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Keepsake rough edit write up

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Carrie Deans
Carrie Deans

This document provides feedback on ways to improve a rough edit of a keepsake film, including making the sound clearer and louder, improving the lighting, correcting continuity errors, and ensuring actors keep a straight face throughout to avoid acting slips.

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Keepsake rough edit After watching this edit multiple times I have come up with a few points that could improve this edit  Making the sound clearer and louder as at the moment its not very clear or loud and you have to strain your ears to hear it clearly.  Try and make sure the lighting is better  There are a few continuity errors, we will try to correct these and make these as un- noticeable as possible.  In a few shots our acting slips we will try to keep a straight face through-out the whole film.

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Keepsake rough edit write up

  • 1. Keepsake rough edit After watching this edit multiple times I have come up with a few points that could improve this edit  Making the sound clearer and louder as at the moment its not very clear or loud and you have to strain your ears to hear it clearly.  Try and make sure the lighting is better  There are a few continuity errors, we will try to correct these and make these as un- noticeable as possible.  In a few shots our acting slips we will try to keep a straight face through-out the whole film.