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In Your Own Words

PARAPHRASING
By the End, You will
           Know
o How to put a passage in
  your own words without
  changing the meaning
o The definition of
  Paraphrasing
o How to find the main idea
  of the text in order to
  paraphrase it
What is Paraphrasing???
o PARAPHRASING IS
o A rewriting of text in your
  own words
o Used to clarify meaning
o Used to shorten a longer
  statement but keeps the
  main ideas
So How Do We Do It?

o Read the passage
  carefully              PARAPHRASE
o Decide the main            ME!
  ideas of the passage
o Highlight important
  words or phrases
o Put the main points
  in your own words
Example 1

 Passage from Book
 Ancient Egyptians
  believed that Osiris, a
  good and wise king, was
  the first pharaoh. He
  spread knowledge to
  other parts of the world,
  while his wife, Isis,
  ruled Egypt in his place.
Poor Example 1
                             Highlighted Passage
   Original Passage         Ancient Egyptians
揃 Ancient Egyptians         believed that Osiris, a
  believed that Osiris, a   good and wise king,
  good and wise king,       was the first pharaoh.
  was the first pharaoh.    He spread knowledge
  He spread knowledge       to other parts of the
  to other parts of the     world, while his wife,
  world, while his wife,    Isis, ruled Egypt in his
  Isis, ruled Egypt in      place.
  his place.
Poor Example 1

   Original Passage            Poor Paraphrasing
揃 Ancient Egyptians           揃 King Osiris was an
  believed that Osiris, a       ancient Egyptian King
  good and wise king, was       and the first pharaoh.
  the first pharaoh. He         He was good and wise
  spread knowledge to           because he spread
  other parts of the world,     knowledge to other parts
  while his wife, Isis,         of the world. His wife
  ruled Egypt in his place.     Isis ruled Egypt in his
                                place.
Good Example 1
                                 HIGHLIGHTED
      ORIGINAL
                                      PASSAGE
       PASSAGE                Ancient Egyptians
揃 Ancient Egyptians           believed that Osiris, a
  believed that Osiris, a     good and wise king,
  good and wise king, was     was the first pharaoh.
  the first pharaoh. He       He spread knowledge
  spread knowledge to         to other parts of the
  other parts of the world,   world, while his wife,
  while his wife, Isis,       Isis, ruled Egypt in his
  ruled Egypt in his place.   place
Good Example 1

      ORIGINAL                  PARAPHRASED
       PASSAGE                    PASSAGE
揃 Ancient Egyptians           揃 King Osiris was the first
  believed that Osiris, a       pharaoh and spread
  good and wise king, was       knowledge. Queen Isis
  the first pharaoh. He         ruled Egypt when he
  spread knowledge to           was gone.
  other parts of the world,
  while his wife, Isis,
  ruled Egypt in his place.
Example 2

                   Passage from Book
                 o Upon returning home,
                   Osiris was murdered by
                   his evil brother Set, who
                   cut Osiriss body into
                   pieces and dumped it in
                   the Nile River. Isis
                   found the body and put
                   it back together by
Osiris and Set
                   winding linen bandages
                   around it.
Poor Example 2
Original Passage
揃 Upon returning              Highlighted
  home, Osiris was             Passage
                         Upon returning home,
  murdered by his evil
                         Osiris was murdered by
  brother, Set who cut
                         his evil brother, Set who
  his body into pieces   cut his body into pieces
  and dumped it in the   and dumped it in the
  Nile River. Isis       Nile River. Isis found
  found the body and     the body and put it back
  put it back together   together by winding
  by winding linen       linen bandages around
  bandages around it.    it.
Poor Example 2

Original Passage              Poor Paraphrasing
揃 Upon returning home,        揃 Osiris was murdered and
  Osiris was murdered by        Isis found the body
  his evil brother, Set who
  cut his body into pieces
  and dumped it in the
  Nile River. Isis found
  the body and put it back
  together by winding
  linen bandages around
  it.
Good Example 2
                              Highlighted Passage
   Original Passage           Upon returning home,
揃 Upon returning home,        Osiris was murdered by
  Osiris was murdered by      his evil brother, Set who
  his evil brother, Set who   cut his body into pieces
  cut his body into pieces
                              and dumped it in the
  and dumped it in the
  Nile River. Isis found      Nile River. Isis found
  the body and put it back    the body and put it back
  together by winding         together by winding
  linen bandages around       linen bandages around it.
  it.
Good Example 2

