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Looking back at your preliminary task
what do you feel you have learnt in the
    progression from it to the full
              product?
Preliminary Task Front Cover                      Main Task Front Cover


    Looking at my Front Covers from both my preliminary task and main task there is a higher quality of
photography, a more professional layout, and the key conventions are shown to look more like a real magazine.
Better thought out mast
                                                                                  head  font, colour and
                                                                                           name.



                                                       Unclear colour
 The competition                                                                                                      More
                                                      scheme makes it
 cover line is too                                                                                                 professional
                                                       look cheap and
 close to the girls                                                                                                  looking
                                                            tacky
face. Doesnt look                                                                                                 background.
very professional.


                                                      The font is
                                                      too big,
                                                      doesnt
                                                      look like a
                                                      real
  Unedited                                            magazine
 photo looks
unprofessional                                                  More
      .                                                       suitable
                                                           colours for
                                                          the genre of
                                                            magazine.



                       Preliminary Task Front Cover                          Main Task Front Cover
                                                                                                              More appropriate
                                                              More stylish way to lay out                   style and size of font.
        Bad layout. There is lots                             the competition. Matches                      Made it look more like
        of space around the bar                                 better with the target                         a real magazine
                 code.                                                audience.
I


             Preliminary Task Contents Page                     Main Task Front Cover


   Looking at my Contents Pages from both my preliminary task and main task there is a higher quality of
photography, a more professional layout, and the key conventions are shown to look more like a real magazine.
More appealing layout, looks
                                                                                                   higher quality.

                      Basic font looks tacky.
                                                           Interesting
                                                             font looks
                                                           more like a
                                                        real magazine.
The large font
makes the page
look less like a                                                                                                       Different
                                                     Large
real magazine                                                                                                      sections make it
                                                     chunks of
                                                                                                                   look more like a
                                                     texts look
                                                                                                                    real magazine.
                                                     tacky




                                                          Smaller font
                                                            makes the
                                                            page more
    Unedited
                                                          professional.
 photographs look                                                                                                 A clear colour scheme
  unprofessional                                                                                                   makes it look more
                                                                                                                       professional

                    Preliminary Task Contents Page                             Main Task Front Cover
                                                                  Good quality photographs
              A lot of background showing and
                                                                  make the page look more
             because it is a white background it
                                                                    like a real magazine.
              doesn't look like a real magazine.
In my preliminary project I used a Fujifilm camera to take pictures of my models, where as
in the main task I used an SLR camera; this camera meant that the photos in my front cover, contents
page and double page spread of my main task magazine were of a much higher quaintly than my
preliminary task.
            I used Photoshop to make the covers of both magazines because it was easily accessible.
During the preliminary task I had only been able to use the basic tools, but by the main task I was able
to edit my photos to make them more like a real magazine. The backgrounds for my covers havent
been replaced but the main task background looks a lot better because the editing has made it look so.




      In the preliminary task the layouts for all the pages were basic, where as in the main task there
were more quirky design features, especially in my contents page. This was because I took deeper
research into my target audience and genre of my magazine. This is also shown with the colours I
have used. For the preliminary task the colours didn't match as well as the main task. Although a lot
of the colours were suitable for the genre of the magazine there wasn't a clear scheme unlike the
main task magazine.

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Evalutation 7

  • 1. Looking back at your preliminary task what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full product?
  • 2. Preliminary Task Front Cover Main Task Front Cover Looking at my Front Covers from both my preliminary task and main task there is a higher quality of photography, a more professional layout, and the key conventions are shown to look more like a real magazine.
  • 3. Better thought out mast head font, colour and name. Unclear colour The competition More scheme makes it cover line is too professional look cheap and close to the girls looking tacky face. Doesnt look background. very professional. The font is too big, doesnt look like a real Unedited magazine photo looks unprofessional More . suitable colours for the genre of magazine. Preliminary Task Front Cover Main Task Front Cover More appropriate More stylish way to lay out style and size of font. Bad layout. There is lots the competition. Matches Made it look more like of space around the bar better with the target a real magazine code. audience.
  • 4. I Preliminary Task Contents Page Main Task Front Cover Looking at my Contents Pages from both my preliminary task and main task there is a higher quality of photography, a more professional layout, and the key conventions are shown to look more like a real magazine.
  • 5. More appealing layout, looks higher quality. Basic font looks tacky. Interesting font looks more like a real magazine. The large font makes the page look less like a Different Large real magazine sections make it chunks of look more like a texts look real magazine. tacky Smaller font makes the page more Unedited professional. photographs look A clear colour scheme unprofessional makes it look more professional Preliminary Task Contents Page Main Task Front Cover Good quality photographs A lot of background showing and make the page look more because it is a white background it like a real magazine. doesn't look like a real magazine.
  • 6. In my preliminary project I used a Fujifilm camera to take pictures of my models, where as in the main task I used an SLR camera; this camera meant that the photos in my front cover, contents page and double page spread of my main task magazine were of a much higher quaintly than my preliminary task. I used Photoshop to make the covers of both magazines because it was easily accessible. During the preliminary task I had only been able to use the basic tools, but by the main task I was able to edit my photos to make them more like a real magazine. The backgrounds for my covers havent been replaced but the main task background looks a lot better because the editing has made it look so. In the preliminary task the layouts for all the pages were basic, where as in the main task there were more quirky design features, especially in my contents page. This was because I took deeper research into my target audience and genre of my magazine. This is also shown with the colours I have used. For the preliminary task the colours didn't match as well as the main task. Although a lot of the colours were suitable for the genre of the magazine there wasn't a clear scheme unlike the main task magazine.