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Using Transitions

                       Transition




             Idea                   Idea




息 2001 by Ruth Luman
References
Transitions
Look at the two groups of sentences below.
Which sentences read more smoothly? Click on
an answer below.

   My friend, Marcos, loves to play sports and is very athletic.
   He has won a scholarship to play football at a university
   next year.

   My friend, Marcos, loves to play sports and is very athletic.
   In fact, he has won a scholarship to play football at a
   university next year.
Transitions
    What are
transition words?
Transitions
A transition word directly tells the reader the
logical relationship between one idea and
another idea.

                   Transition




        Idea                     Idea
Example
                         ;however,




  Marcos loves to go                 his parents wont allow
swimming in the ocean.                    him to do that.

The transition, however , tells the reader that the
logical relationship between the two ideas is
contrast.
Transitions
Transitions are words that help make
your writing more coherent. They create
connections between:

     - one clause and another clause

     - one sentence and another sentence

     - one group of sentences and the next
       group of sentences
Joining Two Independent Clauses
One way of joining two independent
clauses is with a semicolon, a transition, and
a comma.
                   ; furthermore,




  Marcos is a                        hes very good at
great swimmer                          scuba diving.


   Marcos is a great swimmer ;furthermore, hes very
                  good at scuba diving.
Connecting Two Sentences
You can use a transition and comma to tell the
reader the logical relationship between two
sentences.

                      In fact,



Marcos is very athletic.             he plays three
                                    sports at school.

  Marcos is very athletic. In fact, he plays three sports
                        at school.
Placement of Transition
Rather than placing the transition at the
beginning of the second sentence, you may
place it in the middle of the second sentence
after the subject with two commas.

  Marcos is very athletic.                        transition


                              He, in fact, plays three sports
                             at school.
          subject
Transitions in Longer Writing

When writing a paragraph or a larger piece
of writing,you can use a transition to show
the reader the logical relationship between
one group of sentences and another group
of sentences.

This is useful when you want to let the
reader know that you are changing from
one idea to another idea.
Example- Longer Piece of Writing
  Transition
connects
                        Essay
ideas in
paragraph 2
               Introduction
to ideas in
paragraph 1.
               Body Paragraph 1
                                        Transition
                                      connects
               Body Paragraph 2: In   ideas in
               addition,              paragraph 3
                                      to ideas in
               Body Paragraph 3:      paragraph 2.
               Furthermore,


               Conclusion:
Types of Transitions
     Relationship                  Transition
Addition                   Moreover
                           Furthermore
                           In addition
                           besides



Marcos loves to ski                he likes to fish.

                      ;moreover,
                  ;furthermore,
                  ;in addition,
                      ;besides,
Types of Transitions
       Relationship                        Transition
Reinforcement/Emphasis           Indeed
                                 In fact



                      Marcos plays basketball
 The transition and
second clause                ;in fact,
reemphasize the
first clause.                ;indeed,

                      he plays every Saturday.
Types of Transitions
       Relationship                     Transition
Exemplification                 For example
                                For instance
                                In particular


               Marcos enjoys outdoor sports

    The second
                         ;for example,
clause is more
specific than the        ;for instance,
first.
                         ;in particular,

             he likes hiking, skiing, and fishing.
Types of Transitions
    Relationship                        Transition
   Contrast               However          On the contrary
                          In contrast      On the other hand



Marcos enjoys scuba diving

    ;on the other hand,
                                    $$$
         ;however,
     ;on the contrary,
        ;in contrast,

I think it is an expensive sport.
Types of Transitions
    Relationship                      Transition
   Result or Effect     Consequently        Accordingly
                        Thus                Hence
                        Therefore           As a result


                          ;thus,
Marcos broke his leg ;consequently, he cant play basketball.
                        ;therefore,
                         ;hence,
                       ;as a result,
                       ;accordingly,
Types of Transitions
     Relationship                   Transition
   Time                  Meanwhile (at the same time)
                         Subsequently (after)
                         Thereafter (after)



                       ;subsequently,
Marcos scored a goal                    his team won the game.
                        ;thereafter,




                           after
Practice Exercises
Now you are ready to practice what youve learned. Click
the link below to return to Unit D. Print and complete the
Practice Exercise on transitions. Check your answers with a
tutor.
Correct!
Excellent! This sentence reads more smoothly
because it contains a transition. Transition
words connect ideas within and between
sentences.

 My friend, Marcos, loves to play sports and is very athletic.
 In fact, he has won a scholarship to play football at a
 university next year.
Im Sorry!
These sentence do not read as smoothly.
These sentences contain no transitions to
connect the ideas to each other. Go back to
learn more about using transition words.

My friend, Marcos, loves to play sports and is very athletic.
He has won a scholarship to play football at a university
next year.


