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Create usable writing 
Mindy Messenger 
@messemi
¡°Content strategy plans for the creation, 
publication, and governance of useful, usable 
content.¡± 
Kristina Halvorson
What is usable content?
Good web writing 
? Is like a conversation 
? Answers people¡¯s questions 
? Lets people ¡°grab and go¡± 
Ginny Redish 
Letting Go of the Words
Omit needless words 
Strunk & White 
The Elements of Style 
Tip 1:
¡°A sentence should contain no unnecessary 
words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, 
for the same reason that a drawing should have 
no unnecessary lines and a machine no 
unnecessary parts.¡± 
Strunk & White 
The Elements of Style
¡°I find I have no trouble getting rid of half the 
words on most Web pages without losing 
anything of value.¡± 
Steve Krug 
Don't Make Me Think: A Common Sense Approach to Web Usability
Clarity, brevity, and structure apply to all good 
writing.
Watch for qualifiers 
? very 
? really 
? just 
? quite 
? maybe 
? slightly 
? a bit 
? somewhat 
? perhaps
Watch for prepositions 
? of 
? in 
? to 
? for 
? with 
? on 
? at 
? from 
? by 
? about
Watch for adverbs 
? boldly 
? cheerfully 
? dramatically 
? happily 
? inquisitively 
? politely 
? quickly 
? rarely 
? silently 
? warmly
Watch for passive voice 
Passive 
? At dinner, six fish were eaten by the turtle. 
? The bike was repaired by Sarah. 
Active 
? The turtle ate six fish. 
? Sarah repaired the bike.
Make your copy 
scannable 
Tip 2: 
¨CSteve Krug 
Don't Make Me Think: A Common Sense Approach to Web Usability
Steve Krug 
Don't Make Me Think: A Common Sense Approach to Web Usability
¡°Eyetracking visualizations show that users often 
read Web pages in an F-shaped pattern.¡± 
Jakob Nielsen 
http://www.nngroup.com/articles/f-shaped-pattern-reading-web-content/
This implies 
? Visitors don¡¯t often read word by word 
? Important info should be first 
? Headings, paragraphs, and bullet points should 
start with key words
We live in a world where good Web content is 
chunky content.
Chunky checklist 
? Use headings and subheadings 
? Put important info first 
? Shorten sentences and paragraphs 
? Use bulleted or numbered lists
Isla McKetta, Moz 
http://moz.com/blog/evaluate-content-quality-the-easy-way
Test readability 
Tip 3: 
¨CSteve Krug 
Don't Make Me Think: A Common Sense Approach to Web Usability
Reading ease tests 
readability-score.com 
Thanks for the text, Hipster Ipsum! 
http://hipsum.co/
Formulas all the way down 
Flesch-Kincaid grade level 
Gunning fog index 
Automated Readability Index
Cloze test 
Cloze test generator: http://l.georges.online.fr/tools/cloze.html
Cloze test 
Stephen Hawking 
A Brief History of Time
Bonus tip: 
Write for your 
responsive theme
In a responsive theme, it becomes more 
important to chunk your content into shorter 
paragraphs with headings.
Responsive checklist 
? Preview in phone and tablet sizes 
? Use compressed images 
? Avoid tables 
? Make your content chunky
Tip 4: 
Measure & assess 
¨CSteve Krug 
Don't Make Me Think: A Common Sense Approach to Web Usability
Know your analytics
And your social metrics 
Source: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/SharePoint_Dashboard
Measure your content based on metrics you deem 
important. 
Then try something new and measure again.
Understand the rules, 
then break them 
Tip 5:
Thank you! 
Follow up questions welcome: 
@messemi 
mlm3@uw.edu

