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What is a Memoir?What is a Memoir?
The writer writes about his relationships with others,The writer writes about his relationships with others,
places, animals, or objects that had an impact on him /places, animals, or objects that had an impact on him /
her.her.
It is focuses on a brief period of time in the writers lifeIt is focuses on a brief period of time in the writers life
that he /she wishes to write about.that he /she wishes to write about.
The memoir isnt a LIFE story, or a detailed recap of aThe memoir isnt a LIFE story, or a detailed recap of a
vacation  it is about ONE SINGLE MEMORY.vacation  it is about ONE SINGLE MEMORY.
The plot of the memoir is about the pain and happinessThe plot of the memoir is about the pain and happiness
the writer has been through and how he / she made thethe writer has been through and how he / she made the
best of it or how he got through it.best of it or how he got through it.
The writer discusses his / her feelings and thoughtsThe writer discusses his / her feelings and thoughts
The writer includes emotions.The writer includes emotions.
The writer SHOWS not tells.The writer SHOWS not tells.
Memoir characteristicsMemoir characteristics
continuedcontinued
Memoirs haveMemoirs have HOOKSHOOKS that grab the attentionthat grab the attention
of the reader from the very beginning.of the reader from the very beginning.
The memoirThe memoir engagesengages the reader in athe reader in a
conversationalconversational way, so the reader feels likeway, so the reader feels like
the writer is speaking to them.the writer is speaking to them.
Memoirs are written in such a way that theMemoirs are written in such a way that the
reader can learn something from itwe callreader can learn something from itwe call
this life lesson athis life lesson a themetheme. This is why the. This is why the
memoir is significant to the writer.memoir is significant to the writer.
The writer uses descriptive language toThe writer uses descriptive language to
appeal to the readers senses. This is called,appeal to the readers senses. This is called,
sensory languagesensory language: Smell, touch, hear, see,: Smell, touch, hear, see,
taste.taste.
Purpose of a MemoirPurpose of a Memoir
Ask yourself:Ask yourself:
 What did I learn about myself?What did I learn about myself?
 What did I learn about life?What did I learn about life?
 How have I changed?How have I changed?
 What does this memory mean toWhat does this memory mean to
me?me?
Memoir characteristicsofpptpresentation (1)
I liked being a mess. The desk that should have been clear so I could do my homework was always besieged with bowls of cereal
and spoiled milk, old magazines, and Post-it notes I had forgotten to remember. My floor was a vacuum in itself, eating anything
entering my room. It consumed sweaters, stuffed animals, socks, I couldn't always see these things, but I knew that they were safe,
nestled somewhere on a shelf. Like old friends in a phone book, I figured that someday I would find all the loose strings and tie them
together.
One lonely day in August when all of my friends had yet to return from camp in Maine, visiting family in Florida, or some community-
service trip in Mexico, something inside me began to itch. I tried taking a shower, scrubbing myself with every bodywash and bar of
soap I could find. I brushed my hair and my teeth, but didn't feel any cleaner.
I told my mom that something didn't feel right, and she suggested that for once I should clean my room. The thought itself made me
nauseous. I went upstairs to sulk, feeling so overwhelmed that I might as well have been floundering without a boat in the middle of
the Atlantic Ocean.
When I opened the door to my bedroom, everything was in its usual cluttered arrangement. A plate of half-eaten pancakes sat on my desk,
soggy with syrup from the morning. My bikini hung lifelessly from my doorknob, dripping pool water.
I stood in the middle of the cluttered room, breathing in the filthy air that I had become so used to. In the silence of that moment, I began to
hear the clock ticking. I became aware of the moldy smell. I noticed that a spider had spun a shimmering line from my lamp to the top of my
mirror. I shivered in disgust.
I suddenly felt sympathy for everything in my room that I had buried, never to be seen again. Lost items I had blocked out for years made
their way back into my consciousness: my favorite yellow tank top, the picture of my mom and me on that boat in Jamaica, my baseball card
collection.
