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(Robert) Curtis Lambert

English 101

Professor Bolton

25 July, 2012

Research Paper OUTLINE Addendum to Handwritten Sheet for Outline:

1. The topic of my essay is Media Piracy and the inability of our judicial system to come to any

agreement on what, in todays digital world, clearly defines stealing of illegally downloaded

material. My intent is to clarify why this is a pressing issue and needs to be addressed

expeditiously.

2. The naysayer will be the basis for my paper: Lawernce Lessigs essay, Some Like it Hot. He

spends the majority of the essay talking out of both sides of his mouth and it is my intention to

offer a concise definition of media piracy through a counter-argument with no double-talk.

3. The precedent for media piracy laws have been set since before the turn of the 20th century,

and although the type of media continues to develop and progress at a rate beyond our ability to

keep up, the basic statute of the law has not changed: if one duplicates and/or sells or uses

someone elses media, in any form, without their written or express permission, then they are

breaking the law.

4. Primarily causation: I define what piracy of media is, and why we find ourselves today

debating the root definition.

5. Cause and effect requires you to determine the cause for media piracy in the entertainment

industry, and then to offer several adverse effects this issue is having on the industry and artists

associated with piracy.
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6 a. BODY paragraph 1: The entertainment industry has been working diligently to reduce

copyright infringement since its inception before the turn of the 20th Century.

This statement above corresponds directly with my thesis.

6 b. Hollywood was founded on two production studios refusal to pay royalties to Thomas

Edison, who owned the rights to the inventions the film industry was utilizing at the time.

AND

Anyone with a computer can now have access to any copyrighted works via the Internet.

Research has proven that there are billions of dollars in revenue that is lost around the globe,

directly linked to illegal downloads.

6 c. The LOGOS should appeal to the reader. We should not want to repeat history, as we have

done time and again, on this issue, since the time of Thomas Edison, and before.

6 d. John Gantz and Jack B. Rochester for Pirates of the Digital Millennium : How the

Intellectual Property Wars Damage Our Personal Freedoms, Our Jobs, and the World

Economy, shows that since 2004 the music industry has lost over four billion dollars annually

worldwide and the movie industry has lost over three billion dollars annually in the United States

alone, all due directly to illegal internet downloading of pirated media.

       This sentence above supports my claim that we are robbing artists of monies due them by

our apathetic attitudes toward this issue in the courts.

7 a. BODY paragraph 2: While testifying before the U.S. Senate Committee on Commerce,

Science and Transportation, February 28, 2002, Jack Valenti, President and CEO, Motion Picture

Association of America [MPAA] had this to say:

       At this precise momentworks [movies] are in ever multiplying numbers swarming

       illegally throughout the so-called file sharing sites (a more accurate description would be
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       file-stealing sites)There is one truth that sums up the urgency of this request to

       Congressif you cannot protect what you own you dont own anything. (1)

I use the statement above, which correlates with my thesis, as well as my research article, to

support my claim that there is a need for attention to the time factor that has always plagued

media piracy in developing technology.

7 b. Mr. Valenti eloquently states what most of the entertainment industry feels is the root of

their struggle with the current copyright laws: what do these artists actually own if they have no

control over who has access to it?

AND

Gantz and Rochester go on to address the question and to clearly define in each medium what

piracy is, or at the very least, what it should be. They list several statements as being officially on

record in the dispute to determine fair ownership of copyrighted property:

7 c. The quote from 7 a. above will be my use of PATHOS. I feel that Mr. Valentis statement

rings true to most peoples ears when discussing ownership and theft in those basic terms.

7 d. My reference above comes directly from research compiled by John Gantz and Jack B.

Rochester for Pirates of the Digital Millennium : How the Intellectual Property Wars Damage

Our Personal Freedoms, Our Jobs, and the World Economy.

8 a. BODY paragraph 3: The struggle society continues to have with the term media piracy is the

connotation it evokes of one being a thief.

8 b. Most college students would never consider plagiarizing a work for an essay or research

paper, any more than they would rob a store or break the honor code at their University by

cheating on their final exams. On the other hand, they seem to have no issue downloading and
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sharing music through a Peer-2-Peer file sharing network, even though most would admit that

they know it is wrong, they just dont see it as illegal, and therein lays the problem.

AND

The current copyright laws are so muddled and unclear even Judges struggle to effectively

interpret the statutes.

8 c. ETHOS is the choice for this body paragraph: it is important for the reader to know my

research has been compiled form a variety of sources, and by this point they will have seen 4

sources cited from a variety of experts in different fields.

8 d. In Content Protection in the Digital Age: The Broadcast Flag, High-Definition Radio, and

the Analog Hole , February 22, 2005 the Committee heard testimony via a written statement

from Commissioners Copps and Adelstein dissenting on the Commissions recommendation due,

in part, because the [regulations did] not preclude the use for contentalready in the public

domainand because the criteria adopt[ed] for accepting digital content protection technologies

fail to addressthe impacton personal privacy (99).

