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LETTER OF ADJUSTMENT




                       1
Letter of Adjustment
(Reply to Complaint)

Some Notes:
 Use a courteous and tactful tone

 Deal with complaints promptly

 Show some form of apology for the inconveniences
caused



                                                     2
Complaints could be dealt with by :


                    Accepting
Accepting fully                     Refusing the
                   partially the
 the claim of                         claim of
                     claim of
  complaint                          complaint
                    complaint


                                                   3
Customer ordered 20 pairs of Size 5 jeans
but received 10 pairs of Size 8.

You found out that there was a mix-up in the
order.


               Accept fully (A*)
             Accept partially (AP)
              Refuse totally (R)

                                               4
Customer complained that 3 out of the 50
apples ordered were rotten, and requested
replacements.



              Accept fully (A*)
            Accept partially (AP)
             Refuse totally (R)

                                       5
Customer complained that T shirts bought
was badly stained and requested for a total
refund.

You have received 5 other similar
complaints and suspect that the colours are
nonfast.

               Accept fully (A*)
             Accept partially (AP)
              Refuse totally (R)
                                          6
Buyer complained that the newly bought
electric hot plate was not hot enough and
demanded a total refund.

You suspect that there is a minor fault which
could be recti鍖ed.

               Accept fully (A*)
             Accept partially (AP)
              Refuse totally (R)

                                            7
Customer complained that the food served
was bland and demanded a full refund.

You investigated and found nothing amiss.



              Accept fully (A*)
            Accept partially (AP)
             Refuse totally (R)

                                            8
As a seller, you always have to
 Investigate and verify the facts mentioned
 Decide whether the claims are reasonable or
 unreasonable
 Decide on an appropriate remedial action




                                                9
Accept Fully


               10
Accept Fully




               Para 1 : Introduction




                                       11
Accept Fully


                Para 1 : Introduction




       Acknowledge the letter of complaint
            Mention date of letter
            Summarize brie鍖y the nature of the complaint received




                                                               12
Accept Fully


                Para 1 : Introduction

      Useful Expressions


      Thank you for your letter regarding Order No 2345, in which you
      mentioned that 

      We refer to your letter of 2 Oct, in which you informed us that the wrong
      model was sent to you.

      We received your letter of 4 Oct, and noted that you were very
      dissatis鍖ed with our staff兵s service.

      We received your letter of 6 Oct, and regret to hear that you were
      dissatis鍖ed with the workmanship of the renovation works completed at
      your premises.

                                                                             13
Accept Fully




               Para 2 : Acceptance & Apology




                                               14
Accept Fully



               Para 2 : Acceptance & Apology




      State acceptance of claim


      Apologise for the inconveniences caused




                                                15
Accept Fully



               Para 2 : Acceptance & Apology

      Useful Expressions


      We are sorry to have sent you the wrong model.

      We apologise for not sending you the shoe laces.

      We have sent our representative to investigate and noted that the
      workmanship was indeed shoddy.

      We have checked with the staff concerned, and would agree with you
      that our staff had handled the situation inappropriately. We understand
      you have suffered much embarrassment.



                                                                                16
Accept Fully




               Para 3 : Explanation




                                      17
Accept Fully



           Para 3 : Explanation


      Explain reasons for error


      Examples:
      - Manufacturer was unable to produce the required parts on time, and had
      caused the delay.
      - Firm was facing labour shortage and was unable to 鍖nd good workers.
      - Staff- in-charge had resigned, and the order was handled by part-time
      inexperienced worker.




                                                                            18
Accept Fully



        Para 3 : Explanation

      Useful Expressions


      Part-time staff were employed to handle your order, and they have mixed
      up your order with that of another 鍖rm. We are indeed sorry for the
      mistake.

      The delay was caused by a massive machine breakdown at the
      manufacturer兵s plant. It took them a week to repair and to resume
      production works.

