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DIY Rod Rosenstein, deputy AG, slams encrypted cellphone makers following Texas church shooting Rod Rosenstein, President Trumps deputy attorney general, on Thursday referenced the recent mass shooting at a Texas church as an example of why American cellphone manufacturers should stop selling mobile devices incapable of being accessed by authorities. A frequent critic of what he calls warrant-proof encryption, Mr. Rosenstein cited the Sutherland Springs First Baptist Church massacre as the FBIwrestles with recovering data from a cellphone belonging to Devin Kelley, the 26-year-old Air Force veteran who conducted the killing spree Sunday and then committed suicide, according to police. The FBI has the suspects phone, but cannot access the data inside because of encryption, Mr. Rosenstein said Thursday during a private event, as relayed by the Justice Department. When you shoot dozens of innocent American citizens, we want law enforcement to investigate your communications and stored data. We expect police and prosecutors to investigate such horrendous crimes. There are things that we need to know, Mr. Rosenstein said. Kelleys phone could potentially help officials attempting to find a motive for the massacre, but the device is encrypted and cant be accessed by investigators, the head of FBIs San Francisco first stated during a press conference Tuesday. The FBI hasnt publicly revealed the make and model of the device, but multiple news reports have identified it as an Apple iPhone, echoing a dilemma that unfolded after the December 2015 terrorist attack in San Bernardino, California. https://www.washingtontimes.com/news/2017/nov/10/texas-church-shooters-phone-propels-encryption-deb/
STAGE 1 <10 minutes><individually> 1) Read the article 2) Identify initial hot spots <problematic areas; best underline> 3) Decide on the general direction of a translation (how to translate: style; register; headline; proper names etc.]
STAGE 2 <15 minutes><brainstorming in a group #1> 1) Discuss how to deal with the hot spots 2) Determine the best techniques to overcome them
STAGE 3 <25 minutes><individually> Translate the whole piece
STAGE 4 <10 minutes><brainstorming in a group #2> 1) Compare notes 2) Final discussion on solutions applied individually
STAGE 5 <10 minutes><individually> (Post-brainstorming) final corrections of individual translations
STAGE 6 <10 minutes><REVIEW> 1) Swap your translation with an individual member from another group 2) Check the translation and evaluate it to ensure its quality regarding: a) SENSE/CONTENT (0-2 points: 0 the key massages not conveyed; many conent mistakes occur; 1 the key messages conveyed to some extent; some content mistakes occur; 2 the key messages conveyed fully; almost no content mistakes occur) b) LINGUISTIC PROFICIENCY(0-5: 0 not fluent, a lot of mistakes; 3 relatiely fluent, numerous mistakes; 5 very fluent, idiomatic, almost no mistakes) c) HEADLINE (0-2: 0 not convincing, not clear; 1 somewhat convincing, rather clear; 2 very convincing and clear) d) PROPER NAMES (0-2: 0 not rednered properly; 1 some rendered well; 2 mostly renderd well) e) FROMATTING (text alignment, capitalizations, hyperlinks etc) (0-1; 0 not retained; inadequate; 1 retained; adequate)
STAGE 7 <10 minutes><class discussion> 1) Summarizing the task 2) Final remarks
