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Television and newspapers should be placed under close government supervision to ensure that
reporting is fair, accurate, and high quality.
To what extent do you agree?
The notion that government have to control the information of reported /published by television and
newspapers is a contentious proposition. Telecommunication and media play a crucial roles role in our
life today. People tend to be believed misguided when they collect the data from these resources
sources, which have the greatest impact on their behaviors.
 Not yet answer the question of topic in the INTRO paragraph.
The reality of the situation is that if the government handle these reporting reports, many people who
are working as writers, copywriters or journalists could be faced to the trouble is face the fact that they
wont will not have the freedom on their sides freedom of the press anymore. It is of tremendous
importance to understand that the root original information should be reported by the writers styles
(???) and the readers have their own permissions to trust or discard these things. There are two sides
for everything, a right one and a wrong one in the event that the government supervisors could not
determine how they are fair or accurate. ??? irrelevant ideas
 Topic sentence of this paragraph is not clear
It must also be recognized that government could do the bad things or supply inaccurate information if
they have the totally total control of contents on TV and newspapers. What will happen if there is
something wrong with government supervisors, their lives, in particularly  need more clarity. These
conditions explain why people were are not interested in the information that is showed on their
governments websites. A prominent example of this principle is in democratic socialism socialist
countries, which used a hostile policies to control ( repetition: control/manage/supervise) information
of their media networks. As a consequence, Their citizens usually connect to a foreign websites that
have been hosted in other countries, in which there are many groups of people discuss news rely on
news on foreign websites to get the information.
Several caveat caveats are in order. People nowadays intend ( intend <> tend) to choose the violence
violent TV programs and media networks for their entertainment. Not yet able to distinguish between
right or wrong, they often imitate the violence they observed observe on TV and accept it as the a
normal way to behave towards others. As is widely known, there are many problems occur which occur
/ occuring to the social society if young people get information by these ways. It is for that reason the
strict laws should have been established adopted / enacted to ensure that information is fair, accurate,
and high quality (should not repeat exactly as of topic), which makes people believe on in their
government.

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  • 1. Television and newspapers should be placed under close government supervision to ensure that reporting is fair, accurate, and high quality. To what extent do you agree? The notion that government have to control the information of reported /published by television and newspapers is a contentious proposition. Telecommunication and media play a crucial roles role in our life today. People tend to be believed misguided when they collect the data from these resources sources, which have the greatest impact on their behaviors. Not yet answer the question of topic in the INTRO paragraph. The reality of the situation is that if the government handle these reporting reports, many people who are working as writers, copywriters or journalists could be faced to the trouble is face the fact that they wont will not have the freedom on their sides freedom of the press anymore. It is of tremendous importance to understand that the root original information should be reported by the writers styles (???) and the readers have their own permissions to trust or discard these things. There are two sides for everything, a right one and a wrong one in the event that the government supervisors could not determine how they are fair or accurate. ??? irrelevant ideas Topic sentence of this paragraph is not clear It must also be recognized that government could do the bad things or supply inaccurate information if they have the totally total control of contents on TV and newspapers. What will happen if there is something wrong with government supervisors, their lives, in particularly need more clarity. These conditions explain why people were are not interested in the information that is showed on their governments websites. A prominent example of this principle is in democratic socialism socialist countries, which used a hostile policies to control ( repetition: control/manage/supervise) information of their media networks. As a consequence, Their citizens usually connect to a foreign websites that have been hosted in other countries, in which there are many groups of people discuss news rely on news on foreign websites to get the information. Several caveat caveats are in order. People nowadays intend ( intend <> tend) to choose the violence violent TV programs and media networks for their entertainment. Not yet able to distinguish between right or wrong, they often imitate the violence they observed observe on TV and accept it as the a normal way to behave towards others. As is widely known, there are many problems occur which occur / occuring to the social society if young people get information by these ways. It is for that reason the strict laws should have been established adopted / enacted to ensure that information is fair, accurate, and high quality (should not repeat exactly as of topic), which makes people believe on in their government.