      Upon investigation, our representative reported that inexperienced
      foreign workers were hired to carry out the renovation works.



                                                                           19
Accept Fully




               Para 4 : Reassurance




                                      20
Accept Fully



          Para 4 : Reassurance




      Reassure error will not be repeated


      Mention the remedial actions that you will take
      - Specify date, person to contact etc.




                                                        21
Accept Fully



        Para 4 : Reassurance

      Useful Expressions


      We will take the necessary action to prevent similar mistakes. The
      correct model will be sent to you by 8 Oct.


      Please be assured that our ef鍖ciency will not be lacking in the future, and
      we will instruct our supervisors to be very strict with their staff.




                                                                              22
Accept Fully




               Para 5 : Conclusion




                                     23
Accept Fully



           Para 5 : Conclusion




      Conclude appropriately in a friendly way.




                                                  24
Accept Fully



       Para 5 : Conclusion



      Useful Expressions


      We hope you are satis鍖ed with our arrangements.


      We look forward to your next order.




                                                        25
Accept Partially


                   26
Accept Partially




                   Para 1 : Introduction




                                           27
Accept Partially



                   Para 1 : Introduction




      Acknowledge the letter of complaint
           Mention date of letter
           Summarize brie鍖y the nature of the complaint received




                                                               28
Accept Partially




      Useful Expressions


      Thank you for your letter regarding Order No 2345, in which you
      mentioned that 

      We refer to your letter of 2 Oct, in which you informed us that the wrong
      model was sent to you.

      We received your letter of 4 Oct, and noted that you were very
      dissatis鍖ed with our staff兵s service.

      We received your letter of 6 Oct, and regret to hear that you were
      dissatis鍖ed with the workmanship of the renovation works completed at
      your premises.



                                                                             29
Accept Partially




                   Para 2 : Investigation




                                            30
Accept Partially



                   Para 2 : Investigation




      Mention that case had been investigated


      Conclude that your 鍖rm is not solely responsible for the
      error




                                                           31
Accept Partially




      Useful Expressions




      We have checked your Purchase Order No 2354, and noted
      that you have indicated 15 Oct as the delivery deadline, and not
      5 Oct as claimed in your letter. It could have been an oversight
      on the part of your staff.


      Our representative had checked on the bales of cloth at your
      warehouse, and noted that only two out of the 20 bales were
      soiled due to poor packaging.


                                                                     32
Accept Partially




                   Para 3 : Alternative Solution




                                                   33
Accept Partially



                   Para 3 : Alternative Solution




      Suggest alternative solution
           Offer partial refund or replacement
           Offer small discounts
           Provide repairs at nominal fee




                                                   34
Accept Partially



                   Para 3 : Alternative Solution

      Useful Expressions


      We will send you the additional 10 boxes of pencils without
      charging you delivery costs.


      We will send the replacement for the two bales of soiled cloth at
      no additional cost by 12 Oct. However, we will not accede to
      your request for a 20% price reduction. You will understand that
      we operate on very thin pro鍖t margin and our prices are the
      lowest in the market.

                                                                    35
Accept Partially




                   Para 4 : Seek Agreement




                                             36
Accept Partially



       Para 4 : Seek Agreement




      Seek agreement to solution proposed




                                            37
Accept Partially



       Para 4 : Seek Agreement



      Useful Expressions


      We hope you are satis鍖ed with the proposed arrangement and
      con鍖rm your agreement by calling or faxing us.


      Please con鍖rm in writing your agreement to our proposal by 15
      Oct.




                                                                 38
Accept Partially

     Para 5 (Conclusion)
     Express regret for inconvenience caused


         Useful Expressions


             We would like to apologise for any inconveniences caused and look
             forward to your continual patronage.
             We look forward to serving you again.




