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What could be happening or has
             already happened?




27/02/2006                                         1
                                        Khickman
REMEMBER
                   TO to help
     Use the 4 W¡¯s + an H
     you get started.
                     HOOK
                     Who? Where?
             What?      When?   How?
     YOUR READER!
27/02/2006
                                   Khickman
What do they do about the bottle?
             What could be inside?
             How are you going to develop your character?




27/02/2006
                                                            Khickman
What happens that is
             unexpected?
                Are they able to reach the
                bottle?
                -open it?
                -read the message?


27/02/2006
                                             Khickman
What happens as a result of the dilemma?

                             Do they need a boat to chase it?
  Is it a map?

                                    Can they read what¡¯s inside?




27/02/2006
                                                          Khickman
How does everything end?
Could they have a flashback ¨C remember something that help¡¯s them?




  27/02/2006
                                                     Khickman
CHECKLIST
?Have you used 5 paragraphs?
?Does your opening ¡®hook¡¯ the reader?
?Did you use powerful verbs?
?Have you included a flashback?
?Is your punctuation varied and accurate?
?Do your characters spring to life?
?Have you ¡®garbled¡¯? (If so go back and change it!)
?Did you finish in the allotted time?
?Are you pleased with the end result?


    27/02/2006
                                                      Khickman

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  • 1. What could be happening or has already happened? 27/02/2006 1 Khickman
  • 2. REMEMBER TO to help Use the 4 W¡¯s + an H you get started. HOOK Who? Where? What? When? How? YOUR READER! 27/02/2006 Khickman
  • 3. What do they do about the bottle? What could be inside? How are you going to develop your character? 27/02/2006 Khickman
  • 4. What happens that is unexpected? Are they able to reach the bottle? -open it? -read the message? 27/02/2006 Khickman
  • 5. What happens as a result of the dilemma? Do they need a boat to chase it? Is it a map? Can they read what¡¯s inside? 27/02/2006 Khickman
  • 6. How does everything end? Could they have a flashback ¨C remember something that help¡¯s them? 27/02/2006 Khickman
  • 7. CHECKLIST ?Have you used 5 paragraphs? ?Does your opening ¡®hook¡¯ the reader? ?Did you use powerful verbs? ?Have you included a flashback? ?Is your punctuation varied and accurate? ?Do your characters spring to life? ?Have you ¡®garbled¡¯? (If so go back and change it!) ?Did you finish in the allotted time? ?Are you pleased with the end result? 27/02/2006 Khickman