In desperation, I searched for a box buried under old textbooks, I found a letter that my Poppy had written me at camp. I hadn't thought of
him since his funeral. I suddenly remembered the distinct feel of his soft sweater rubbing warmly against my cheek each time he enveloped
me in a hug. I remembered my dad rocking me to sleep the night Poppy died, and how the tears wouldn't stop.
I sat with his picture, blocking out the rest of the mess around me. I was in the middle of a storm, but I sat there and studied him until I had
memorized every line in his face. Tears began to roll down my cheeks again, and the relief was like the sound of heavy rain pounding on a
roof at the end of a drought.
I had lost sight of the important things in life. Somewhere in my drama of school, crushes, make-up, pimples, and bad hair days, I let my life
become a mess. I needed a change.
For the next six hours, I placed books, baskets, pens, shoes, clothes, make-up, and dirty dishes in their homes. With each piece I moved, I
found more treasures, reminding me of the past and who I was and want to be.
The finishing touch was framing my Poppys letter and hanging it high up on my wall. After all, it was me I had been searching for,
and my Poppy was just there to guide me to my answer.
I liked being a mess. The desk that should have been clear so I could do my homework was always besieged with bowls of cereal
and spoiled milk, old magazines, and Post-it notes I had forgotten to remember. My floor was a vacuum in itself, eating anything
entering my room. It consumed sweaters, stuffed animals, socks, I couldn't always see these things, but I knew that they were safe,
nestled somewhere on a shelf. Like old friends in a phone book, I figured that someday I would find all the loose strings and tie them
together.
One lonely day in August when all of my friends had yet to return from camp in Maine, visiting family in Florida, or some community-
service trip in Mexico, something inside me began to itch. I tried taking a shower, scrubbing myself with every bodywash and bar of
soap I could find. I brushed my hair and my teeth, but didn't feel any cleaner.
I told my mom that something didn't feel right, and she suggested that for once I should clean my room. The thought itself made me
nauseous. I went upstairs to sulk, feeling so overwhelmed that I might as well have been floundering without a boat in the middle of
the Atlantic Ocean.
When I opened the door to my bedroom, everything was in its usual cluttered arrangement. A plate of half-eaten pancakes sat on my desk,
soggy with syrup from the morning. My bikini hung lifelessly from my doorknob, dripping pool water.
I stood in the middle of the cluttered room, breathing in the filthy air that I had become so used to. In the silence of that moment, I began to
hear the clock ticking. I became aware of the moldy smell. I noticed that a spider had spun a shimmering line from my lamp to the top of my
mirror. I shivered in disgust.
I suddenly felt sympathy for everything in my room that I had buried, never to be seen again. Lost items I had blocked out for years made
their way back into my consciousness: my favorite yellow tank top, the picture of my mom and me on that boat in Jamaica, my baseball card
collection.
In desperation, I searched for a box buried under old textbooks, I found a letter that my Poppy had written me at camp. I hadn't thought of
him since his funeral. I suddenly remembered the distinct feel of his soft sweater rubbing warmly against my cheek each time he enveloped
me in a hug. I remembered my dad rocking me to sleep the night Poppy died, and how the tears wouldn't stop.
I sat with his picture, blocking out the rest of the mess around me. I was in the middle of a storm, but I sat there and studied him until I had
memorized every line in his face. Tears began to roll down my cheeks again, and the relief was like the sound of heavy rain pounding on a
roof at the end of a drought.
I had lost sight of the important things in life. Somewhere in my drama of school, crushes, make-up, pimples, and bad hair days, I let my life
become a mess. I needed a change.
For the next six hours, I placed books, baskets, pens, shoes, clothes, make-up, and dirty dishes in their homes. With each piece I moved, I
found more treasures, reminding me of the past and who I was and want to be.
