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Longing for
Lagen
By John Iremil E. Teodoro
What is the point of
view in the selction?
How would you
describe the feelings
of the narrator?
Why did the narrator
say that ^Lagen is
perfect for writing ̄?
ACTIVITY
?Think of a place that you have visited
before and want to visit again.
?Write a short, first-person paragraph
describing the place, including the
aspects that make it special and
unique.
Criteria Proficient
(8-10 points)
Nearly Proficient
(4-7 points)
Attempted Proficiency
(1-3 points)
Clarity All ideas are expressed
clearly.
Some ideas are
expressed clearly.
Many ideas are
confusing.
Vividness All ideas are articulated
convincingly.
Some ideas are
articulated convincingly.
The manner in which
ideas are articulated is
not convincing enough.
Organization All ideas are presented
in an organized way.
Details mostly evince a
sense of organization.
Details are not
organized properly.
Correctness Grammar, syntax, and
mechanics are correct,
with just one or two
errors.
Grammar, syntax, and
mechanics are largely
correct, with three to
five errors.
The composition is
riddled with errors (six
or more).

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  • 1. Longing for Lagen By John Iremil E. Teodoro
  • 2. What is the point of view in the selction?
  • 3. How would you describe the feelings of the narrator?
  • 4. Why did the narrator say that ^Lagen is perfect for writing ̄?
  • 5. ACTIVITY ?Think of a place that you have visited before and want to visit again. ?Write a short, first-person paragraph describing the place, including the aspects that make it special and unique.
  • 6. Criteria Proficient (8-10 points) Nearly Proficient (4-7 points) Attempted Proficiency (1-3 points) Clarity All ideas are expressed clearly. Some ideas are expressed clearly. Many ideas are confusing. Vividness All ideas are articulated convincingly. Some ideas are articulated convincingly. The manner in which ideas are articulated is not convincing enough. Organization All ideas are presented in an organized way. Details mostly evince a sense of organization. Details are not organized properly. Correctness Grammar, syntax, and mechanics are correct, with just one or two errors. Grammar, syntax, and mechanics are largely correct, with three to five errors. The composition is riddled with errors (six or more).