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Create usable writing

  • 1. Create usable writing Mindy Messenger @messemi
  • 2. ¡°Content strategy plans for the creation, publication, and governance of useful, usable content.¡± Kristina Halvorson
  • 3. What is usable content?
  • 4. Good web writing ? Is like a conversation ? Answers people¡¯s questions ? Lets people ¡°grab and go¡± Ginny Redish Letting Go of the Words
  • 5. Omit needless words Strunk & White The Elements of Style Tip 1:
  • 6. ¡°A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts.¡± Strunk & White The Elements of Style
  • 7. ¡°I find I have no trouble getting rid of half the words on most Web pages without losing anything of value.¡± Steve Krug Don't Make Me Think: A Common Sense Approach to Web Usability
  • 8. Clarity, brevity, and structure apply to all good writing.
  • 9. Watch for qualifiers ? very ? really ? just ? quite ? maybe ? slightly ? a bit ? somewhat ? perhaps
  • 10. Watch for prepositions ? of ? in ? to ? for ? with ? on ? at ? from ? by ? about
  • 11. Watch for adverbs ? boldly ? cheerfully ? dramatically ? happily ? inquisitively ? politely ? quickly ? rarely ? silently ? warmly
  • 12. Watch for passive voice Passive ? At dinner, six fish were eaten by the turtle. ? The bike was repaired by Sarah. Active ? The turtle ate six fish. ? Sarah repaired the bike.
  • 13. Make your copy scannable Tip 2: ¨CSteve Krug Don't Make Me Think: A Common Sense Approach to Web Usability
  • 14. Steve Krug Don't Make Me Think: A Common Sense Approach to Web Usability
  • 15. ¡°Eyetracking visualizations show that users often read Web pages in an F-shaped pattern.¡± Jakob Nielsen http://www.nngroup.com/articles/f-shaped-pattern-reading-web-content/
  • 16. This implies ? Visitors don¡¯t often read word by word ? Important info should be first ? Headings, paragraphs, and bullet points should start with key words
  • 17. We live in a world where good Web content is chunky content.
  • 18. Chunky checklist ? Use headings and subheadings ? Put important info first ? Shorten sentences and paragraphs ? Use bulleted or numbered lists
  • 19. Isla McKetta, Moz http://moz.com/blog/evaluate-content-quality-the-easy-way
  • 20. Test readability Tip 3: ¨CSteve Krug Don't Make Me Think: A Common Sense Approach to Web Usability
  • 21. Reading ease tests readability-score.com Thanks for the text, Hipster Ipsum! http://hipsum.co/
  • 22. Formulas all the way down Flesch-Kincaid grade level Gunning fog index Automated Readability Index
  • 23. Cloze test Cloze test generator: http://l.georges.online.fr/tools/cloze.html
  • 24. Cloze test Stephen Hawking A Brief History of Time
  • 25. Bonus tip: Write for your responsive theme
  • 26. In a responsive theme, it becomes more important to chunk your content into shorter paragraphs with headings.
  • 27. Responsive checklist ? Preview in phone and tablet sizes ? Use compressed images ? Avoid tables ? Make your content chunky
  • 28. Tip 4: Measure & assess ¨CSteve Krug Don't Make Me Think: A Common Sense Approach to Web Usability
  • 30. And your social metrics Source: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/SharePoint_Dashboard
  • 31. Measure your content based on metrics you deem important. Then try something new and measure again.
  • 32. Understand the rules, then break them Tip 5:
  • 33. Thank you! Follow up questions welcome: @messemi mlm3@uw.edu

Editor's Notes

  • #5: It¡¯s a conversation, ¡°not rambling but focused conversation started by a busy person¡± People come to your site because they are looking for information that helps them make a decision or complete a task easy to find and easy to understand accurate, up to date and credible Grab & go means they can read pieces and get what they need without needing to read an entire manual
  • #8: Krug recommends removing half the words, though he admits that saying ¡°half¡± is just his way of being ruthless about editing.
  • #9: I think web writing principles (clarity, brevity, structure) apply to all writing. But that brevity should never come at the expense of user experience. You haven¡¯t written good content, no matter how short, if your user later ends up lost, surprised, or on the phone for missing info.
  • #10: Often we use qualifiers that really aren¡¯t necessary to express our meaning (such as ¡°really¡± in this sentence).
  • #11: Though prepositions are helpful, they make sentences longer because they cannot stand alone. By cutting the preposition and the words that follow, you often cut three to five supporting words.
  • #12: Adverbs weaken your copy because they are usually not as descriptive and powerful as active verbs.
  • #13: Passive is more verbose, plus it¡¯s often harder for non-native English speakers to understand.
  • #22: One caveat is that these are formulas based on words per sentence and syllables per words - meaning gibberish can still be a decent reading level.
  • #32: Story about headlines and trying new words and patterns. Longform vs shortform