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The full stop story

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Derek wakes up and eats his cereal which has his favorite nan in it. His mother is vacuuming his father and the radio plays Derek's favorite singer, his mother. Outside it is raining people and Derek's mother tells him to stop dawdling or he'll be late yesterday. Derek had been off school with a cold dad and his teacher cried about Derek missing a writing lesson.

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Dereks full. Stop. A Story
Derek woke up, went downstairs and ate his cat
Derek woke up, went downstairs and ate. His cat was playing in his cereal bowl
His cat was playing. In his cereal bowl Derek had his favourite nan
In his cereal bowl Derek had his favourite. Nan had bought it him.
On the radio Derek could hear his favourite pop singer - his mum
On the radio Derek could hear his favourite pop singer. His mum was hoovering up his dad
His mum was hoovering up. His dad was smoking the front door
His mum was hoovering up. His dad was smoking the front door
His dad was smoking. The front door bell went outside
The front door bell went. Outside Derek could hear talking. It was his sister's coat
It was his sisters. "Coat please Mum," said Tina. Mum said, "Put the cups away out in the garden."
Mum said, "Put the cups away. Out in the garden it was raining people.
Out in the garden it was raining. People stood out in the street waiting for the arrival of the bus stop.
People stood out in the street waiting for the arrival of the bus. "Stop dawdling Derek," said Mum, "or you'll be late yesterday."
"Stop dawdling Derek," said Mum, "or you'll be late." Yesterday Derek had been off school with a cold dad.
Yesterday Derek had been off school. Dad said his teacher cried.
Dad said his teacher cried out to him at the school gate that Derek had missed an important lesson on writing.
Dereks full. Stop. The End

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The full stop story

  • 2. Derek woke up, went downstairs and ate his cat
  • 3. Derek woke up, went downstairs and ate. His cat was playing in his cereal bowl
  • 4. His cat was playing. In his cereal bowl Derek had his favourite nan
  • 5. In his cereal bowl Derek had his favourite. Nan had bought it him.
  • 6. On the radio Derek could hear his favourite pop singer - his mum
  • 7. On the radio Derek could hear his favourite pop singer. His mum was hoovering up his dad
  • 8. His mum was hoovering up. His dad was smoking the front door
  • 9. His mum was hoovering up. His dad was smoking the front door
  • 10. His dad was smoking. The front door bell went outside
  • 11. The front door bell went. Outside Derek could hear talking. It was his sister's coat
  • 12. It was his sisters. "Coat please Mum," said Tina. Mum said, "Put the cups away out in the garden."
  • 13. Mum said, "Put the cups away. Out in the garden it was raining people.
  • 14. Out in the garden it was raining. People stood out in the street waiting for the arrival of the bus stop.
  • 15. People stood out in the street waiting for the arrival of the bus. "Stop dawdling Derek," said Mum, "or you'll be late yesterday."
  • 16. "Stop dawdling Derek," said Mum, "or you'll be late." Yesterday Derek had been off school with a cold dad.
  • 17. Yesterday Derek had been off school. Dad said his teacher cried.
  • 18. Dad said his teacher cried out to him at the school gate that Derek had missed an important lesson on writing.