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CREATIVE WRITING COMPETITION
2013
My giraffe
THIS IS A GIRAFFE. IT IS ONE HUNDRED YEARS OLD. IT CAN WALK, EAT
AND RUN. IT CANT SWIM. IT LIKES LEAVES, GRASS AND STRAW. IT
DOESN卒T LIKE FISH.
BY THOMAS ENGEVIK
MISSION POSSIBLE!
LAST WEEK I HAD TO WORK ON A VERY DIFFICULT MISSION! I WAS IN THE STREET AND I
FOUND A PIECE OF PAPER AND IT SAID GO TO PARIS. SO I WENT TO PARIS AND THEN I
REMEMBERED THAT I WAS A SPY. I WAS IN THE MIDDLE OF SOME THIEVES. AT NIGHT I WENT
TO SWITCH OFF THE EIFFEL TOWER LIGHTS SO THAT NOBODY SAW ME AND I FOUND A CLUE
THAT SAID GO TO LONDON. I WENT TO LONDON AND I REMEMBERED THAT IT WAS A
RECYCLING MISSION SO I SAID TO PEOPLE TO RECYCLE AND THEN THEY GAVE ME THE THINGS
RECYCLED. I MADE A MACHINE WITH ALL THOSE THINGS AND SAVED THE WORLD. AND THAT IS
MY MISSION OF LAST WEEK.
BY SPY CHLOE
THE TRAGIC TRIP
ONE DAY I WAS IN MY HOUSE. MY DAD SAID, LETS GO ON MY BOAT. I SAID, CAN I INVITE TIARA AND SOFI? YES ,
SAID MY MOM AND DAD. SO CAN I INVITE FRAN AND BAUTI?, MY LITTLE BROTHER VITO SAID. YES, SAID MY MOM
AND DAD.
I CALLED TIARA . TIARAS MUM SAID IT WAS PERFECT. SO I CALLED SOFI. SOFIS MOTHER SAID IT WAS PERFECT. THEN
MOM CALLED FRANS AND BAUTIS MOMS. THEY SAID IT WAS PERFECT. SO TIARA, SOFI, FRAN AND BAUTI CAME. GO TO
THE CAR, DAD SAID. WHEN WE WERE IN SAN FERNANDO WE WENT INTO THE BOAT. AND WE SAILED TO SAN ANTONIO.
THE BOAT BROKE DOWN. VITO, FRAN AND BAUTI WENT SWIMMING WITH MY DAD. AND TIARA, SOFI AND I WENT WITH
MY MOM. WE WENT TO AN ISLAND. THE ISLAND WAS VERY BIG. ON DAY 1 WE WENT TO WALK AND THEN WE ATE MEAT
AND WE DRANK COCONUT MILK. THEN WE WENT TO SLEEP. ON DAY 2 WE MADE A HOUSE WITH BAMBOO AND WOOD.
WE ATE BANANAS AND DRANK WATER. THEN WE WENT TO SLEEP.ON DAY 3 WE MADE CLOTHES WITH LEAVES AND WE
SAW CONSTELLATIONS. IT WAS AMAZING. ON DAY 4 WE SAW A LOT OF ANIMALS SUCH AS MONKEYS, BIRDS, TIGERS AND
DUCKS. IT WAS FANTASTIC. ON DAY 5 WE WENT TO PLAY IN THE TREES AND WE PLAYED BOWLING WITH A COCONUT
AND WITH BAMBOO. ON DAY 6 IN THE MORNING WE SAW A BOAT THE POLICE IS HERE TIARA SAID. YEEEEEES!!! SOFI
SAID. NOW ITS THE TIME MY FRIENDS, I SAID. ARE WE GOING WITH THE POLICE?, TIARA SAID. WE HAVE TO TELL
MUM AND DAD, I SAID. THATS RIGHT, SOFI SAID. MOM AND DADA, HERE IS THE POLICE! YOU ARE SAFE NOW, THE
POLICE SAID. SO WE WENT TO THE BOAT AND WENT BACK HOME. WHAT A TRIP!
BY EMILIA VARELA
The envelope
It was Saturday. I woke up at ten oclock. I was going to the toilet when ..RING! It was the bell,
I opened the door and I saw an envelope on the floor. I took it, went inside and opened it. It
was a map! In the map there was a drawing of the Empire State. I went to the Empire State
and started to walk. The map said: You have to walk ten steps to the right and twenty to the
left. When I walked what the map said I saw a park. I looked carefully and found a yellow
apple. I picked it up and a man took it from me and ran away. I ran after him and took the apple
back. I ate it and magically a helicopter landed on the grass. I got on the helicopter and I saw
that the pilot was my dad. Hi, I said. He didnt answer. The helicopter landed again. I saw my
house, I walked in and .SURPRISE! Everything had been done to distract me and organize a
surprise party for me.

By Juana Sturla
An amazing story

It was a sunny day in California in 2007. I was with John, my brother, and something incredible
happened. I was surfing in the sea when suddenly we saw a whale. It was brown so I went to
the shore. I brought a brush and I went back with the whale. I was very worried because when I
started to brush the whale the brown color didnt go away. I took a picture because it was very
strange and I took it to some scientists.

