How many hours a day would you save if you didnt have to rewrite (and rewrite) messages or wait for so long for your reader to reply?
Here are 7 ways to trim and tone your business writing to achieve the impact you want.
And here's the link to enrol in the course:
https://presence-training.teachable.com/p/trim-and-tone-your-writing-in-7-easy-steps
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Do you need to write
business documents for
busy readers?
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But you find that
the meaning of your message often gets lost in
folds of fat writing? or
your writing is sluggish unappealing lacking
oomph and lustre? or
you could be compromising credibility because
your writing takes too long to get to the point,
because its weighed down with waffly words?
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Think about how many
hours a day you spend
writing
and re-writing
and waiting for your
reader to reply
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What if your business writing
could get the responses you want
in less time?
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It is possible when you
Trim & Tone
Your Writing in
7 Easy Steps.
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Warm
Up
Get yourself ready for writing
before you click open a fresh file.
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Tone
Up
Choose carefully how
your words are conveyed.
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De-noun
& Verbify
Add energy to your writing
with active language.
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Specify
Tell your reader exactly what you mean.
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Clarify
Remove the clutter and
make your message clear.
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Tighten
Practise Plain English to
speed up understanding.
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Tidy
Proofread and polish your prose.
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To learn the how to and why,
take the self-paced, on-demand
online course
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Trim & Tone
Your Writing in
7 Easy Steps
https://presence-
training.teachable.com
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Sound familiar?
Youre technically competent in your chosen field, but when you
communicate with readers who are not, you dont get the
responses you expect.or
Your job involves so much writing (and re-writing) that you feel
overwhelmed by words and you want to develop some productive
writing habitsor
Youre feeling depleted of writing energy and need some ideas to
refresh your writing style...or
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Maybe
Your manager isn't involving you in interesting projects because
your writing is not reliable and has caused problems for your
teamor
Youre working in a new role and realise that your writing skills
don't match the demands of the job you need to upskill
quickly before your lack is noticedor
Youve discovered that academic and technical writing skills are
not as useful in the world of work as your university or college
lecturers led you to believe
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Learn how to write
with fewer words
for greater impact.
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2 hours of 24/7 access to
recorded lessons
Worksheet and reference list
Mobile and tablet friendly
https://presence-training.teachable.com
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Youll learn how to write
emails
reports
proposals
ministerial briefs
grant applications
+ other business documents
clearly, concisely and confidently.
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Effective communication is one of the
top 5 skills employers want.
Yet 44% of hiring managers say its a
skill most new candidates lack. (Payscale)
https://presence-training.teachable.com
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Gain the advantage.
Learn productive, practical tips you can
start using straight away.
Close that gap in your skillset
in your own time, at your own pace.
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Trim & Tone
Your Writing in
7 Easy Steps
https://presence-
training.teachable.com
Enrol now.