                                                                                 39
Refuse


         40
Refuse




         Para 1 : Introduction




                                 41
Refuse



              Para 1 : Introduction




    Acknowledge the letter of complaint
          Mention date of letter
          Summarize brie鍖y the nature of the complaint received




                                                              42
Refuse




    Useful Expressions


    Thank you for your letter regarding Order No 2345, in which you
    mentioned that 

    We refer to your letter of 2 Oct, in which you informed us that the wrong
    model was sent to you.

    We received your letter of 4 Oct, and noted that you were very
    dissatis鍖ed with our staff兵s service.

    We received your letter of 6 Oct, and regret to hear that you were
    dissatis鍖ed with the workmanship of the renovation works completed at
    your premises.



                                                                           43
Refuse




         Para 2 : Verification of Facts




                                          44
Refuse



     Para 2 : Verification of Facts




    Mention actions taken to verify the facts mentioned by
    writer




                                                         45
Refuse




    Useful Expressions


    We have checked our delivery note against your order, and
    noted that the correct model was sent to you.


    We have checked with our staff, and noted that the food
    ordered was served within 10 minutes and not one hour as
    mentioned.


    Our representative had checked the bales of cloth, and
    reported that none of the 20 bales was soiled due to poor
    packaging.

                                                                46
Refuse




         Para 3 : Disclaim Responsibility & Explain Why




                                                          47
Refuse




  Para 3 :
  Disclaim Responsibility & Explain Why



    Disclaim responsibility and explain the reasons for not
    acceding to the writer兵s claim.




                                                          48
Refuse




    Useful Expressions




    The evidence gathered showed that the error was not due to
    our negligence. It was an error in your order.


    Under such circumstances, we are unable to replace the bales
    of cloth as requested.


    Our investigation showed that our staff was provoked by your
    unreasonable demand.


                                                                   49
Refuse
    Para 4 (Conclusion)
    Conclude appropriately
     Useful Expressions



         We would like to apologise for any inconveniences caused.
         We look forward to serving you again.




                                                                     50
A summary for writing Letters of Adjustment...


             Complaints could be dealt with by :

  Accepting fully            Accepting                Refusing the
   the claim of             partially the               claim of
    complaint                 claim of                 complaint
                             complaint
 - Introduction                                     - Introduction
 - Acceptance of Claim   - Introduction             - Verification of Facts
 - Apology               - Investigation of Facts   - Disclaim
 - Explanation           - Conclude firm is not     responsibility and
 - Reassurance           solely at fault            explain why
 - Conclusion            - Alternative Solution     - Conclusion
                         - Seek Agreement
                         - Conclusion
                                                                      51
Task of the Day
(30 October 2012)

