The document appears to be a collection of disjointed notes and comments about a paper or project that is difficult to follow. It mentions evidence for work done, providing clarity, using pictures and organization to create something that looks like effort was put in. However, it also notes some emptiness and lack of posts that could cause lost marks. The document lacks coherent structure or meaning.
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1. There is
evident, whic
h prove that
she have
done the
work
She
told us
what
she is
wring
about
so that
we are
clear You can see she
has post more
stuff which makes
more useful
2. 意鞄艶姻艶s There is a summery
titles to its give in detail
show what is about
what this
page is
about
Picture they
help the
reader to
imagine the
seen
3. This look
like they
have put
lots of
effort in
to create
it
Organised ,there is
what date ,what
time they meet
,where was the
place ,who came
4. Titles which give an
idea what you going
to read about
Bullet
point
make it
easy to
read
and
underst
and
Organised which
make it look good