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                          Jerry Z
                           2012



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Test Structure of IELTS

                               Writing
                               Task 1




     Line
    Graph             Pie           Table of   Process
                     Chart          Figures    Diagram
  Bar Chart
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What to expect
         20 minutes, 150 words
 In Task 1, candidates are given a task
 based on some graphic or pictorial
 information. You are expected to write a
 descriptive report of at least 150 words on
 the information provided, and advised to
 spend approximately 20 minutes on the
 task.
 You are assessed on the ability to:
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Task 1 Strategy
  ? Describing trends -- Line Graphs
  ? Summarizing data -- Bar Charts
  ? Describing facts and figures -- Pie Charts/
    Tables of figures
  ? Describing a process -- Process Diagrams


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Section one of the Writing test
                Line Graph
    Line Graphs are used to show a trend
    or pattern which usually takes place
    over a period of time. It is important to
    look at:
    ?Patterns/Trends of different phases on
    a line graph
    ?Significant features


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How to achieve-
             Describing trends
  Steps can be done as followed:
      1. What information is being shown
      in the graph below?
      2. Here are two simple descriptions
      of the graph information about
      trends:


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Describing a general trend

  ? The number of overseas students has
    risen. Or
  ? The graph shows an increase in the
    number of overseas students at the
    university.



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Developing your ideas

        ?Try to add 'considerably' to the first
        sentence and 'considerable' to the
        second one.
        ?Tell what effect does this word
        have?



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Thinking of...
  3. What are some Words and Phrases to
    describe trends:

  4. Compose a sentence which describes
    trends and includes more figure to support.



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Trend Type one    Trend Type two    Trend Type three   adjectives and adverbs


an increase       a decrease        remain the same    sharp(ly)
a rise            a fall            reach a plateau    dramatic(ally)
a peak            a drop            hit a high/ low    large(ly)
a summit          a decline         plateau            significant(ly)
the maximum       a dip             remain stable      considerable(ly)
reach a peak      reach the         remain constant    steep(ly)
peak at           minimum           stand at           steady(ily)
hit the highest   hit the lowest    stabilize at       slight(ly)
point at          point at          A parallel B       gradual(ly)
reach a summit    decrease/ fall/   fluctuation        relative(ly)
                  drop further to
increase/ rise
further to




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Increasing or Decreasing Trends
 ? Look at this bar chart. The information it
   presents shows a consistent overall trend.
 ? First ask yourself these questions:
  - what is the chart about?
  - what does the horizontal axis show?
  - what does the vertical axis show?
  - what overall trend does the graph show?
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Look at the chart carefully, then complete these descriptions of
the overall trend. And then include more figures.


 ? 1 Between ¡­¡­ and ¡­¡­ the global
   number of text messages sent rose
   steadily.
 ? 2 There was ¡­¡­ in the global number of
   text messages sent ¡­¡­
 ? 3 The number of text messages sent
   worldwide rose from ¡­¡­ in ¡­¡­ to ¡­¡­
   in ¡­¡­

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Suggested answer

  ? 1. 1998, 2002
  ? 2. a steady increase, between 1998 and
       2002
    3. 4 billion, 1998, 80 billion, 2002



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Trends: Stability
 ? Look at the examples of ¡®stability¡¯ shown in
   the two graphs.
 ? Write two sentences which describe the
   overall trends in one graph.
 ? Write two or more sentences to form a
   short paragraph which describes the other
   graph.

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Model and suggested answers
  - Average attendance at NBA matches in
    America has remained fairly stable since
    1996 at 17,000 spectators per game.
  - Although attendance at Dallas Maverick
    games dropped sharply between 1996
    and 1998, it has risen equally sharply
    since then and is now almost equal to the
    NBA average.

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Model and suggested answers,
Continued
  - Membership at Jay¡¯s Sports Club rose
    during the first three months of last year
    from 50 to approximately 120.
  - Between March and August this figure
    remained stable but in September there
    was a sudden rise in membership
    numbers, which reached a peak of 175 in
    October.
  - After that, figures fell again to a low of 100
    in December.
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Further practice for
             Describing the trends

 ? Exercise required:
  - Using some of the words and
    phrases in the table, describe the
    pattern in each graph below;

  - Describe each pattern using a verb.

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Trends: Fluctuation
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 ? Write one-sentence description of the
   graph that provides an overall picture of
   the trend.
 ? Write five or more sentences about the
   graph, using the prompts below.
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? There may be several possibilities.

 ? During the course of a televised World
   Cup football match electricity consumption
   fluctuates widely/ undergoes considerable
   fluctuation.




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- At the start ¡­¡­
 - There is a ¡­¡­ during the first ¡­¡­ but
   then ¡­¡­
 - Demand falls again ¡­¡­ lowest point ¡­¡­
 - In the last forty minutes ¡­¡­
 - However, at the beginning ¡­¡­ plateau
   ¡­¡­ resume normal ¡­¡­


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Suggested answer
 - At the start of the match, demand for electricity stands at
   about 28,500 units.
 - There is a significant fall in demand during the first hour of
   the match but then the demand rises steeply and peaks at
   29,000 units at half time.
 - Demand falls again quite sharply at the start of the
   second half and hits its lowest point at 26,000 units.
 - In the last forty minutes of the match, electricity
   consumption increases steadily to just over 28,000 units.
 - However, at the beginning of the extra-time period
   consumption falls dramatically, hits a low plateau and
   then immediately rises to resume normal consumption
   levels at the end of this period.
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The End