DIY Strzelanina w kociele w Teksasie: Zastpca prokuratora generalnego USA ostro krytykuje producent坦w zaszyfrowanych kom坦rek W minoiny czwartek, Rod Rosenstein, mianowany przez prezydenta Donalda Trumpa na zastpc prokuratora generalnego, odni坦s si do masowej strzelaniny, kt坦ra miaa niedawno miejsce w jednym z kocio坦w w Teksasie. Stwierdzi, i甜 jest to dow坦d na to, i甜 amerykascy producenci telefon坦w kom坦rkowych powinni zaniecha sprzeda甜y urzdze, do kt坦rych wadze nie maj dostpu. Rosenstein, bdcy ostrym krytykiem tzw. szyfrowania odpornego na nakazy sdowe (ang. warrant-proof encryption), przywoa masakr w kociele baptyst坦w w Sutherland Springs w stanie Teksas w kontekcie obecnych zmaga FBI z odzyskaniem danych z telefonu nale甜cego do 26-letniego weterana Si Powietrznych USA Davina Kelley'a, kt坦ry w niedziel 5 listopada najpierw dokona strzelaniny, a nastpnie jak podaje policja popeni samob坦jstwo. Cho FBI jest w posiadaniu telefonu podejrzanego, to poniewa甜 jest on zaszyfrowany ledczy nie maj dostpu do znajdujcych si w nim danych mia powiedzie Rosenstein w miniony czwartek na zamknitym evencie, jak podaje Departament Sprawiedliwoci Stan坦w Zjednoczonych. Jeli kto dopuci si zabicia kilkudziesiciu niewinnych Amerykan坦w, wadze musz mie mo甜liwo wgldu w poczenia i dane zapisane na telefonie sprawcy. Oczekujemy, 甜e policja i prokratura zbadaj okolicznoci tak brutalnej zbrodni. S rzeczy, kt坦re powinnimy wiedzie podkreli Rosenstein. Jak zaznaczy szef biura FBI w San Francisco na wtorkowej konferencji prasowej, telefon Kelleya m坦gby znacznie pom坦c w dotarciu do motywu masakry. Poniewa甜 jednak urzdzenie jest zaszyfrowane, ledczy nie mog uzyska do niego dostpu. FBI nie ujawnio jeszcze producenta i modelu urzdzenia, jednak liczne 添r坦da podaj, 甜e jest to iPhone firmy Apple. Fakt ten nieodzownie przywodzi na myl dylemat towarzyszcy atakowi terrorystycznemu w kalifornijskim San Bernardino z grudnia 2015. https://www.washingtontimes.com/news/2017/nov/10/texas-church-shooters-phone-propels-encryption-deb/
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  • 3. DIY Rod Rosenstein, deputy AG, slams encrypted cellphone makers following Texas church shooting Rod Rosenstein, President Trumps deputy attorney general, on Thursday referenced the recent mass shooting at a Texas church as an example of why American cellphone manufacturers should stop selling mobile devices incapable of being accessed by authorities. A frequent critic of what he calls warrant-proof encryption, Mr. Rosenstein cited the Sutherland Springs First Baptist Church massacre as the FBIwrestles with recovering data from a cellphone belonging to Devin Kelley, the 26-year-old Air Force veteran who conducted the killing spree Sunday and then committed suicide, according to police. The FBI has the suspects phone, but cannot access the data inside because of encryption, Mr. Rosenstein said Thursday during a private event, as relayed by the Justice Department. When you shoot dozens of innocent American citizens, we want law enforcement to investigate your communications and stored data. We expect police and prosecutors to investigate such horrendous crimes. There are things that we need to know, Mr. Rosenstein said. Kelleys phone could potentially help officials attempting to find a motive for the massacre, but the device is encrypted and cant be accessed by investigators, the head of FBIs San Francisco first stated during a press conference Tuesday. The FBI hasnt publicly revealed the make and model of the device, but multiple news reports have identified it as an Apple iPhone, echoing a dilemma that unfolded after the December 2015 terrorist attack in San Bernardino, California. https://www.washingtontimes.com/news/2017/nov/10/texas-church-shooters-phone-propels-encryption-deb/
  • 4. STAGE 1 <10 minutes><individually> 1) Read the article 2) Identify initial hot spots <problematic areas; best underline> 3) Decide on the general direction of a translation (how to translate: style; register; headline; proper names etc.]
