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KLF Writing - Session3 - Pegah

Mehrdad Abedini
Mehrdad Abedini

This document contains reviews and edits of sample texts on various topics such as toys, floods, careers, language learning, jobs, technology, and weddings. The reviews provide corrections and improvements to the writing with a focus on grammar, punctuation, cohesion and clarity. Many of the suggested edits are minor changes to word choice, punctuation, grammar or phrasing to improve flow and understanding.

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KLF Writing - Session3 - Pegah
擧悋愕惠悋 慍惡悋 惡悋惆 Kalaamestan Language Foundation
Brainstorming HowToWrite Introduction
Review . Toys are one of the key factors for playing by children. Parents and adults should be careful in selecting the toys for kids according to their age level. If the toys are not chosen carefully, it can have bad effects and make the children less creative.
. Toys are one of the key factors 0f playing for children.Therefore, parents and adults should be careful about selecting the toys for kids according to their age level. If the toys are not chosen carefully, they will have bad effects and make --- children less creative. Review
.惶 Floods are an increasing threat to human lives and ecology. All over the world many flood events take place each year which have detrimental economic losses, for example, the damage to agricultural lands and buildings. Moreover, fatal losses caused by floods are tremendous. Review
惘. Today, going to university is an indispensable part of Iranian lifestyle. its quite normal for the Iranian high school graduates to attend universities after receiving their High school diploma.The most important question remaining to be answered is how well the universities prepare students for their future carrier? Review
惘. Today, going to university is an indispensable part of Iranian lifestyle. Its quite normal for Iranian high school graduates to attend universities after receiving their high school diploma.Therefore, the most important question remaining to be answered is, how well the universities prepare students for their future career. Review
. Learning a new language is so challenging for everyone.One of the popular languages in the world is English. People can learn it in different ways. Some people like to attend the classes, some of them like to self study or learn online. Review
. Learning a new language is so challenging for everyone.One of the popular languages in the world is English and people can learn it in different ways. In order to learn, Some people like to attend the classes whereas, others prefer self study or online learning. Review
愆.惆 Learning English is hard, but at the same time it can be fun. I like to learn English by watching different videos and reading educational books. Review
愕.悋 I like to learn English through teaching English. Learning is my ambition for ever, from my childhood up to now. One way for learning English is read books Review
愕.悋 I like to learn English through teaching -. Learning has been my ambition for ever, from my childhood up to now and one way for learning English is, reading books Review
悛.惘 Finding a well-paid job has some advantages. One of the most important ones is that when you have a job, you can have a better social life because there are a lot of people who can be met.The other benefit is that you can be independent to make money. Finally, by finding a well-paid job, people can have more communication and make money. Review
悛.惘 Finding a well-paid job has some advantages. One of the most important ones is that when you have a job, you can have a better social life. Because, there are many people who can be met.The other benefit is, - you can be independent to make money. Finally, by finding a well-paid job, people can have more communication and make money. Review
惘. Modern technology has greatly influenced language teaching.Today, a lot of teachers and students use application or social media for learning and teaching. One of the greatest advances in the use of modern technology is the use of internet in teaching, that is, online teaching. Review
惘. Modern technology has greatly influenced language teaching.Today, many teachers and students use applications or social media for learning and teaching. One of the greatest advances in applying modern technology is the use of internet in teaching, which is - online teaching. Review
.悴 There are so many ways to improve our listening abilities for example watching movies or series in English, making conversations with native speakers and so on.To improve our abilities in this field we have to be patient. Review
.悴 There are so many ways to improve our listening abilities. For instance, watching movies or series in English, making conversations with native speakers and so on.To improve our abilities in this field we have to be patient. Review
.擯 A wedding cake should be a beautiful cake, beautiful enough to remember. Baking chef should be a master one if she/he isnt, he/she will ruine your moment. Review
.擯 A wedding cake should be - beautiful ---. Beautiful enough to remember. Baking chef should be a master one. If not, they will ruin your moment. Review
Brainstorming
Today, social networks are useful to help people have a better life. In what extent do you agree? Brainstorming
What is your opinion about the role of governments to reduce air pollution? Brainstorming
Longer life and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live actively.What are the reasons? Brainstorming
Introduction
Air pollution is an important problem in most countries and in my opinion, there are some ways to control it like governments role, by making some law. Introduction
People today can expect to live longer and have healthier life than people in the past. People often see retirement as a time for relaxation. However, many who reach retirement age are more interested in being active. Introduction
KLF Writing - Session3 - Pegah
KLF Writing - Session3 - Pegah
Have a NiceEvening and Good Luck Keepintouch 021 88 53 48 94 @kalaamestan kalaamestan.com 0919 602 15 19 Kalaamestan Sponseredby Kalaamestan Caf辿