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  • 2. Letter of Adjustment (Reply to Complaint) Some Notes: Use a courteous and tactful tone Deal with complaints promptly Show some form of apology for the inconveniences caused 2
  • 3. Complaints could be dealt with by : Accepting Accepting fully Refusing the partially the the claim of claim of claim of complaint complaint complaint 3
  • 4. Customer ordered 20 pairs of Size 5 jeans but received 10 pairs of Size 8. You found out that there was a mix-up in the order. Accept fully (A*) Accept partially (AP) Refuse totally (R) 4
  • 5. Customer complained that 3 out of the 50 apples ordered were rotten, and requested replacements. Accept fully (A*) Accept partially (AP) Refuse totally (R) 5
  • 6. Customer complained that T shirts bought was badly stained and requested for a total refund. You have received 5 other similar complaints and suspect that the colours are nonfast. Accept fully (A*) Accept partially (AP) Refuse totally (R) 6
  • 7. Buyer complained that the newly bought electric hot plate was not hot enough and demanded a total refund. You suspect that there is a minor fault which could be recti鍖ed. Accept fully (A*) Accept partially (AP) Refuse totally (R) 7
  • 8. Customer complained that the food served was bland and demanded a full refund. You investigated and found nothing amiss. Accept fully (A*) Accept partially (AP) Refuse totally (R) 8
  • 9. As a seller, you always have to Investigate and verify the facts mentioned Decide whether the claims are reasonable or unreasonable Decide on an appropriate remedial action 9
  • 11. Accept Fully Para 1 : Introduction 11
  • 12. Accept Fully Para 1 : Introduction Acknowledge the letter of complaint Mention date of letter Summarize brie鍖y the nature of the complaint received 12
  • 13. Accept Fully Para 1 : Introduction Useful Expressions Thank you for your letter regarding Order No 2345, in which you mentioned that We refer to your letter of 2 Oct, in which you informed us that the wrong model was sent to you. We received your letter of 4 Oct, and noted that you were very dissatis鍖ed with our staff兵s service. We received your letter of 6 Oct, and regret to hear that you were dissatis鍖ed with the workmanship of the renovation works completed at your premises. 13
  • 14. Accept Fully Para 2 : Acceptance & Apology 14
  • 15. Accept Fully Para 2 : Acceptance & Apology State acceptance of claim Apologise for the inconveniences caused 15
  • 16. Accept Fully Para 2 : Acceptance & Apology Useful Expressions We are sorry to have sent you the wrong model. We apologise for not sending you the shoe laces. We have sent our representative to investigate and noted that the workmanship was indeed shoddy. We have checked with the staff concerned, and would agree with you that our staff had handled the situation inappropriately. We understand you have suffered much embarrassment. 16
  • 17. Accept Fully Para 3 : Explanation 17
  • 18. Accept Fully Para 3 : Explanation Explain reasons for error Examples: - Manufacturer was unable to produce the required parts on time, and had caused the delay. - Firm was facing labour shortage and was unable to 鍖nd good workers. - Staff- in-charge had resigned, and the order was handled by part-time inexperienced worker. 18
  • 19. Accept Fully Para 3 : Explanation Useful Expressions Part-time staff were employed to handle your order, and they have mixed up your order with that of another 鍖rm. We are indeed sorry for the mistake. The delay was caused by a massive machine breakdown at the manufacturer兵s plant. It took them a week to repair and to resume production works. Upon investigation, our representative reported that inexperienced foreign workers were hired to carry out the renovation works. 19
  • 20. Accept Fully Para 4 : Reassurance 20
  • 21. Accept Fully Para 4 : Reassurance Reassure error will not be repeated Mention the remedial actions that you will take - Specify date, person to contact etc. 21
  • 22. Accept Fully Para 4 : Reassurance Useful Expressions We will take the necessary action to prevent similar mistakes. The correct model will be sent to you by 8 Oct. Please be assured that our ef鍖ciency will not be lacking in the future, and we will instruct our supervisors to be very strict with their staff. 22
  • 23. Accept Fully Para 5 : Conclusion 23
  • 24. Accept Fully Para 5 : Conclusion Conclude appropriately in a friendly way. 24
  • 25. Accept Fully Para 5 : Conclusion Useful Expressions We hope you are satis鍖ed with our arrangements. We look forward to your next order. 25
  • 27. Accept Partially Para 1 : Introduction 27
  • 28. Accept Partially Para 1 : Introduction Acknowledge the letter of complaint Mention date of letter Summarize brie鍖y the nature of the complaint received 28