  • 5. STAGE 2 <15 minutes><brainstorming in a group #1> 1) Discuss how to deal with the hot spots 2) Determine the best techniques to overcome them
  • 7. STAGE 4 <10 minutes><brainstorming in a group #2> 1) Compare notes 2) Final discussion on solutions applied individually
  • 8. STAGE 5 <10 minutes><individually> (Post-brainstorming) final corrections of individual translations
  • 9. STAGE 6 <10 minutes><REVIEW> 1) Swap your translation with an individual member from another group 2) Check the translation and evaluate it to ensure its quality regarding: a) SENSE/CONTENT (0-2 points: 0 the key massages not conveyed; many conent mistakes occur; 1 the key messages conveyed to some extent; some content mistakes occur; 2 the key messages conveyed fully; almost no content mistakes occur) b) LINGUISTIC PROFICIENCY(0-5: 0 not fluent, a lot of mistakes; 3 relatiely fluent, numerous mistakes; 5 very fluent, idiomatic, almost no mistakes) c) HEADLINE (0-2: 0 not convincing, not clear; 1 somewhat convincing, rather clear; 2 very convincing and clear) d) PROPER NAMES (0-2: 0 not rednered properly; 1 some rendered well; 2 mostly renderd well) e) FROMATTING (text alignment, capitalizations, hyperlinks etc) (0-1; 0 not retained; inadequate; 1 retained; adequate)
  • 10. STAGE 7 <10 minutes><class discussion> 1) Summarizing the task 2) Final remarks
  • 11. DIY Strzelanina w kociele w Teksasie: Zastpca prokuratora generalnego USA ostro krytykuje producent坦w zaszyfrowanych kom坦rek W minoiny czwartek, Rod Rosenstein, mianowany przez prezydenta Donalda Trumpa na zastpc prokuratora generalnego, odni坦s si do masowej strzelaniny, kt坦ra miaa niedawno miejsce w jednym z kocio坦w w Teksasie. Stwierdzi, i甜 jest to dow坦d na to, i甜 amerykascy producenci telefon坦w kom坦rkowych powinni zaniecha sprzeda甜y urzdze, do kt坦rych wadze nie maj dostpu. Rosenstein, bdcy ostrym krytykiem tzw. szyfrowania odpornego na nakazy sdowe (ang. warrant-proof encryption), przywoa masakr w kociele baptyst坦w w Sutherland Springs w stanie Teksas w kontekcie obecnych zmaga FBI z odzyskaniem danych z telefonu nale甜cego do 26-letniego weterana Si Powietrznych USA Davina Kelley'a, kt坦ry w niedziel 5 listopada najpierw dokona strzelaniny, a nastpnie jak podaje policja popeni samob坦jstwo. Cho FBI jest w posiadaniu telefonu podejrzanego, to poniewa甜 jest on zaszyfrowany ledczy nie maj dostpu do znajdujcych si w nim danych mia powiedzie Rosenstein w miniony czwartek na zamknitym evencie, jak podaje Departament Sprawiedliwoci Stan坦w Zjednoczonych. Jeli kto dopuci si zabicia kilkudziesiciu niewinnych Amerykan坦w, wadze musz mie mo甜liwo wgldu w poczenia i dane zapisane na telefonie sprawcy. Oczekujemy, 甜e policja i prokratura zbadaj okolicznoci tak brutalnej zbrodni. S rzeczy, kt坦re powinnimy wiedzie podkreli Rosenstein. Jak zaznaczy szef biura FBI w San Francisco na wtorkowej konferencji prasowej, telefon Kelleya m坦gby znacznie pom坦c w dotarciu do motywu masakry. Poniewa甜 jednak urzdzenie jest zaszyfrowane, ledczy nie mog uzyska do niego dostpu. FBI nie ujawnio jeszcze producenta i modelu urzdzenia, jednak liczne 添r坦da podaj, 甜e jest to iPhone firmy Apple. Fakt ten nieodzownie przywodzi na myl dylemat towarzyszcy atakowi terrorystycznemu w kalifornijskim San Bernardino z grudnia 2015. https://www.washingtontimes.com/news/2017/nov/10/texas-church-shooters-phone-propels-encryption-deb/
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