                                             No transition words
                                              to connect ideas.
References
   PowerPoint Presentation by Ruth Luman:
    Modesto Junior College.
   This project incorporates portions of copyrighted
    works. These items are included under the fair
    use exemption of the U.S. Copyright Law and
    have been prepared according to the educational
    fair use guidelines. They are restricted from
    further use.

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  • 1. Using Transitions Transition Idea Idea 息 2001 by Ruth Luman References
  • 2. Transitions Look at the two groups of sentences below. Which sentences read more smoothly? Click on an answer below. My friend, Marcos, loves to play sports and is very athletic. He has won a scholarship to play football at a university next year. My friend, Marcos, loves to play sports and is very athletic. In fact, he has won a scholarship to play football at a university next year.
  • 3. Transitions What are transition words?
  • 4. Transitions A transition word directly tells the reader the logical relationship between one idea and another idea. Transition Idea Idea
  • 5. Example ;however, Marcos loves to go his parents wont allow swimming in the ocean. him to do that. The transition, however , tells the reader that the logical relationship between the two ideas is contrast.
  • 6. Transitions Transitions are words that help make your writing more coherent. They create connections between: - one clause and another clause - one sentence and another sentence - one group of sentences and the next group of sentences
  • 7. Joining Two Independent Clauses One way of joining two independent clauses is with a semicolon, a transition, and a comma. ; furthermore, Marcos is a hes very good at great swimmer scuba diving. Marcos is a great swimmer ;furthermore, hes very good at scuba diving.
  • 8. Connecting Two Sentences You can use a transition and comma to tell the reader the logical relationship between two sentences. In fact, Marcos is very athletic. he plays three sports at school. Marcos is very athletic. In fact, he plays three sports at school.
  • 9. Placement of Transition Rather than placing the transition at the beginning of the second sentence, you may place it in the middle of the second sentence after the subject with two commas. Marcos is very athletic. transition He, in fact, plays three sports at school. subject
  • 10. Transitions in Longer Writing When writing a paragraph or a larger piece of writing,you can use a transition to show the reader the logical relationship between one group of sentences and another group of sentences. This is useful when you want to let the reader know that you are changing from one idea to another idea.
  • 11. Example- Longer Piece of Writing Transition connects Essay ideas in paragraph 2 Introduction to ideas in paragraph 1. Body Paragraph 1 Transition connects Body Paragraph 2: In ideas in addition, paragraph 3 to ideas in Body Paragraph 3: paragraph 2. Furthermore, Conclusion:
  • 12. Types of Transitions Relationship Transition Addition Moreover Furthermore In addition besides Marcos loves to ski he likes to fish. ;moreover, ;furthermore, ;in addition, ;besides,
  • 13. Types of Transitions Relationship Transition Reinforcement/Emphasis Indeed In fact Marcos plays basketball The transition and second clause ;in fact, reemphasize the first clause. ;indeed, he plays every Saturday.
  • 14. Types of Transitions Relationship Transition Exemplification For example For instance In particular Marcos enjoys outdoor sports The second ;for example, clause is more specific than the ;for instance, first. ;in particular, he likes hiking, skiing, and fishing.
  • 15. Types of Transitions Relationship Transition Contrast However On the contrary In contrast On the other hand Marcos enjoys scuba diving ;on the other hand, $$$ ;however, ;on the contrary, ;in contrast, I think it is an expensive sport.
  • 16. Types of Transitions Relationship Transition Result or Effect Consequently Accordingly Thus Hence Therefore As a result ;thus, Marcos broke his leg ;consequently, he cant play basketball. ;therefore, ;hence, ;as a result, ;accordingly,
  • 17. Types of Transitions Relationship Transition Time Meanwhile (at the same time) Subsequently (after) Thereafter (after) ;subsequently, Marcos scored a goal his team won the game. ;thereafter, after
  • 18. Practice Exercises Now you are ready to practice what youve learned. Click the link below to return to Unit D. Print and complete the Practice Exercise on transitions. Check your answers with a tutor.
  • 19. Correct! Excellent! This sentence reads more smoothly because it contains a transition. Transition words connect ideas within and between sentences. My friend, Marcos, loves to play sports and is very athletic. In fact, he has won a scholarship to play football at a university next year.
  • 20. Im Sorry! These sentence do not read as smoothly. These sentences contain no transitions to connect the ideas to each other. Go back to learn more about using transition words. My friend, Marcos, loves to play sports and is very athletic. He has won a scholarship to play football at a university next year. No transition words to connect ideas.
  • 21. References PowerPoint Presentation by Ruth Luman: Modesto Junior College. This project incorporates portions of copyrighted works. These items are included under the fair use exemption of the U.S. Copyright Law and have been prepared according to the educational fair use guidelines. They are restricted from further use.