         I wanted to use official documented transcripts from U.S. Senate hearings to lend

credibility and an element of trust, that the government is, in fact, dragging their feet on this

issue.

9 a. BODY paragraph 4, The vast majority of the media that is duplicated is done legally and the

artists whose work is being recorded, in any fashion, is compensated according to the law.

9 b. Although it has become increasingly difficult to monitor and protect the rights of artists in

the media industry, due largely to the fact that digital technology changes and advances at

lightning speed in todays market, it is not altogether impossible to keep a watchful eye.

AND
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       The claim that piracy of developing media technology is not new rests upon the

questionable assumption that there is always going to be a certain element in society that does

not adhere to these seemingly random piracy laws, and we need to be patient, while giving the

courts and the laws the opportunity to catch up.

9 c. There are equal amounts of logos and ethos here, both based on factual information that

supports my argument.

9 d. There is no cited research in this paragraph; all of this section is paraphrased from

information gleaned from a variety of sources.

10 a. Counterargument Paragraph: When it comes to the topic of media piracy, most of us will

readily agree that taking someone elses property without their permission is stealing.

10 b. The sentence clearly states a moral directive: most of us will readily agree that taking

someone elses property without their permission is stealing. This is pretty straight-forward and

leaves no room for debate. Stealing is stealing. Period.

10 c. I will present, through a number of quotes and references, that the laws on media piracy are

cloudy, at best, and the youth culture of today sees the proliferation of P-2-P file sharing as

wrong (maybe!), but not illegal.

10 d. I will concede primarily on the basis that public domain, and legal downloads, muddle the

legal waters of what is and is not media piracy.

10 e. I will concede primarily on the basis that public domain, and legal downloads, muddle the

legal waters of what is and is not media piracy.

10 f. Although this outline requires me to state where my counterargument will appear, in all

honesty it [counterargument] is the basis of my entire research paper; therefore, this same

argument, rephrased, appears throughout my paper.
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        11 a. Restated Thesis: The original basis of the law is very clear and leaves no room for

error on this subject. True, the laws have to evolve and adapt as the mediums change, but the

rudimentary basis of the original piracy laws are still applicable: artists own the works they have

created and we owe them monetary compensation when we use their said work, even if we dont

profit from it ourselves. Anything less is stealing.

11 b. The real struggle the entertainment industry has with this approach has more to do with the

negligible attitude of law makers than it does with the artists willingness to allow the laws to be

amended and updated. The original basis of the law is very clear and leaves no room for error on

this subject.

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Research paper outline 25 july 2012

