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Writing a body
paragraph
YUELI AP5b or Pre-DY
By: Louise Lee
The structure
1. Topic Sentence
2a. Major detail
2b. Minor detail
3.
Concluding/tra
nsition sentence
Sample Paragraph
1. The health concerns of developing countries are
different from those of the developed world. 2. In the
developed world, the greatest concerns are heart
diseases and cancer. 3. In developing
countries, however, infectious diseases and child
healthcare area are the greatest concerns. 4.
According to research, in developing
countries, almost 37 percent of those who died were
children below the age of 7, while, In the developed
world, child deaths were only 3 percent of the total. 5.
Despite the different concerns, both the developed
and developing countries tend to focus on treatment
rather than prevention.
The structure
Topic Sentence
 Health concerns
Major Detail
o In the developed world: heart disease and cancer.
o In developing countries infectious diseases and child
healthcare area
Minor Detail:
o 37 percent of those who died were children below
the age of 7
o 3 percent child deaths
Transition sentence
o :focus on treatment rather than prevention.
Practice
For topic sentence and supporting detail practice, go
to http://www3.pef.uni-lj.si/~tuji-
jeziki/rp/1_letnik/exercises_on_paragraph_writing.pdf
References
 Pakenham, K. J. (2010) Making Connections: A
Strategic Approach to Academic Writing.
Cambridge university press.
 Essays are a piece of cake (n.d.) Jefferson County
High School. Retrieved from: http://jc-
schools.net/write/cake.htm
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Body paragraph 5b pre dy

  • 1. Writing a body paragraph YUELI AP5b or Pre-DY By: Louise Lee
  • 2. The structure 1. Topic Sentence 2a. Major detail 2b. Minor detail 3. Concluding/tra nsition sentence
  • 3. Sample Paragraph 1. The health concerns of developing countries are different from those of the developed world. 2. In the developed world, the greatest concerns are heart diseases and cancer. 3. In developing countries, however, infectious diseases and child healthcare area are the greatest concerns. 4. According to research, in developing countries, almost 37 percent of those who died were children below the age of 7, while, In the developed world, child deaths were only 3 percent of the total. 5. Despite the different concerns, both the developed and developing countries tend to focus on treatment rather than prevention.
  • 4. The structure Topic Sentence Health concerns Major Detail o In the developed world: heart disease and cancer. o In developing countries infectious diseases and child healthcare area Minor Detail: o 37 percent of those who died were children below the age of 7 o 3 percent child deaths Transition sentence o :focus on treatment rather than prevention.
  • 5. Practice For topic sentence and supporting detail practice, go to http://www3.pef.uni-lj.si/~tuji- jeziki/rp/1_letnik/exercises_on_paragraph_writing.pdf
  • 6. References Pakenham, K. J. (2010) Making Connections: A Strategic Approach to Academic Writing. Cambridge university press. Essays are a piece of cake (n.d.) Jefferson County High School. Retrieved from: http://jc- schools.net/write/cake.htm