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The document summarizes a group's company startup document in four paragraphs. The first paragraph outlines the three main sections of the startup document: background, process, and current situation. The second paragraph states that clear sections and headings help understand the document easily. The third paragraph lists three key areas covered: reasons for starting, mission statement, and future plans/policies. The fourth paragraph notes one confusing sentence due to grammatical errors.
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The document outlines a group's plan to establish an animation company to entertain people of all generations worldwide. The group aims to first make the company famous in Japan and then expand it globally. The document's sections and headings clearly convey the group's plan to create an animation company. It also seems the group members' roles are divided appropriately to set up the company.Peer review exercise # 1
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- 1. 1. <br />I read Group A documents, and I thought organization of the content in this document is as follows. <br />First, the beginning of this sentence is e-mail to Dr. roy that was written this group thinking on the process of setting up the company. <br />Second, The middle of this sentence is explaining the process of setting up their company. <br />Third, The last of this sentence is explaining the current situation and the need for this start-up their company in details. <br />油<br />2. <br />I think the individual sections and headings in the document can clearly represent the idea; because, the individual sections and headings are written to be able to understand the contents of the document at first sight. <br />Therefore, when we make the document, I think the individual sections and headings become very important role. <br />油<br />3. <br />This group document includes some details of contents. <br />First, this document is written the reason in detail why this group started their company. <br />Second, this document is written mission statement of this company. I think idea is indispensable to manage a healthy company. <br />Lastly, this document is written a future of this company and this companys policy in detail. <br />油<br />4. <br /> I felt that the following sentence was confusing expression. <br />There are many people who coming Aizu to commute from other town or city. It is a burden to student who live in out of Aizu. However, they can't live here because Aizu don't have weekly or monthly condo near University of Aizu. <br />When I read this document, I think this sentence make a mistake in grammar here and there, so this sentence becomes incomprehensible. <br />油<br />