Two days later the scientists said that the whale would be ok again if I searched for a plant
called genix. I asked them where to find it. They told me that I could find it under Californias
sea. I was a diving expert so I went to the sea. I searched for two hours and I found it. I went
with the whale and washed it. It turned blue again. I was so happy. I will never forget it.
By Tommy Braun
A bright sunny day
The weather forecast said it was going to be a bright sunny day. Because of the weather William and Mary
came to my house to go to the park. But we couldnt. We were at home, the sky was completely dark with
black clouds. The temperature was very coldWe were scared and there electricity was cut off. I went to
take a nap to my room. Oh! No! Please, no! There was somebody in my bed and it wasnt William or Mary. I
shouted for help, but nobody came except for the girl that was in my bed.
She was pale, with dark and long hair. She was tall and wore a white tunic. I couldnt see her face but I
could see the scars in her hands because she was holding me! I shouted desperate but she told me with a
hard voice: Shhhhhhh! Silence. Dont shout or Ill kill you. Someone could hear us. She pushed me to a big
closet that wasnt in my room. She told me that I was so nice to all the people that she wanted to kill me. I
started to cry. Suddenly I felt a thing that went through my stomach and I saw blood running down my leg.
Now, I am writing this letter for all the people to see that if they see a girl in their bed it is not what it
seems.
Rose
18/10/85
By Margui M端ller
Uninvited
One beautiful sunny day last week I was at home, just relaxing in my garden. I knew that spring was on its
way, and I felt like planting some flowers. I started digging the hole. It was hard work but I felt happy and
optimistic. Suddenly, even though I was hot and the sun was burning down on my back I felt the air around
me go cold. I felt a chill down my spine. It grew completely quiet. Even the birds stopped singing. I stood
there knowing with a feeling of dread that I was not alone
Now, the same cold air that minutes before was behind my back turned into a strong twister that began to
spin around me. I felt how all my bones started to get weaker until they broke in millions of pieces and
spread over my empty body.
Then, an extremely strong force pushed me from the ground to the sky and later to space, leaving the Earth
far away from me. I never felt so confused in my life. Suddenly, when my mind started taking back control I
realized I had reached an unknown town. I could see pictures of me with a red cross on my face.
The mysterious visitor that had appeared in my garden had taken my place in my planet and I was not
invited to his.
By Jose Tasca
CONGRATS TO ALL PARTICIPANTS!
LOOKING FORWARD TO READING
YOU NEXT YEAR!

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  • 2. My giraffe THIS IS A GIRAFFE. IT IS ONE HUNDRED YEARS OLD. IT CAN WALK, EAT AND RUN. IT CANT SWIM. IT LIKES LEAVES, GRASS AND STRAW. IT DOESN卒T LIKE FISH. BY THOMAS ENGEVIK
  • 3. MISSION POSSIBLE! LAST WEEK I HAD TO WORK ON A VERY DIFFICULT MISSION! I WAS IN THE STREET AND I FOUND A PIECE OF PAPER AND IT SAID GO TO PARIS. SO I WENT TO PARIS AND THEN I REMEMBERED THAT I WAS A SPY. I WAS IN THE MIDDLE OF SOME THIEVES. AT NIGHT I WENT TO SWITCH OFF THE EIFFEL TOWER LIGHTS SO THAT NOBODY SAW ME AND I FOUND A CLUE THAT SAID GO TO LONDON. I WENT TO LONDON AND I REMEMBERED THAT IT WAS A RECYCLING MISSION SO I SAID TO PEOPLE TO RECYCLE AND THEN THEY GAVE ME THE THINGS RECYCLED. I MADE A MACHINE WITH ALL THOSE THINGS AND SAVED THE WORLD. AND THAT IS MY MISSION OF LAST WEEK. BY SPY CHLOE
  • 4. THE TRAGIC TRIP ONE DAY I WAS IN MY HOUSE. MY DAD SAID, LETS GO ON MY BOAT. I SAID, CAN I INVITE TIARA AND SOFI? YES , SAID MY MOM AND DAD. SO CAN I INVITE FRAN AND BAUTI?, MY LITTLE BROTHER VITO SAID. YES, SAID MY MOM AND DAD. I CALLED TIARA . TIARAS MUM SAID IT WAS PERFECT. SO I CALLED SOFI. SOFIS MOTHER SAID IT WAS PERFECT. THEN MOM CALLED FRANS AND BAUTIS MOMS. THEY SAID IT WAS PERFECT. SO TIARA, SOFI, FRAN AND BAUTI CAME. GO TO THE CAR, DAD SAID. WHEN WE WERE IN SAN FERNANDO WE WENT INTO THE BOAT. AND WE SAILED TO SAN ANTONIO. THE BOAT BROKE DOWN. VITO, FRAN AND BAUTI WENT SWIMMING WITH MY DAD. AND TIARA, SOFI AND I WENT WITH MY MOM. WE WENT TO AN ISLAND. THE ISLAND WAS VERY BIG. ON DAY 1 WE WENT TO WALK AND THEN WE ATE MEAT AND WE DRANK COCONUT MILK. THEN WE WENT TO SLEEP. ON DAY 2 WE MADE A HOUSE WITH BAMBOO AND WOOD. WE ATE BANANAS AND DRANK WATER. THEN WE WENT TO SLEEP.ON DAY 3 WE MADE CLOTHES WITH LEAVES AND WE SAW CONSTELLATIONS. IT WAS AMAZING. ON DAY 4 WE SAW A LOT OF ANIMALS SUCH AS MONKEYS, BIRDS, TIGERS AND DUCKS. IT WAS FANTASTIC. ON DAY 5 WE WENT TO PLAY IN THE TREES AND WE PLAYED BOWLING WITH A COCONUT AND WITH BAMBOO. ON DAY 6 IN THE MORNING WE SAW A BOAT THE POLICE IS HERE TIARA SAID. YEEEEEES!!! SOFI SAID. NOW ITS THE TIME MY FRIENDS, I SAID. ARE WE GOING WITH THE POLICE?, TIARA SAID. WE HAVE TO TELL MUM AND DAD, I SAID. THATS RIGHT, SOFI SAID. MOM AND DADA, HERE IS THE POLICE! YOU ARE SAFE NOW, THE POLICE SAID. SO WE WENT TO THE BOAT AND WENT BACK HOME. WHAT A TRIP! BY EMILIA VARELA
