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Seldom use very
Really
Mr. Gibbss pet peeve
Replace the following combinations of words with one defining word...
Very hungry
Really tired
Very curious
Really beautiful
Really gorgeous
Very impressed
Really interesting
Very strange
Really important
Very old
Really expensive
Very smelly
Really stupid
Very hot
Very cold
Really mean
Very happy
Really bad
Very silly
Very serious
Really sorry
Very good
Another way to save words and be more precise...
Write with nouns and verbs, not with adjectives and adverbs.
There is nothing wrong with adjectives and adverbs, but
 The adjective hasnt been built that can pull a  weak  or  inaccurate  noun out of a  tight  place. -- Will Strunk
Replace the following combinations of words with one defining word...
Large dog
Huge tree
fast car
Nice person
Tall flower
Huge fire
Long knife
Giant house
Tall building
Foot protection
Dead body
Heavy rain
Icy rain
Grown calf
Moved slowly
Ran quickly
Flew quickly
Asked sheepishly
Worked laboriously
Fell noisily
Fell slowly
Fell suddenly
Talked quietly
Laughed loudly
Another way to improve writing clarity is to...
Tell what it is, not what it is not.
Replace the following negatives by removing not
Not on time
Not honest
Not remembered
Not nice
Not a pretty sight
Not a good day
Not looking forward to it
Did not pay attention
Did not have much confidence in
Did not feel comfortable
Not unhappy
Not ungrateful
Not interesting
Not working
Not willing
Not a problem
Not a big deal
Not for children
Not outside
Not awake
Not for sale
Not in our lifetime
Not sure
O.K. Thats enough
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