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Unit 5, Week 2, Lesson 7
Objectives
I will be able to:
Find and use details in source texts as
inspiration for a fictional narrative.
Generate ideas for the characters, setting, and
plot of the narrative.
Engage in collaborative conversations to share
and build on ideas.
What does it mean for you to draw
inspiration from a text?
Imagine you are one of the large mechanical
looms described in Eli Whitneys Cotton
Gin and Technology and the Lowell Mill
Girls. Write a narrative about one day in
your life. What do you see, hear, think, and
feel? Use your imagination as well as
inspiration from two of your readings to
help you write your narrative.
Narrative writing tells a story. It has a
setting, characters, and a plotevents that
help the story move forward. These events
are usually arranged in chronological order.
Chronological Order
noun
the arrangement of things
following one after another in
time: Please tell me about
your
day in chronological order.
The story Mrs. Brengle and I are writing is
told from a certain perspectivethe
mechanical loom. The setting for my story
will be a textile factory. My characters (other
than the loom) will be young women who have
left home for a factory job. My plot will center
on the relationship between the loom and one
of the young women. Ill use the two readings
and bring history to life!
Tells a story
Setting
Characters
Plot
Narrative Writing Tells
A Story
My ideas
This story will be about
a day in the life of a
mechanical loom.
Related Details or Paragraphs from
the Source Texts
A Mill Picture, stanza
1
Eli Whitney
paragraph 10
Narrative Writing
Includes A Setting
My ideas
This story will take
place in a textile mill in
Lowell, Massachusetts,
during the 1850s
Related Details or Paragraphs from
the Source Texts
Introduction to
Technology and the
Lowell Mill Girls
Narrative Writing
Includes Characters
My ideas
The characters in my
story will be the loom
and a young factory
worker from Ireland
named Eileen.
Related Details or Paragraphs from
the Source Texts
Loom description in A
Mill Picture stanzas 1,
5
Description of worker in
A Mill Picture stanzas
2, 4
Narrative Writing
Features A Plot
My ideas
 The loom waits for Eileen in the
morning.
 When Eileen arrives, the loom is happy.
 The loom watches Eileens face and
realizes she is sad. It wants to speak to
her, but cannot.
 The day passes in silent labor, although
the factory is noisy. The loom and Eileen
work together, giving the loom some
comfort.
 At the end of the day, Eileen leaves.
Related Details or Paragraphs from
the Source Texts
 When I set out for Lowell line 5: But
now I am in Lowell, And suumond by the
bell
 Details about the factory workers
feelings in A Mill Picture, stanzas 2-4
 Details about the weaving process:
paragraph 1 of Eli Whitneys Cotton
Gin
 Photos of factory workers on pages 124
and 129 of source texts
 Work with your W partner.
 Reread Writing to Sources on page 21 of Technologys Impact on
Society.
 Jot down ideas for your narrative.
 Share your ideas with your partner; listen to his or her ideas.
 Ask questions like:
 What descriptive details in the source texts might help you develop your
setting, plot, or characters?
 Do any of the background characters in the poems give you ideas for
characters.
 What historic facts from the poems will you weave into your story?

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Grade 5, unit 5, week 2, lesson 7

  • 1. Unit 5, Week 2, Lesson 7
  • 2. Objectives I will be able to: Find and use details in source texts as inspiration for a fictional narrative. Generate ideas for the characters, setting, and plot of the narrative. Engage in collaborative conversations to share and build on ideas.
  • 3. What does it mean for you to draw inspiration from a text?
  • 4. Imagine you are one of the large mechanical looms described in Eli Whitneys Cotton Gin and Technology and the Lowell Mill Girls. Write a narrative about one day in your life. What do you see, hear, think, and feel? Use your imagination as well as inspiration from two of your readings to help you write your narrative.
  • 5. Narrative writing tells a story. It has a setting, characters, and a plotevents that help the story move forward. These events are usually arranged in chronological order.
  • 6. Chronological Order noun the arrangement of things following one after another in time: Please tell me about your day in chronological order.
  • 7. The story Mrs. Brengle and I are writing is told from a certain perspectivethe mechanical loom. The setting for my story will be a textile factory. My characters (other than the loom) will be young women who have left home for a factory job. My plot will center on the relationship between the loom and one of the young women. Ill use the two readings and bring history to life!
  • 9. Narrative Writing Tells A Story My ideas This story will be about a day in the life of a mechanical loom. Related Details or Paragraphs from the Source Texts A Mill Picture, stanza 1 Eli Whitney paragraph 10
  • 10. Narrative Writing Includes A Setting My ideas This story will take place in a textile mill in Lowell, Massachusetts, during the 1850s Related Details or Paragraphs from the Source Texts Introduction to Technology and the Lowell Mill Girls
  • 11. Narrative Writing Includes Characters My ideas The characters in my story will be the loom and a young factory worker from Ireland named Eileen. Related Details or Paragraphs from the Source Texts Loom description in A Mill Picture stanzas 1, 5 Description of worker in A Mill Picture stanzas 2, 4
  • 12. Narrative Writing Features A Plot My ideas The loom waits for Eileen in the morning. When Eileen arrives, the loom is happy. The loom watches Eileens face and realizes she is sad. It wants to speak to her, but cannot. The day passes in silent labor, although the factory is noisy. The loom and Eileen work together, giving the loom some comfort. At the end of the day, Eileen leaves. Related Details or Paragraphs from the Source Texts When I set out for Lowell line 5: But now I am in Lowell, And suumond by the bell Details about the factory workers feelings in A Mill Picture, stanzas 2-4 Details about the weaving process: paragraph 1 of Eli Whitneys Cotton Gin Photos of factory workers on pages 124 and 129 of source texts
  • 13. Work with your W partner. Reread Writing to Sources on page 21 of Technologys Impact on Society. Jot down ideas for your narrative. Share your ideas with your partner; listen to his or her ideas. Ask questions like: What descriptive details in the source texts might help you develop your setting, plot, or characters? Do any of the background characters in the poems give you ideas for characters. What historic facts from the poems will you weave into your story?