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August 15th, 2015
Agree- disagree essay
Health
August 15 model essays
New words
1.Owing to : because of
 Ex: The concert was cancelled owing to lack of
support.
 2. cause (n) reason
 Ex: Hes never given me any cause for concern.
 3. deteriorate (v) become worse
 Ex: She was taken to hospital last week when
her condition suddenly deteriorated.
 4. counteract (v) reduce or remove the effect
of sth unwanted by producing the opposite
effect
 Ex: Drinking a lot of water counteracts the
dehydrating effects of hot weather.
 5. sedentary (adj) involving little exercise and
physical activity
 EX : My doctor days I should start playing
sports because my lifestyle is too sedentary.
Advantage- disadvantage essay
Topic: language
August 15 model essays
Solution essay
August 15 model essays
 Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been
free to use it. Some people think that it
should be illegal to use it comparing with
other drugs. To what extent do you agree or
disagree? What is your opinion?
Introduction
 Every year, thousands of people worldwide die
from both smoking tobacco and involuntarily
breathing it in. Despite this, I do not agree
that it should be made illegal. However, I also
believe that there should be a regulation on
its use, considering its harms to health. In the
following paragraphs, I shall put forth my
arguments to support my views.
Body paragraph 1
 It is irrefutable that tobacco products, especially
cigarettes, could cause lung cancer, heart disease,
and other illnesses. Drug abuse also has many
potentially harmful effects not only on individuals
but also on family, friends, work and society.
Frequent drug users may turn to crime to meet
the increasing expense for their habit. Continued
drug use may cause personality changes. Some
users lose interest in school or work, or have
difficulty meeting the responsibilities of a job or
family.
Body paragraph 2
 Nonetheless, it costs society far more to prohibit a
drug than it does to regulate it. And Im not talking
about just money. Prohibition creates organized crime,
and with it you get street wars, and police corruption.
With more violence comes more police, and that
means more cost. Regulation on the other hand, works
quite well. The government should decide who gets to
make it, who sells it, and who it is sold to. There should
be controls on tobacco regarding potency, packaging,
advertising, and a lot of other things. This is definitely
better than banning a drug which leads to organized
crime.
Body paragraph 3
 Moreover, tobacco has long been a source of
money for the governments in many
countries. This income comes from taxes on
the manufactured products. Excise taxes also
come from tobacco that arrives from other
countries. Finally, I believe that it is better to
educate people about the harms of tobacco.
This approach has worked better in many
countries and there has been a reduction in
the sale of tobacco products
conclusion
 In conclusion, I pen down saying that, banning
tobacco is not a good idea. Drug prohibition
has been the most failed social policy and
banning tobacco is a step backwards.
However, there should be control on the
manufacturing and sale of tobacco.

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August 15 model essays

  • 4. New words 1.Owing to : because of Ex: The concert was cancelled owing to lack of support. 2. cause (n) reason Ex: Hes never given me any cause for concern. 3. deteriorate (v) become worse Ex: She was taken to hospital last week when her condition suddenly deteriorated.
  • 5. 4. counteract (v) reduce or remove the effect of sth unwanted by producing the opposite effect Ex: Drinking a lot of water counteracts the dehydrating effects of hot weather. 5. sedentary (adj) involving little exercise and physical activity EX : My doctor days I should start playing sports because my lifestyle is too sedentary.
  • 10. Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been free to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it comparing with other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?
  • 11. Introduction Every year, thousands of people worldwide die from both smoking tobacco and involuntarily breathing it in. Despite this, I do not agree that it should be made illegal. However, I also believe that there should be a regulation on its use, considering its harms to health. In the following paragraphs, I shall put forth my arguments to support my views.
  • 12. Body paragraph 1 It is irrefutable that tobacco products, especially cigarettes, could cause lung cancer, heart disease, and other illnesses. Drug abuse also has many potentially harmful effects not only on individuals but also on family, friends, work and society. Frequent drug users may turn to crime to meet the increasing expense for their habit. Continued drug use may cause personality changes. Some users lose interest in school or work, or have difficulty meeting the responsibilities of a job or family.
  • 13. Body paragraph 2 Nonetheless, it costs society far more to prohibit a drug than it does to regulate it. And Im not talking about just money. Prohibition creates organized crime, and with it you get street wars, and police corruption. With more violence comes more police, and that means more cost. Regulation on the other hand, works quite well. The government should decide who gets to make it, who sells it, and who it is sold to. There should be controls on tobacco regarding potency, packaging, advertising, and a lot of other things. This is definitely better than banning a drug which leads to organized crime.
  • 14. Body paragraph 3 Moreover, tobacco has long been a source of money for the governments in many countries. This income comes from taxes on the manufactured products. Excise taxes also come from tobacco that arrives from other countries. Finally, I believe that it is better to educate people about the harms of tobacco. This approach has worked better in many countries and there has been a reduction in the sale of tobacco products
  • 15. conclusion In conclusion, I pen down saying that, banning tobacco is not a good idea. Drug prohibition has been the most failed social policy and banning tobacco is a step backwards. However, there should be control on the manufacturing and sale of tobacco.