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  • 2. Test Structure of IELTS Writing Task 1 Line Graph Pie Table of Process Chart Figures Diagram Bar Chart www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 3. What to expect 20 minutes, 150 words In Task 1, candidates are given a task based on some graphic or pictorial information. You are expected to write a descriptive report of at least 150 words on the information provided, and advised to spend approximately 20 minutes on the task. You are assessed on the ability to: www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 4. Task 1 Strategy ? Describing trends -- Line Graphs ? Summarizing data -- Bar Charts ? Describing facts and figures -- Pie Charts/ Tables of figures ? Describing a process -- Process Diagrams www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 5. Section one of the Writing test Line Graph Line Graphs are used to show a trend or pattern which usually takes place over a period of time. It is important to look at: ?Patterns/Trends of different phases on a line graph ?Significant features www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 6. How to achieve- Describing trends Steps can be done as followed: 1. What information is being shown in the graph below? 2. Here are two simple descriptions of the graph information about trends: www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 7. Describing a general trend ? The number of overseas students has risen. Or ? The graph shows an increase in the number of overseas students at the university. www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 8. Developing your ideas ?Try to add 'considerably' to the first sentence and 'considerable' to the second one. ?Tell what effect does this word have? www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 9. Thinking of... 3. What are some Words and Phrases to describe trends: 4. Compose a sentence which describes trends and includes more figure to support. www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 10. Trend Type one Trend Type two Trend Type three adjectives and adverbs an increase a decrease remain the same sharp(ly) a rise a fall reach a plateau dramatic(ally) a peak a drop hit a high/ low large(ly) a summit a decline plateau significant(ly) the maximum a dip remain stable considerable(ly) reach a peak reach the remain constant steep(ly) peak at minimum stand at steady(ily) hit the highest hit the lowest stabilize at slight(ly) point at point at A parallel B gradual(ly) reach a summit decrease/ fall/ fluctuation relative(ly) drop further to increase/ rise further to www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 11. Increasing or Decreasing Trends ? Look at this bar chart. The information it presents shows a consistent overall trend. ? First ask yourself these questions: - what is the chart about? - what does the horizontal axis show? - what does the vertical axis show? - what overall trend does the graph show? www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 12. Look at the chart carefully, then complete these descriptions of the overall trend. And then include more figures. ? 1 Between ¡­¡­ and ¡­¡­ the global number of text messages sent rose steadily. ? 2 There was ¡­¡­ in the global number of text messages sent ¡­¡­ ? 3 The number of text messages sent worldwide rose from ¡­¡­ in ¡­¡­ to ¡­¡­ in ¡­¡­ www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 13. Suggested answer ? 1. 1998, 2002 ? 2. a steady increase, between 1998 and 2002 3. 4 billion, 1998, 80 billion, 2002 www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 14. Trends: Stability ? Look at the examples of ¡®stability¡¯ shown in the two graphs. ? Write two sentences which describe the overall trends in one graph. ? Write two or more sentences to form a short paragraph which describes the other graph. www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 15. Model and suggested answers - Average attendance at NBA matches in America has remained fairly stable since 1996 at 17,000 spectators per game. - Although attendance at Dallas Maverick games dropped sharply between 1996 and 1998, it has risen equally sharply since then and is now almost equal to the NBA average. www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 16. Model and suggested answers, Continued - Membership at Jay¡¯s Sports Club rose during the first three months of last year from 50 to approximately 120. - Between March and August this figure remained stable but in September there was a sudden rise in membership numbers, which reached a peak of 175 in October. - After that, figures fell again to a low of 100 in December. www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 17. Further practice for Describing the trends ? Exercise required: - Using some of the words and phrases in the table, describe the pattern in each graph below; - Describe each pattern using a verb. www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 18. Trends: Fluctuation ? µ±Í¼±íÖеÄ×ßÊƲ»¹æÔòµØÉÏÉý»òϽµÊ±£¬ÎÒ ÃdzÆ֮Ϊ ¡°²¨¶¯¡±¡£ÓеÄʱºò£¬×ÜÌåÇ÷ÊÆ ÊÇÉÏÉý£¬Ï½µ»òÕßÎȶ¨£¬µ«¾ßÌå¶øÑÔ£¬ÔòÓÐ ºÜ¶à²»¹æÔòµÄС±ä»¯¡£ ? Write one-sentence description of the graph that provides an overall picture of the trend. ? Write five or more sentences about the graph, using the prompts below. www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 19. ? There may be several possibilities. ? During the course of a televised World Cup football match electricity consumption fluctuates widely/ undergoes considerable fluctuation. www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 20. - At the start ¡­¡­ - There is a ¡­¡­ during the first ¡­¡­ but then ¡­¡­ - Demand falls again ¡­¡­ lowest point ¡­¡­ - In the last forty minutes ¡­¡­ - However, at the beginning ¡­¡­ plateau ¡­¡­ resume normal ¡­¡­ www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 21. Suggested answer - At the start of the match, demand for electricity stands at about 28,500 units. - There is a significant fall in demand during the first hour of the match but then the demand rises steeply and peaks at 29,000 units at half time. - Demand falls again quite sharply at the start of the second half and hits its lowest point at 26,000 units. - In the last forty minutes of the match, electricity consumption increases steadily to just over 28,000 units. - However, at the beginning of the extra-time period consumption falls dramatically, hits a low plateau and then immediately rises to resume normal consumption levels at the end of this period. www.LanguageOpenLearning.com
  • 22. The End Thanks www.LanguageOpenLearning.com