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The document provides instructions for students to engage in peer editing of their writing assignments. It directs students to share their Google Docs with their group members and teacher. It lists things for students to look for during the peer editing process, including keeping paragraphs short, using quotes on their own lines, avoiding first person pronouns, and using a consistent naming convention of last names after introducing a source by their full name. Students are told the teacher will provide suggestions during peer editing and that the final copies are due on Monday.
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- 1. + Today…peer editing • Once you are in groups, share your Google Doc with each other. Make sure you’ve shared with me as well. • I will make suggestions today, and your final copy is due MONDAY.
- 2. + Today…peer editing • Things to look for: • Short paragraphs • Quotes stand alone • No I, we, you • No editorializing/bias—no reporter opinion!
- 3. + Today…peer editing • Things to look for: • Grade Name said for 1st time…after that, ONLY LAST NAME • Senior Megan Martinez said. • Martinez said. Not Megan said.
- 4. +