This draft feedback discusses a design submission for a Little White Lies magazine cover. The feedback praises the design for being unique and not using obvious fire imagery like other submissions. It fits well as a LWL cover and the white stars and cold color scheme tie in nicely with the LWL logo. The use of constellations is seen as a clever way to include more film imagery and make the design look detailed. However, one submission is strongly rejected for being too obvious and simple by only focusing on the fire in the title without much development potential.
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Cover Drafts feedback 2
1. Draft Feedback 2
Very strong and different. It doesnʼt
use the obvious fire imagery and so
really stands out as unique.
It fits in very well
as a Little White
Lies cover, stylish
and a bit different.
The white stars
and cold colour
scheme would
also tie in with the
LWL logo to make
it look nicely
designed.
The constellations are a clever
way to include more imagery
from the film and really makes
the design look detailed and
intricate.
A strong rejection on this one. Itʼs too
obvious and simple, only playing off
the “fire” in the title. It has not a lot of
scope to develop it.