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The document provides feedback on a group's music video production plan. It notes potential copyright issues with a video on YouTube and criticizes blogs written by group members for lacking personal insight and reflection. It also points out missing posts, including a summary of an article on album covers, an analysis of additional digipak covers, and how the group plans to encourage their target audience to purchase their digipak given admitted lack of buying CDs. The feedback aims to push the group to critically evaluate their work and address issues like de-commodification for their target audience.

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Luke Hewitt Production Plan Cant see it Potential Errors With Our Music Video Please dont just start copying and pasting Ideas and Discussion I cant watch this video YouTube have blocked it for copyright YOU SHOULD HAVE NOTICED THIS Blog Feedback Where are your comments on your feedback? You havent commented on the feedback you got from Leanne, this shows that you havent critically thought about your work or tried to make the improvements. BooSH Pitch feedback sheets Where are your comments on your feedback? I have now read 3 out 4 of the blogs for your groups and Im getting extremely bored, why? Because there is no personal insight or reflect from individuals within the group and this should be coming through and it helps to assess the individual contributions being made. If you must copy and paste it would be good to see group members copy and paste from more than ONE person showing that you are al writing worthy posts PLEASE SHARE THIS COMMENT WITH THE REST OF THE GROUP MISSING POSTS Notes and review of album cover article You should have read the article on album covers by now! Summarise what you have read and how what you have read can inform your planning Analysis of Digipaks written and virtual you shouldnt just have the green screen video you should include another analysis I think Jack may have scanned some other covers De-commodification we read this article in class what was it about how are you going to fight de-commodification? You all admitted that you dont but CDs let alone
digipaks SO HOW DO YOU PLAN TO ENCOURAGE YOUR TARGET AUDIENCE to buy your digipak?

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  • 1. Luke Hewitt Production Plan Cant see it Potential Errors With Our Music Video Please dont just start copying and pasting Ideas and Discussion I cant watch this video YouTube have blocked it for copyright YOU SHOULD HAVE NOTICED THIS Blog Feedback Where are your comments on your feedback? You havent commented on the feedback you got from Leanne, this shows that you havent critically thought about your work or tried to make the improvements. BooSH Pitch feedback sheets Where are your comments on your feedback? I have now read 3 out 4 of the blogs for your groups and Im getting extremely bored, why? Because there is no personal insight or reflect from individuals within the group and this should be coming through and it helps to assess the individual contributions being made. If you must copy and paste it would be good to see group members copy and paste from more than ONE person showing that you are al writing worthy posts PLEASE SHARE THIS COMMENT WITH THE REST OF THE GROUP MISSING POSTS Notes and review of album cover article You should have read the article on album covers by now! Summarise what you have read and how what you have read can inform your planning Analysis of Digipaks written and virtual you shouldnt just have the green screen video you should include another analysis I think Jack may have scanned some other covers De-commodification we read this article in class what was it about how are you going to fight de-commodification? You all admitted that you dont but CDs let alone
  • 2. digipaks SO HOW DO YOU PLAN TO ENCOURAGE YOUR TARGET AUDIENCE to buy your digipak?