  • 5. The envelope It was Saturday. I woke up at ten oclock. I was going to the toilet when ..RING! It was the bell, I opened the door and I saw an envelope on the floor. I took it, went inside and opened it. It was a map! In the map there was a drawing of the Empire State. I went to the Empire State and started to walk. The map said: You have to walk ten steps to the right and twenty to the left. When I walked what the map said I saw a park. I looked carefully and found a yellow apple. I picked it up and a man took it from me and ran away. I ran after him and took the apple back. I ate it and magically a helicopter landed on the grass. I got on the helicopter and I saw that the pilot was my dad. Hi, I said. He didnt answer. The helicopter landed again. I saw my house, I walked in and .SURPRISE! Everything had been done to distract me and organize a surprise party for me. By Juana Sturla
  • 6. An amazing story It was a sunny day in California in 2007. I was with John, my brother, and something incredible happened. I was surfing in the sea when suddenly we saw a whale. It was brown so I went to the shore. I brought a brush and I went back with the whale. I was very worried because when I started to brush the whale the brown color didnt go away. I took a picture because it was very strange and I took it to some scientists. Two days later the scientists said that the whale would be ok again if I searched for a plant called genix. I asked them where to find it. They told me that I could find it under Californias sea. I was a diving expert so I went to the sea. I searched for two hours and I found it. I went with the whale and washed it. It turned blue again. I was so happy. I will never forget it. By Tommy Braun
  • 7. A bright sunny day The weather forecast said it was going to be a bright sunny day. Because of the weather William and Mary came to my house to go to the park. But we couldnt. We were at home, the sky was completely dark with black clouds. The temperature was very coldWe were scared and there electricity was cut off. I went to take a nap to my room. Oh! No! Please, no! There was somebody in my bed and it wasnt William or Mary. I shouted for help, but nobody came except for the girl that was in my bed. She was pale, with dark and long hair. She was tall and wore a white tunic. I couldnt see her face but I could see the scars in her hands because she was holding me! I shouted desperate but she told me with a hard voice: Shhhhhhh! Silence. Dont shout or Ill kill you. Someone could hear us. She pushed me to a big closet that wasnt in my room. She told me that I was so nice to all the people that she wanted to kill me. I started to cry. Suddenly I felt a thing that went through my stomach and I saw blood running down my leg. Now, I am writing this letter for all the people to see that if they see a girl in their bed it is not what it seems. Rose 18/10/85 By Margui M端ller
  • 8. Uninvited One beautiful sunny day last week I was at home, just relaxing in my garden. I knew that spring was on its way, and I felt like planting some flowers. I started digging the hole. It was hard work but I felt happy and optimistic. Suddenly, even though I was hot and the sun was burning down on my back I felt the air around me go cold. I felt a chill down my spine. It grew completely quiet. Even the birds stopped singing. I stood there knowing with a feeling of dread that I was not alone Now, the same cold air that minutes before was behind my back turned into a strong twister that began to spin around me. I felt how all my bones started to get weaker until they broke in millions of pieces and spread over my empty body. Then, an extremely strong force pushed me from the ground to the sky and later to space, leaving the Earth far away from me. I never felt so confused in my life. Suddenly, when my mind started taking back control I realized I had reached an unknown town. I could see pictures of me with a red cross on my face. The mysterious visitor that had appeared in my garden had taken my place in my planet and I was not invited to his. By Jose Tasca
  • 9. CONGRATS TO ALL PARTICIPANTS! LOOKING FORWARD TO READING YOU NEXT YEAR!