  • 1. Lambert 1 (Robert) Curtis Lambert English 101 Professor Bolton 25 July, 2012 Research Paper OUTLINE Addendum to Handwritten Sheet for Outline: 1. The topic of my essay is Media Piracy and the inability of our judicial system to come to any agreement on what, in todays digital world, clearly defines stealing of illegally downloaded material. My intent is to clarify why this is a pressing issue and needs to be addressed expeditiously. 2. The naysayer will be the basis for my paper: Lawernce Lessigs essay, Some Like it Hot. He spends the majority of the essay talking out of both sides of his mouth and it is my intention to offer a concise definition of media piracy through a counter-argument with no double-talk. 3. The precedent for media piracy laws have been set since before the turn of the 20th century, and although the type of media continues to develop and progress at a rate beyond our ability to keep up, the basic statute of the law has not changed: if one duplicates and/or sells or uses someone elses media, in any form, without their written or express permission, then they are breaking the law. 4. Primarily causation: I define what piracy of media is, and why we find ourselves today debating the root definition. 5. Cause and effect requires you to determine the cause for media piracy in the entertainment industry, and then to offer several adverse effects this issue is having on the industry and artists associated with piracy.
  • 2. Lambert 2 6 a. BODY paragraph 1: The entertainment industry has been working diligently to reduce copyright infringement since its inception before the turn of the 20th Century. This statement above corresponds directly with my thesis. 6 b. Hollywood was founded on two production studios refusal to pay royalties to Thomas Edison, who owned the rights to the inventions the film industry was utilizing at the time. AND Anyone with a computer can now have access to any copyrighted works via the Internet. Research has proven that there are billions of dollars in revenue that is lost around the globe, directly linked to illegal downloads. 6 c. The LOGOS should appeal to the reader. We should not want to repeat history, as we have done time and again, on this issue, since the time of Thomas Edison, and before. 6 d. John Gantz and Jack B. Rochester for Pirates of the Digital Millennium : How the Intellectual Property Wars Damage Our Personal Freedoms, Our Jobs, and the World Economy, shows that since 2004 the music industry has lost over four billion dollars annually worldwide and the movie industry has lost over three billion dollars annually in the United States alone, all due directly to illegal internet downloading of pirated media. This sentence above supports my claim that we are robbing artists of monies due them by our apathetic attitudes toward this issue in the courts. 7 a. BODY paragraph 2: While testifying before the U.S. Senate Committee on Commerce, Science and Transportation, February 28, 2002, Jack Valenti, President and CEO, Motion Picture Association of America [MPAA] had this to say: At this precise momentworks [movies] are in ever multiplying numbers swarming illegally throughout the so-called file sharing sites (a more accurate description would be
  • 3. Lambert 3 file-stealing sites)There is one truth that sums up the urgency of this request to Congressif you cannot protect what you own you dont own anything. (1) I use the statement above, which correlates with my thesis, as well as my research article, to support my claim that there is a need for attention to the time factor that has always plagued media piracy in developing technology. 7 b. Mr. Valenti eloquently states what most of the entertainment industry feels is the root of their struggle with the current copyright laws: what do these artists actually own if they have no control over who has access to it? AND Gantz and Rochester go on to address the question and to clearly define in each medium what piracy is, or at the very least, what it should be. They list several statements as being officially on record in the dispute to determine fair ownership of copyrighted property: 7 c. The quote from 7 a. above will be my use of PATHOS. I feel that Mr. Valentis statement rings true to most peoples ears when discussing ownership and theft in those basic terms. 7 d. My reference above comes directly from research compiled by John Gantz and Jack B. Rochester for Pirates of the Digital Millennium : How the Intellectual Property Wars Damage Our Personal Freedoms, Our Jobs, and the World Economy. 8 a. BODY paragraph 3: The struggle society continues to have with the term media piracy is the connotation it evokes of one being a thief. 8 b. Most college students would never consider plagiarizing a work for an essay or research paper, any more than they would rob a store or break the honor code at their University by cheating on their final exams. On the other hand, they seem to have no issue downloading and
  • 4. Lambert 4 sharing music through a Peer-2-Peer file sharing network, even though most would admit that they know it is wrong, they just dont see it as illegal, and therein lays the problem. AND The current copyright laws are so muddled and unclear even Judges struggle to effectively interpret the statutes. 8 c. ETHOS is the choice for this body paragraph: it is important for the reader to know my research has been compiled form a variety of sources, and by this point they will have seen 4 sources cited from a variety of experts in different fields. 8 d. In Content Protection in the Digital Age: The Broadcast Flag, High-Definition Radio, and the Analog Hole , February 22, 2005 the Committee heard testimony via a written statement from Commissioners Copps and Adelstein dissenting on the Commissions recommendation due, in part, because the [regulations did] not preclude the use for contentalready in the public domainand because the criteria adopt[ed] for accepting digital content protection technologies fail to addressthe impacton personal privacy (99). I wanted to use official documented transcripts from U.S. Senate hearings to lend credibility and an element of trust, that the government is, in fact, dragging their feet on this issue. 9 a. BODY paragraph 4, The vast majority of the media that is duplicated is done legally and the artists whose work is being recorded, in any fashion, is compensated according to the law. 9 b. Although it has become increasingly difficult to monitor and protect the rights of artists in the media industry, due largely to the fact that digital technology changes and advances at lightning speed in todays market, it is not altogether impossible to keep a watchful eye. AND
  • 5. Lambert 5 The claim that piracy of developing media technology is not new rests upon the questionable assumption that there is always going to be a certain element in society that does not adhere to these seemingly random piracy laws, and we need to be patient, while giving the courts and the laws the opportunity to catch up. 9 c. There are equal amounts of logos and ethos here, both based on factual information that supports my argument. 9 d. There is no cited research in this paragraph; all of this section is paraphrased from information gleaned from a variety of sources. 10 a. Counterargument Paragraph: When it comes to the topic of media piracy, most of us will readily agree that taking someone elses property without their permission is stealing. 10 b. The sentence clearly states a moral directive: most of us will readily agree that taking someone elses property without their permission is stealing. This is pretty straight-forward and leaves no room for debate. Stealing is stealing. Period. 10 c. I will present, through a number of quotes and references, that the laws on media piracy are cloudy, at best, and the youth culture of today sees the proliferation of P-2-P file sharing as wrong (maybe!), but not illegal. 10 d. I will concede primarily on the basis that public domain, and legal downloads, muddle the legal waters of what is and is not media piracy. 10 e. I will concede primarily on the basis that public domain, and legal downloads, muddle the legal waters of what is and is not media piracy. 10 f. Although this outline requires me to state where my counterargument will appear, in all honesty it [counterargument] is the basis of my entire research paper; therefore, this same argument, rephrased, appears throughout my paper.
  • 6. Lambert 6 11 a. Restated Thesis: The original basis of the law is very clear and leaves no room for error on this subject. True, the laws have to evolve and adapt as the mediums change, but the rudimentary basis of the original piracy laws are still applicable: artists own the works they have created and we owe them monetary compensation when we use their said work, even if we dont profit from it ourselves. Anything less is stealing. 11 b. The real struggle the entertainment industry has with this approach has more to do with the negligible attitude of law makers than it does with the artists willingness to allow the laws to be amended and updated. The original basis of the law is very clear and leaves no room for error on this subject.