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How to Add Details to Your Writing Display

Xaris Villa
Xaris Villa

At Key Stage 2, many students struggle to add interesting details in their narrative writing. Here are some examples of ways to spice up their writing with details. These posters have examples ^_^

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Dialogue/Quotes The boy ran home. The boy ran home. Ill be there soon! he thought.
She likes eating food like cakes, pies and sweets. Examples She likes eating food.
My sister was laughing yesterday at our house because of a TV show. ( Wh ) Questions (When?) (Where?) (Why?)! (Who?) (What?) My sister was laughing.
Adjectives She had a bag. She had a small 2-year old heart-shaped pink striped plastic bag. (size)! (shape)! (colour)! (pattern)! (material)! (age)!
Adverbs The boy walked. The boy walked happily. Quietly, the boy walked. The boy quickly walked.
Numb3r5 There were many animals. There were many animals four pigs, three goats, two hundred cows and one thousand chickens.
Feelings They went on a picnic. They went on a picnic. The girls were relaxed but the boys were excited.
Facts The weather was hot. The weather was hot.The temperature was 36属C and the humidity was 95%! Its true!
Senses The cake was amazing! The cake was amazing! It had three layers, it smelled like vanilla but wasnt too sweet. The cake was soft. The people sang a birthday song. (see)! (smell)! (taste)! (touch)! (hear)!
Metaphors The man was angry. The man was angry. He was as red as a tomato. The man was like a volcano!
i talics Are you okay? Are you okay? Are you okay? Are you okay?
Punctuation Hello. Im lost. Help. Hi? Im lost! Help. Hi! Im lost Help? Hi, Im lost. (Help)
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How to Add Details to Your Writing Display

  • 1. Dialogue/Quotes The boy ran home. The boy ran home. Ill be there soon! he thought.
  • 2. She likes eating food like cakes, pies and sweets. Examples She likes eating food.
  • 3. My sister was laughing yesterday at our house because of a TV show. ( Wh ) Questions (When?) (Where?) (Why?)! (Who?) (What?) My sister was laughing.
  • 4. Adjectives She had a bag. She had a small 2-year old heart-shaped pink striped plastic bag. (size)! (shape)! (colour)! (pattern)! (material)! (age)!
  • 5. Adverbs The boy walked. The boy walked happily. Quietly, the boy walked. The boy quickly walked.
  • 6. Numb3r5 There were many animals. There were many animals four pigs, three goats, two hundred cows and one thousand chickens.
  • 7. Feelings They went on a picnic. They went on a picnic. The girls were relaxed but the boys were excited.
  • 8. Facts The weather was hot. The weather was hot.The temperature was 36属C and the humidity was 95%! Its true!
  • 9. Senses The cake was amazing! The cake was amazing! It had three layers, it smelled like vanilla but wasnt too sweet. The cake was soft. The people sang a birthday song. (see)! (smell)! (taste)! (touch)! (hear)!
  • 10. Metaphors The man was angry. The man was angry. He was as red as a tomato. The man was like a volcano!
  • 11. i talics Are you okay? Are you okay? Are you okay? Are you okay?
  • 12. Punctuation Hello. Im lost. Help. Hi? Im lost! Help. Hi! Im lost Help? Hi, Im lost. (Help)