   Original Passage           Paraphrased Passage
揃 Upon returning home,        揃 Osiriss brother Set
  Osiris was murdered by        killed Osiris by cutting
  his evil brother, Set who     his body into pieces, and
  cut his body into pieces      Isis put the body back
  and dumped it in the          together.
  Nile River. Isis found
  the body and put it back
  together by winding            Isis, Osiriss
  linen bandages around          wife
  it.
Your Turn

Remember the Rules          Passage from Book
o Read the passage         揃 In 1857, a British
  carefully                  expedition led by
o Find the main ideas        Richard Burton and
o Highlight important        John Speke set out to
  words or phrases           find the great lakes
o Put the main points in     shown on Ptolemys
  your own words             map. After reaching
                             Lake Tanganyika, the
                             two men split up
                             because Burton was ill.
Now You Try!

    Remember to highlight               Which one is the best?
       the right words                o Richard Burton and his friend
揃    In 1857, a British expedition      looked for the great lakes
     led by Richard Burton and          shown on Ptolemys map.
     John Speke set out to find the     The men split up.
     great lakes shown on             o In 1857, Richard Burton and
     Ptolemys map. After               John Speke searched for the
     reaching Lake Tanganyika,          great lakes on Ptolemys
     the two men split up because       map, but they had to split up
     Burton was ill.                    when Burton was ill.
                                      o Two men from Britain
                                        looked for the great lakes but
                                        had to split up because one
                                        was ill.
Now You Try!

    Remember to highlight               Which one is the best?
       the right words                -the purple one is correct
揃    In 1857, a British expedition    o Richard Burton and his friend
     led by Richard Burton and        looked for the great lakes shown
     John Speke set out to find the   on Ptolemys map. The men split
     great lakes shown on             up.
     Ptolemys map. After             o In 1857, Richard Burton and
     reaching Lake Tanganyika,        John Speke searched for the great
     the two men split up because     lakes on Ptolemys map, but they
     Burton was ill.                  had to split up when Burton was
                                      ill.
                                      o Two men from Britain looked
                                      for the great lakes but had to split
                                      up because one was ill
Paraphrasing Perfection

    Practice your            Passage from Book
  paraphrasing Skills       揃 Speke discovered
     for Perfection           Victoria Nyanza and
o Read passage and write      was convinced that the
  passage down on piece       White Nile Flowed from
  of paper.                   it. A second expedition
                              proved him right when
o Highlight the key words
                              he found the outlet of
  in the passage.             the Nile at a waterfall
o Paraphrase the passage      which he named Ripon
  in your own words.          Falls.
CONGRATULATIONS!

  YOU HAVE
 SUCCESSFULLY
COMPLETED THIS
  LESSON ON
PARAPHRASING!
   REMEMBER
PRACTICE MAKES
    PERFECT!

