this paper and agree with the overall comments and grade - sally PAGE 1 PAGE 2 Expression Expression Text Comment. will Strikethrough. Awk. Awkward: The expression or construction is cumbersome or dif f icult to read. Consider rewriting. Text Comment. of Comment 2 why -explain why this is the case Text Comment. of an ACD Good Good point
  • 14. QM QM QM QM QM QM QM QM QM Text Comment. been PAGE 3 Text Comment. service Text Comment. the Good Good point Text Comment. ess Text Comment. s Text Comment. theref ore what principle was applied here by the paramedics? Good Good point Good Good point Good Good point Comment 3 that is assuming that the ACD was lodged with the health service -it may not have been PAGE 4 Good Good point Good Good point Good Good point Good Good point Good Good point
  • 15. QM QM QM PAGE 5 Good Good point Comment 4 how could this have been achieved-provide a strategy to illustrate PAGE 6 Comment 5 so apply this discussion above more specif ically to the case? Comment 6 good point but make the relevance to this case Good Good point PAGE 7 Good Good point Comment 7 shared decision making, f amily conf rences Text Comment. I would have liked to have seen these discussions linked more closely to the case throughout this section rather than just linked here at the end PAGE 8 Text Comment. some good ref erences Ranju PAGE 9 PAGE 10 PAGE 11