6. A sentence should contain no unnecessary
words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences,
for the same reason that a drawing should have
no unnecessary lines and a machine no
unnecessary parts.
Strunk & White
The Elements of Style
7. I find I have no trouble getting rid of half the
words on most Web pages without losing
anything of value.
Steve Krug
Don't Make Me Think: A Common Sense Approach to Web Usability
12. Watch for passive voice
Passive
At dinner, six fish were eaten by the turtle.
The bike was repaired by Sarah.
Active
The turtle ate six fish.
Sarah repaired the bike.
13. Make your copy
scannable
Tip 2:
Steve Krug
Don't Make Me Think: A Common Sense Approach to Web Usability
14. Steve Krug
Don't Make Me Think: A Common Sense Approach to Web Usability
15. Eyetracking visualizations show that users often
read Web pages in an F-shaped pattern.
Jakob Nielsen
http://www.nngroup.com/articles/f-shaped-pattern-reading-web-content/
16. This implies
Visitors dont often read word by word
Important info should be first
Headings, paragraphs, and bullet points should
start with key words
17. We live in a world where good Web content is
chunky content.
18. Chunky checklist
Use headings and subheadings
Put important info first
Shorten sentences and paragraphs
Use bulleted or numbered lists
#5: Its a conversation, not rambling but focused conversation started by a busy person
People come to your site because they are looking for information
that helps them make a decision or complete a task
easy to find and easy to understand
accurate, up to date and credible
Grab & go means they can read pieces and get what they need without needing to read an entire manual
#8: Krug recommends removing half the words, though he admits that saying half is just his way of being ruthless about editing.
#9: I think web writing principles (clarity, brevity, structure) apply to all writing.
But that brevity should never come at the expense of user experience. You havent written good content, no matter how short, if your user later ends up lost, surprised, or on the phone for missing info.
#10: Often we use qualifiers that really arent necessary to express our meaning (such as really in this sentence).
#11: Though prepositions are helpful, they make sentences longer because they cannot stand alone. By cutting the preposition and the words that follow, you often cut three to five supporting words.
#12: Adverbs weaken your copy because they are usually not as descriptive and powerful as active verbs.
#13: Passive is more verbose, plus its often harder for non-native English speakers to understand.
#22: One caveat is that these are formulas based on words per sentence and syllables per words - meaning gibberish can still be a decent reading level.
#32: Story about headlines and trying new words and patterns.
Longform vs shortform