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  • 1. In Your Own Words PARAPHRASING
  • 2. By the End, You will Know o How to put a passage in your own words without changing the meaning o The definition of Paraphrasing o How to find the main idea of the text in order to paraphrase it
  • 3. What is Paraphrasing??? o PARAPHRASING IS o A rewriting of text in your own words o Used to clarify meaning o Used to shorten a longer statement but keeps the main ideas
  • 4. So How Do We Do It? o Read the passage carefully PARAPHRASE o Decide the main ME! ideas of the passage o Highlight important words or phrases o Put the main points in your own words
  • 5. Example 1 Passage from Book Ancient Egyptians believed that Osiris, a good and wise king, was the first pharaoh. He spread knowledge to other parts of the world, while his wife, Isis, ruled Egypt in his place.
  • 6. Poor Example 1 Highlighted Passage Original Passage Ancient Egyptians 揃 Ancient Egyptians believed that Osiris, a believed that Osiris, a good and wise king, good and wise king, was the first pharaoh. was the first pharaoh. He spread knowledge He spread knowledge to other parts of the to other parts of the world, while his wife, world, while his wife, Isis, ruled Egypt in his Isis, ruled Egypt in place. his place.
  • 7. Poor Example 1 Original Passage Poor Paraphrasing 揃 Ancient Egyptians 揃 King Osiris was an believed that Osiris, a ancient Egyptian King good and wise king, was and the first pharaoh. the first pharaoh. He He was good and wise spread knowledge to because he spread other parts of the world, knowledge to other parts while his wife, Isis, of the world. His wife ruled Egypt in his place. Isis ruled Egypt in his place.
  • 8. Good Example 1 HIGHLIGHTED ORIGINAL PASSAGE PASSAGE Ancient Egyptians 揃 Ancient Egyptians believed that Osiris, a believed that Osiris, a good and wise king, good and wise king, was was the first pharaoh. the first pharaoh. He He spread knowledge spread knowledge to to other parts of the other parts of the world, world, while his wife, while his wife, Isis, Isis, ruled Egypt in his ruled Egypt in his place. place
  • 9. Good Example 1 ORIGINAL PARAPHRASED PASSAGE PASSAGE 揃 Ancient Egyptians 揃 King Osiris was the first believed that Osiris, a pharaoh and spread good and wise king, was knowledge. Queen Isis the first pharaoh. He ruled Egypt when he spread knowledge to was gone. other parts of the world, while his wife, Isis, ruled Egypt in his place.
  • 10. Example 2 Passage from Book o Upon returning home, Osiris was murdered by his evil brother Set, who cut Osiriss body into pieces and dumped it in the Nile River. Isis found the body and put it back together by Osiris and Set winding linen bandages around it.
  • 11. Poor Example 2 Original Passage 揃 Upon returning Highlighted home, Osiris was Passage Upon returning home, murdered by his evil Osiris was murdered by brother, Set who cut his evil brother, Set who his body into pieces cut his body into pieces and dumped it in the and dumped it in the Nile River. Isis Nile River. Isis found found the body and the body and put it back put it back together together by winding by winding linen linen bandages around bandages around it. it.
  • 12. Poor Example 2 Original Passage Poor Paraphrasing 揃 Upon returning home, 揃 Osiris was murdered and Osiris was murdered by Isis found the body his evil brother, Set who cut his body into pieces and dumped it in the Nile River. Isis found the body and put it back together by winding linen bandages around it.
  • 13. Good Example 2 Highlighted Passage Original Passage Upon returning home, 揃 Upon returning home, Osiris was murdered by Osiris was murdered by his evil brother, Set who his evil brother, Set who cut his body into pieces cut his body into pieces and dumped it in the and dumped it in the Nile River. Isis found Nile River. Isis found the body and put it back the body and put it back together by winding together by winding linen bandages around linen bandages around it. it.
  • 14. Good Example 2 Original Passage Paraphrased Passage 揃 Upon returning home, 揃 Osiriss brother Set Osiris was murdered by killed Osiris by cutting his evil brother, Set who his body into pieces, and cut his body into pieces Isis put the body back and dumped it in the together. Nile River. Isis found the body and put it back together by winding Isis, Osiriss linen bandages around wife it.
  • 15. Your Turn Remember the Rules Passage from Book o Read the passage 揃 In 1857, a British carefully expedition led by o Find the main ideas Richard Burton and o Highlight important John Speke set out to words or phrases find the great lakes o Put the main points in shown on Ptolemys your own words map. After reaching Lake Tanganyika, the two men split up because Burton was ill.
  • 16. Now You Try! Remember to highlight Which one is the best? the right words o Richard Burton and his friend 揃 In 1857, a British expedition looked for the great lakes led by Richard Burton and shown on Ptolemys map. John Speke set out to find the The men split up. great lakes shown on o In 1857, Richard Burton and Ptolemys map. After John Speke searched for the reaching Lake Tanganyika, great lakes on Ptolemys the two men split up because map, but they had to split up Burton was ill. when Burton was ill. o Two men from Britain looked for the great lakes but had to split up because one was ill.
  • 17. Now You Try! Remember to highlight Which one is the best? the right words -the purple one is correct 揃 In 1857, a British expedition o Richard Burton and his friend led by Richard Burton and looked for the great lakes shown John Speke set out to find the on Ptolemys map. The men split great lakes shown on up. Ptolemys map. After o In 1857, Richard Burton and reaching Lake Tanganyika, John Speke searched for the great the two men split up because lakes on Ptolemys map, but they Burton was ill. had to split up when Burton was ill. o Two men from Britain looked for the great lakes but had to split up because one was ill
  • 18. Paraphrasing Perfection Practice your Passage from Book paraphrasing Skills 揃 Speke discovered for Perfection Victoria Nyanza and o Read passage and write was convinced that the passage down on piece White Nile Flowed from of paper. it. A second expedition proved him right when o Highlight the key words he found the outlet of in the passage. the Nile at a waterfall o Paraphrase the passage which he named Ripon in your own words. Falls.
  • 19. CONGRATULATIONS! YOU HAVE SUCCESSFULLY COMPLETED THIS LESSON ON PARAPHRASING! REMEMBER PRACTICE MAKES PERFECT!