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Deimante Sidlauskaite
Deimante Sidlauskaite

The document summarizes audience feedback from a screening of an opening film sequence to evaluate how to improve the product. 28 people were surveyed. Most understood the storyline but some did not. The film felt like a beginning to most but not all. Titles helped understanding. Genre was clearly horror. Sound worked for suspense but voiceover needed clarity. Editing suited the film and made it easy to understand for most but not all. Based on the feedback, the filmmakers will refilm scenes for clearer storyline and new victim, rerecord voiceover, and shorten titles to address issues raised. Additional online feedback reiterated need to address voice clarity and title length.

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HOW DID YOU ADDRESS/ATTRACT YOUR AUDIENCE? Evaluation question 5 :
AUDIENCE FEEDBACK Audience feedback was gathered at our college theater where we presented our opening sequence to 28 people and asked for their feedback to see how we can improve our product through questionnaires and interview. The following questions were asked and we have taken them into consideration:
QUESTION1 Did you understand the story line ? Yes No Sort of 16 out of 28 participants in the screening said that they did understand the story line of the movie. Seven said they did not and four stated sort of. This shows that more than half of the participants understood what we wanted to get across however, there was a number of people that did not, or they were confused. Therefore, we need to improve the way we present our idea so that everyone understands and not only the majority. Due to this, we have changed our story line and filmed a few new scenes which included the woman in the house being in a mental institution due to her gone crazy, as well as a new victim being introduced at the end of our opening sequence.
QUESTION 2 0 10 20 Yes No Did this film feel like the beginning of a film ? Once again, 16 out of 28 stated that it did feel like the beginning of a film. However, there was a number of people that said it did not. This provided us with the relevant information that helped us to decide what we may change and what needs to be changed to make it seem as the very beginning of a movie. Therefore, we filmed new shots which included a crazy woman and her flashback will show us how she got to where she is. At the end we include a new character being introduced. The idea is that the movie will focus on the new character and her being haunted next.
QUESTION 3 0 10 20 30 Yes No Did the titles help you to understand the film ? Most participants stated that the titles did help them to understand the idea of the film. Therefore we will keep the titles as they were represented in the screening.
QUESTION 4 0% 20% 40% 60% 80% 100% Horror Rom-com Heist What type of genre does this film look like ? Everyone understood that the movie is horror which stated that our idea was well presented and the techniques used helped people to decide what genre it is straight away.
QUESTION5 0 10 20 30 Yes No Sort of Did the sound work well with the images ? We used a voice over in our opening sequence. Everyone really liked when asked bout it, and stated that it caused a feeling of suspense. However they said it was not really clear and difficult to understand. By taking this into consideration we recorded a voiceover by using an ediroll in a quite environment so that it clearer and easier to understand.
QUESTION6 Did the editing suit the film and make it easy to understand it ? Yes No 21 out of 28 participants stated that the editing did suit the opening sequence and made it easy to understand. However, a quarter said it did not. I therefore, as an editor will make some changes. Will include slow and creepy scenes as well as a differently recorded and clearer sound in the background to make the editing easy to understand.
FURTHER COMMENTS: Praises Criticisms *Creepiness was good. Well done. *Good editing and sound manipulation. *Good work! *Very interesting. Taking the comments into consideration we will make the voice faster and clearer and we did this by re- recording everything. - We did also develop the story line by making it clear who got haunted and revealing a new victim at the end. We will also make the titles shorter but keep all the editing the same. The voice is too slow Story line should be developed, although it is good already. Great editing but seems more like a trailer. Creepy, but didnt really understand it. Titles are too long. Feels more like a trailer.
ADDITIONAL FEEDBACK I have also posted my video on social media websites to gain some feedback from different people and ages this included facebook and youtube. The feedback from my facebook page summed up also included comments such as: the titles are too long the voice is hard to understand and it seems more like a trailer We therefore, decided to include a different beginning by filming new scenes, have a clearer voice over by recording everything again and I as the editor of the group will make sure the titles are shorter.

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Question 5 of the evaluation.

  • 1. HOW DID YOU ADDRESS/ATTRACT YOUR AUDIENCE? Evaluation question 5 :
  • 2. AUDIENCE FEEDBACK Audience feedback was gathered at our college theater where we presented our opening sequence to 28 people and asked for their feedback to see how we can improve our product through questionnaires and interview. The following questions were asked and we have taken them into consideration:
  • 3. QUESTION1 Did you understand the story line ? Yes No Sort of 16 out of 28 participants in the screening said that they did understand the story line of the movie. Seven said they did not and four stated sort of. This shows that more than half of the participants understood what we wanted to get across however, there was a number of people that did not, or they were confused. Therefore, we need to improve the way we present our idea so that everyone understands and not only the majority. Due to this, we have changed our story line and filmed a few new scenes which included the woman in the house being in a mental institution due to her gone crazy, as well as a new victim being introduced at the end of our opening sequence.
  • 4. QUESTION 2 0 10 20 Yes No Did this film feel like the beginning of a film ? Once again, 16 out of 28 stated that it did feel like the beginning of a film. However, there was a number of people that said it did not. This provided us with the relevant information that helped us to decide what we may change and what needs to be changed to make it seem as the very beginning of a movie. Therefore, we filmed new shots which included a crazy woman and her flashback will show us how she got to where she is. At the end we include a new character being introduced. The idea is that the movie will focus on the new character and her being haunted next.
  • 5. QUESTION 3 0 10 20 30 Yes No Did the titles help you to understand the film ? Most participants stated that the titles did help them to understand the idea of the film. Therefore we will keep the titles as they were represented in the screening.
  • 6. QUESTION 4 0% 20% 40% 60% 80% 100% Horror Rom-com Heist What type of genre does this film look like ? Everyone understood that the movie is horror which stated that our idea was well presented and the techniques used helped people to decide what genre it is straight away.
  • 7. QUESTION5 0 10 20 30 Yes No Sort of Did the sound work well with the images ? We used a voice over in our opening sequence. Everyone really liked when asked bout it, and stated that it caused a feeling of suspense. However they said it was not really clear and difficult to understand. By taking this into consideration we recorded a voiceover by using an ediroll in a quite environment so that it clearer and easier to understand.
  • 8. QUESTION6 Did the editing suit the film and make it easy to understand it ? Yes No 21 out of 28 participants stated that the editing did suit the opening sequence and made it easy to understand. However, a quarter said it did not. I therefore, as an editor will make some changes. Will include slow and creepy scenes as well as a differently recorded and clearer sound in the background to make the editing easy to understand.
  • 9. FURTHER COMMENTS: Praises Criticisms *Creepiness was good. Well done. *Good editing and sound manipulation. *Good work! *Very interesting. Taking the comments into consideration we will make the voice faster and clearer and we did this by re- recording everything. - We did also develop the story line by making it clear who got haunted and revealing a new victim at the end. We will also make the titles shorter but keep all the editing the same. The voice is too slow Story line should be developed, although it is good already. Great editing but seems more like a trailer. Creepy, but didnt really understand it. Titles are too long. Feels more like a trailer.
  • 10. ADDITIONAL FEEDBACK I have also posted my video on social media websites to gain some feedback from different people and ages this included facebook and youtube. The feedback from my facebook page summed up also included comments such as: the titles are too long the voice is hard to understand and it seems more like a trailer We therefore, decided to include a different beginning by filming new scenes, have a clearer voice over by recording everything again and I as the editor of the group will make sure the titles are shorter.