3. Afiah safinatunnajah/X MIPA 1/02
Fall In a Basket of Horse Food
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As an old school kid would love to play a kite. Even kites are not only played
by children but also by parents.If the weather is friendly, daily from noon until
nearly sunset many people flying kites. This story happened when I was in
kindergarten.
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event 02
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It was Sunday so no school. Its about 8:00 am Ive take the kites and tried to
flying the kites. The morning the air still calm and no wind blowing. But I was
not thinking even a little about what the wind does. The most important think
in my mind was flying the kites.
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Past
At that time, there was a wagon of course with the horses a few yards behind continuous
me. The horses was onjoying their food which placed in a big basket. I kept
playing didnt care about anything included the horses behind me. Because
there is no wind and I was unexperinced with this one, the kites still doesnt
fly. When I was walking backward sudenly...GUBRAKK... I stumbled with
something behind me. It was nothing but a bucket of horse food, I didnt get
hurt but it turns out I was under the horses head, I saw their big rectangular
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teeth and cried loudly. The wagon driver rescued me and brought me home,
my pants covered with bran and grass.
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Fortunatelly the horse wasnt startled, because when the horse was startled
theyll run and I might get hit with the wagon. Since then I was no longer
allowed play arround the street.
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