The finishing touch was framing my Poppys letter and hanging it high up on my wall. After all, it was me I had been searching for,
and my Poppy was just there to guide me to my answer.

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Memoir characteristicsofpptpresentation (1)

  • 1. What is a Memoir?What is a Memoir? The writer writes about his relationships with others,The writer writes about his relationships with others, places, animals, or objects that had an impact on him /places, animals, or objects that had an impact on him / her.her. It is focuses on a brief period of time in the writers lifeIt is focuses on a brief period of time in the writers life that he /she wishes to write about.that he /she wishes to write about. The memoir isnt a LIFE story, or a detailed recap of aThe memoir isnt a LIFE story, or a detailed recap of a vacation it is about ONE SINGLE MEMORY.vacation it is about ONE SINGLE MEMORY. The plot of the memoir is about the pain and happinessThe plot of the memoir is about the pain and happiness the writer has been through and how he / she made thethe writer has been through and how he / she made the best of it or how he got through it.best of it or how he got through it. The writer discusses his / her feelings and thoughtsThe writer discusses his / her feelings and thoughts The writer includes emotions.The writer includes emotions. The writer SHOWS not tells.The writer SHOWS not tells.
  • 2. Memoir characteristicsMemoir characteristics continuedcontinued Memoirs haveMemoirs have HOOKSHOOKS that grab the attentionthat grab the attention of the reader from the very beginning.of the reader from the very beginning. The memoirThe memoir engagesengages the reader in athe reader in a conversationalconversational way, so the reader feels likeway, so the reader feels like the writer is speaking to them.the writer is speaking to them. Memoirs are written in such a way that theMemoirs are written in such a way that the reader can learn something from itwe callreader can learn something from itwe call this life lesson athis life lesson a themetheme. This is why the. This is why the memoir is significant to the writer.memoir is significant to the writer. The writer uses descriptive language toThe writer uses descriptive language to appeal to the readers senses. This is called,appeal to the readers senses. This is called, sensory languagesensory language: Smell, touch, hear, see,: Smell, touch, hear, see, taste.taste.
  • 3. Purpose of a MemoirPurpose of a Memoir Ask yourself:Ask yourself: What did I learn about myself?What did I learn about myself? What did I learn about life?What did I learn about life? How have I changed?How have I changed? What does this memory mean toWhat does this memory mean to me?me?
  • 5. I liked being a mess. The desk that should have been clear so I could do my homework was always besieged with bowls of cereal and spoiled milk, old magazines, and Post-it notes I had forgotten to remember. My floor was a vacuum in itself, eating anything entering my room. It consumed sweaters, stuffed animals, socks, I couldn't always see these things, but I knew that they were safe, nestled somewhere on a shelf. Like old friends in a phone book, I figured that someday I would find all the loose strings and tie them together. One lonely day in August when all of my friends had yet to return from camp in Maine, visiting family in Florida, or some community- service trip in Mexico, something inside me began to itch. I tried taking a shower, scrubbing myself with every bodywash and bar of soap I could find. I brushed my hair and my teeth, but didn't feel any cleaner. I told my mom that something didn't feel right, and she suggested that for once I should clean my room. The thought itself made me nauseous. I went upstairs to sulk, feeling so overwhelmed that I might as well have been floundering without a boat in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. When I opened the door to my bedroom, everything was in its usual cluttered arrangement. A plate of half-eaten pancakes sat on my desk, soggy with syrup from the morning. My bikini hung lifelessly from my doorknob, dripping pool water. I stood in the middle of the cluttered room, breathing in the filthy air that I had become so used to. In the silence of that moment, I began to hear the clock ticking. I became aware of the moldy smell. I noticed that a spider had spun a shimmering line from my lamp to the top of my mirror. I shivered in disgust. I suddenly felt sympathy for everything in my room that I had buried, never to be seen again. Lost items I had blocked out for years made their way back into my consciousness: my favorite yellow tank top, the picture of my mom and me on that boat in Jamaica, my baseball card collection. In desperation, I searched for a box buried under old textbooks, I found a letter that my Poppy had written me at camp. I hadn't thought of him since his funeral. I suddenly remembered the distinct feel of his soft sweater rubbing warmly against my cheek each time he enveloped me in a hug. I remembered my dad rocking me to sleep the night Poppy died, and how the tears wouldn't stop. I sat with his picture, blocking out the rest of the mess around me. I was in the middle of a storm, but I sat there and studied him until I had memorized every line in his face. Tears began to roll down my cheeks again, and the relief was like the sound of heavy rain pounding on a roof at the end of a drought. I had lost sight of the important things in life. Somewhere in my drama of school, crushes, make-up, pimples, and bad hair days, I let my life become a mess. I needed a change. For the next six hours, I placed books, baskets, pens, shoes, clothes, make-up, and dirty dishes in their homes. With each piece I moved, I found more treasures, reminding me of the past and who I was and want to be. The finishing touch was framing my Poppys letter and hanging it high up on my wall. After all, it was me I had been searching for, and my Poppy was just there to guide me to my answer.