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KLF Writing - Session3 - Pegah

  • 4. Review . Toys are one of the key factors for playing by children. Parents and adults should be careful in selecting the toys for kids according to their age level. If the toys are not chosen carefully, it can have bad effects and make the children less creative.
  • 5. . Toys are one of the key factors 0f playing for children.Therefore, parents and adults should be careful about selecting the toys for kids according to their age level. If the toys are not chosen carefully, they will have bad effects and make --- children less creative. Review
  • 6. .惶 Floods are an increasing threat to human lives and ecology. All over the world many flood events take place each year which have detrimental economic losses, for example, the damage to agricultural lands and buildings. Moreover, fatal losses caused by floods are tremendous. Review
  • 7. 惘. Today, going to university is an indispensable part of Iranian lifestyle. its quite normal for the Iranian high school graduates to attend universities after receiving their High school diploma.The most important question remaining to be answered is how well the universities prepare students for their future carrier? Review
  • 8. 惘. Today, going to university is an indispensable part of Iranian lifestyle. Its quite normal for Iranian high school graduates to attend universities after receiving their high school diploma.Therefore, the most important question remaining to be answered is, how well the universities prepare students for their future career. Review
  • 9. . Learning a new language is so challenging for everyone.One of the popular languages in the world is English. People can learn it in different ways. Some people like to attend the classes, some of them like to self study or learn online. Review
  • 10. . Learning a new language is so challenging for everyone.One of the popular languages in the world is English and people can learn it in different ways. In order to learn, Some people like to attend the classes whereas, others prefer self study or online learning. Review
  • 11. 愆.惆 Learning English is hard, but at the same time it can be fun. I like to learn English by watching different videos and reading educational books. Review
  • 12. 愕.悋 I like to learn English through teaching English. Learning is my ambition for ever, from my childhood up to now. One way for learning English is read books Review
  • 13. 愕.悋 I like to learn English through teaching -. Learning has been my ambition for ever, from my childhood up to now and one way for learning English is, reading books Review
  • 14. 悛.惘 Finding a well-paid job has some advantages. One of the most important ones is that when you have a job, you can have a better social life because there are a lot of people who can be met.The other benefit is that you can be independent to make money. Finally, by finding a well-paid job, people can have more communication and make money. Review
  • 15. 悛.惘 Finding a well-paid job has some advantages. One of the most important ones is that when you have a job, you can have a better social life. Because, there are many people who can be met.The other benefit is, - you can be independent to make money. Finally, by finding a well-paid job, people can have more communication and make money. Review
  • 16. 惘. Modern technology has greatly influenced language teaching.Today, a lot of teachers and students use application or social media for learning and teaching. One of the greatest advances in the use of modern technology is the use of internet in teaching, that is, online teaching. Review
  • 17. 惘. Modern technology has greatly influenced language teaching.Today, many teachers and students use applications or social media for learning and teaching. One of the greatest advances in applying modern technology is the use of internet in teaching, which is - online teaching. Review
  • 18. .悴 There are so many ways to improve our listening abilities for example watching movies or series in English, making conversations with native speakers and so on.To improve our abilities in this field we have to be patient. Review
  • 19. .悴 There are so many ways to improve our listening abilities. For instance, watching movies or series in English, making conversations with native speakers and so on.To improve our abilities in this field we have to be patient. Review
  • 20. .擯 A wedding cake should be a beautiful cake, beautiful enough to remember. Baking chef should be a master one if she/he isnt, he/she will ruine your moment. Review
  • 21. .擯 A wedding cake should be - beautiful ---. Beautiful enough to remember. Baking chef should be a master one. If not, they will ruin your moment. Review
  • 23. Today, social networks are useful to help people have a better life. In what extent do you agree? Brainstorming
  • 24. What is your opinion about the role of governments to reduce air pollution? Brainstorming
  • 25. Longer life and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live actively.What are the reasons? Brainstorming
  • 27. Air pollution is an important problem in most countries and in my opinion, there are some ways to control it like governments role, by making some law. Introduction
  • 28. People today can expect to live longer and have healthier life than people in the past. People often see retirement as a time for relaxation. However, many who reach retirement age are more interested in being active. Introduction
  • 31. Have a NiceEvening and Good Luck Keepintouch 021 88 53 48 94 @kalaamestan kalaamestan.com 0919 602 15 19 Kalaamestan Sponseredby Kalaamestan Caf辿