  • 29. Accept Partially Useful Expressions Thank you for your letter regarding Order No 2345, in which you mentioned that We refer to your letter of 2 Oct, in which you informed us that the wrong model was sent to you. We received your letter of 4 Oct, and noted that you were very dissatis鍖ed with our staff兵s service. We received your letter of 6 Oct, and regret to hear that you were dissatis鍖ed with the workmanship of the renovation works completed at your premises. 29
  • 30. Accept Partially Para 2 : Investigation 30
  • 31. Accept Partially Para 2 : Investigation Mention that case had been investigated Conclude that your 鍖rm is not solely responsible for the error 31
  • 32. Accept Partially Useful Expressions We have checked your Purchase Order No 2354, and noted that you have indicated 15 Oct as the delivery deadline, and not 5 Oct as claimed in your letter. It could have been an oversight on the part of your staff. Our representative had checked on the bales of cloth at your warehouse, and noted that only two out of the 20 bales were soiled due to poor packaging. 32
  • 33. Accept Partially Para 3 : Alternative Solution 33
  • 34. Accept Partially Para 3 : Alternative Solution Suggest alternative solution Offer partial refund or replacement Offer small discounts Provide repairs at nominal fee 34
  • 35. Accept Partially Para 3 : Alternative Solution Useful Expressions We will send you the additional 10 boxes of pencils without charging you delivery costs. We will send the replacement for the two bales of soiled cloth at no additional cost by 12 Oct. However, we will not accede to your request for a 20% price reduction. You will understand that we operate on very thin pro鍖t margin and our prices are the lowest in the market. 35
  • 36. Accept Partially Para 4 : Seek Agreement 36
  • 37. Accept Partially Para 4 : Seek Agreement Seek agreement to solution proposed 37
  • 38. Accept Partially Para 4 : Seek Agreement Useful Expressions We hope you are satis鍖ed with the proposed arrangement and con鍖rm your agreement by calling or faxing us. Please con鍖rm in writing your agreement to our proposal by 15 Oct. 38
  • 39. Accept Partially Para 5 (Conclusion) Express regret for inconvenience caused Useful Expressions We would like to apologise for any inconveniences caused and look forward to your continual patronage. We look forward to serving you again. 39
  • 40. Refuse 40
  • 41. Refuse Para 1 : Introduction 41
  • 42. Refuse Para 1 : Introduction Acknowledge the letter of complaint Mention date of letter Summarize brie鍖y the nature of the complaint received 42
  • 43. Refuse Useful Expressions Thank you for your letter regarding Order No 2345, in which you mentioned that We refer to your letter of 2 Oct, in which you informed us that the wrong model was sent to you. We received your letter of 4 Oct, and noted that you were very dissatis鍖ed with our staff兵s service. We received your letter of 6 Oct, and regret to hear that you were dissatis鍖ed with the workmanship of the renovation works completed at your premises. 43
  • 44. Refuse Para 2 : Verification of Facts 44
  • 45. Refuse Para 2 : Verification of Facts Mention actions taken to verify the facts mentioned by writer 45
  • 46. Refuse Useful Expressions We have checked our delivery note against your order, and noted that the correct model was sent to you. We have checked with our staff, and noted that the food ordered was served within 10 minutes and not one hour as mentioned. Our representative had checked the bales of cloth, and reported that none of the 20 bales was soiled due to poor packaging. 46
  • 47. Refuse Para 3 : Disclaim Responsibility & Explain Why 47
  • 48. Refuse Para 3 : Disclaim Responsibility & Explain Why Disclaim responsibility and explain the reasons for not acceding to the writer兵s claim. 48
  • 49. Refuse Useful Expressions The evidence gathered showed that the error was not due to our negligence. It was an error in your order. Under such circumstances, we are unable to replace the bales of cloth as requested. Our investigation showed that our staff was provoked by your unreasonable demand. 49
  • 50. Refuse Para 4 (Conclusion) Conclude appropriately Useful Expressions We would like to apologise for any inconveniences caused. We look forward to serving you again. 50
  • 51. A summary for writing Letters of Adjustment... Complaints could be dealt with by : Accepting fully Accepting Refusing the the claim of partially the claim of complaint claim of complaint complaint - Introduction - Introduction - Acceptance of Claim - Introduction - Verification of Facts - Apology - Investigation of Facts - Disclaim - Explanation - Conclude firm is not responsibility and - Reassurance solely at fault explain why - Conclusion - Alternative Solution - Conclusion - Seek Agreement - Conclusion 51
  • 52. Task of the Day (30 October 2012) Page 172 52