  • 6. I liked being a mess. The desk that should have been clear so I could do my homework was always besieged with bowls of cereal and spoiled milk, old magazines, and Post-it notes I had forgotten to remember. My floor was a vacuum in itself, eating anything entering my room. It consumed sweaters, stuffed animals, socks, I couldn't always see these things, but I knew that they were safe, nestled somewhere on a shelf. Like old friends in a phone book, I figured that someday I would find all the loose strings and tie them together. One lonely day in August when all of my friends had yet to return from camp in Maine, visiting family in Florida, or some community- service trip in Mexico, something inside me began to itch. I tried taking a shower, scrubbing myself with every bodywash and bar of soap I could find. I brushed my hair and my teeth, but didn't feel any cleaner. I told my mom that something didn't feel right, and she suggested that for once I should clean my room. The thought itself made me nauseous. I went upstairs to sulk, feeling so overwhelmed that I might as well have been floundering without a boat in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. When I opened the door to my bedroom, everything was in its usual cluttered arrangement. A plate of half-eaten pancakes sat on my desk, soggy with syrup from the morning. My bikini hung lifelessly from my doorknob, dripping pool water. I stood in the middle of the cluttered room, breathing in the filthy air that I had become so used to. In the silence of that moment, I began to hear the clock ticking. I became aware of the moldy smell. I noticed that a spider had spun a shimmering line from my lamp to the top of my mirror. I shivered in disgust. I suddenly felt sympathy for everything in my room that I had buried, never to be seen again. Lost items I had blocked out for years made their way back into my consciousness: my favorite yellow tank top, the picture of my mom and me on that boat in Jamaica, my baseball card collection. In desperation, I searched for a box buried under old textbooks, I found a letter that my Poppy had written me at camp. I hadn't thought of him since his funeral. I suddenly remembered the distinct feel of his soft sweater rubbing warmly against my cheek each time he enveloped me in a hug. I remembered my dad rocking me to sleep the night Poppy died, and how the tears wouldn't stop. I sat with his picture, blocking out the rest of the mess around me. I was in the middle of a storm, but I sat there and studied him until I had memorized every line in his face. Tears began to roll down my cheeks again, and the relief was like the sound of heavy rain pounding on a roof at the end of a drought. I had lost sight of the important things in life. Somewhere in my drama of school, crushes, make-up, pimples, and bad hair days, I let my life become a mess. I needed a change. For the next six hours, I placed books, baskets, pens, shoes, clothes, make-up, and dirty dishes in their homes. With each piece I moved, I found more treasures, reminding me of the past and who I was and want to be. The finishing touch was framing my Poppys letter and hanging it high up on my wall. After all, it was me I had been searching for, and my Poppy was just there to guide me to my answer.