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Writing pro fictitious essay

Susan Kelly
Susan Kelly

The document provides scores and statistics analyzing various elements of writing style, grammar, readability, vocabulary and pacing for a given text. Key findings include: - The text has a very low readability score, suggesting it would be difficult for most readers to understand. - Sentence structure could be improved by increasing sentence variety and reducing the number of long sentences. - Style and grammar issues were detected such as passive voice, repeated words, and punctuation errors. - Vocabulary use and pacing of information could also be improved. - Overall the analysis found multiple areas where the text's writing and structure could be strengthened.

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76 OVERALL SCORE / 100 79 GRAMMAR / 100 100 SPELLING / 100 48 STYLE / 100 N/A TERMINOLOGY / 100 Document Scores (Scores out of 100 for key document areas) 1. Readability measures suggest your document could be considered very dif鍖cult to read. Look at using shorter words and more concise sentences. 2. A high "glue index" suggests you're using lots of 鍖ller words. Try reducing these. Look at the sticky sentences section below for more speci鍖c guidance. Key Actions 544 WORD COUNT 44 SENTENCES 6 PARAGRAPHS 2,817 CHARACTERS No Spaces 3,418 CHARACTERS With Spaces Document Statistics (The key statistics about your document) 222 UNIQUE WORDS 199 WORD FAMILIES Most Unusual Words 1. amnesty 2. dictatorial 3. killings 4. genocides 5. org Vocabulary
Most Used Words the 24 in 20 of 20 is 19 amnesty 15 many 13 that 12 has 12 human 11 and 11 Your vocabulary was more dynamic (unique words/total) than 24% of ProWritingAid users Tip! Readability scores are calculated using a combination of words per sentence and syllables per word. Grade Scores correspond to US school grades. i.e. 5th Grade is very easy to read and easily understood by an average 11-year-old student. To improve readability use shorter words and sentences. 48 FLESCH READING EASE Target > 60 Grade Level Measures Flesch-Kincaid Grade 9.7 Coleman-Liau 12.3 Automated Readability Index 9.1 Dale-Chall Grade 7 - 8 Other Measures Flesch Reading Ease 47.8 Dale-Chall 7.0 Readability by Paragraph Readability Measures (Your text analyzed using common readability measures)
1 Easy-to-Read Paragraph 1 Slightly Dif鍖cult-to-Read Paragraph 4 Very Dif鍖cult-to-Read Paragraphs Read More About This Report Tip! We compare your document to published writing in the same genre to show overused words and constructs. Identifying and reducing these will improve your writing. Note: Often this requires more than substituting a different word. 2 OVERUSED WORDS have 5 Reduce by 1 that 12 Reduce by 1 10 NOT OVERUSED generic descriptions (watch/notice/observe/very) 1 Not overused initial -ing 1 Not overused went 0 Not overused feel/feels/feeling/felt 0 Not overused hear/heard 0 Not overused Read More About This Report Overused Words (Words and phrases that are overused compared to published books) Tip! Varying your sentence length keeps the reader engaged. Too many long sentences are hard to read. 3.6 SENTENCE VARIETY Target > 3 12.4 SENTENCE LENGTH Target between 11 and 18 0 LONG SENTENCES Your sentence variety was higher than 14% of ProWritingAid users Your sentence length was higher than 31% of ProWritingAid users Read More About This Report Sentence Structure Tip! Look for areas where all your sentences are around the same length. These areas will bene鍖t from more variety to maintain the reader's interest. Sentence Lengths (The length of all the sentences in your document. Varying your sentence length engages your reader.)
Tip! Highlights common style issues such as passive voice, hidden verbs and adverb usage. 25 PASSIVE INDEX Target < 25 1 HIDDEN VERBS Target 0 3 ADVERBS 3 outside Dialogue Most Used Adverbs virtually 1 unlawfully 1 usually 1 0 REPEATED SENTENCE STARTS Target 0 8 STYLE SUGGESTIONS Top Style Suggestions more than over 1 either (omit) 1 objective aim 1 assisted in identifying help identify 1 that (omit) 1 Your readability was better (suggestions/sentences) than 78% of ProWritingAid users Read More About This Report Writing Style 2 GRAMMAR ISSUES Top Grammar Suggestions and , and 1 donations donations, 1 0 SPELLING ISSUES Your grammar was better (mistakes/sentences) than 67% of ProWritingAid users Read More About This Report Grammar & Spelling
Tip! Sticky sentences are ones containing a high percentage of glue words. Glue words are the 200 or so most common words in English (excluding the personal pronouns). You can think of the glue words as the empty space in your writing. The more of them there are the more empty space your readers have to pass through to get to the actual meaning. By cutting down the amount of glue words in your sentences you help expose the true meaning and make the reader's job easier. 5 STICKY SENTENCES Target 0 50.0% GLUE INDEX Target < 40% Your glue index was better (glue words/total) than 14% of ProWritingAid users Read More About This Report Sticky Sentences (Sticky Sentences contain too many common words. They slow your reader down.) Tip! Dark areas in the chart indicate areas of slow pacing (backstory in creative writing). Where you have large chunks of slower pacing, try to add some faster pacing to keep the reader more engaged. 38.1% SLOW PACING Read More About This Report Pacing (Shows areas of slower pacing by looking at verb tenses.) Tip! Transitions are useful when you're trying to structure an argument. They link your sentences together forming a 鍖owing and cohesive structure. 86.4% TRANSITIONS Target > 25% Top Transitions and 11 where 4 as 3 because 2 There 2 Read More About This Report Transitions (Looks at words and phrases that link your writing together)
Top 5-word phrases many countries of the world 2 Top 4-word phrases countries of the world 3 Amnesty International is a 2 it is found in 2 against their dictatorial governments 2 Top 3-word phrases Amnesty International has 6 human rights abuses 4 of the world 4 is found in 3 Amnesty International is 3 Top 2-word phrases Amnesty International 14 human rights 10 the world 6 many countries 5 non-governmental 3 Top 1-word phrases Amnesty 15 many 13 human 11 countries 10 abuses 6 Read More About This Report Repeated Phrases 0 CLICHES 0 REDUNDANCIES Read More About This Report Cliches & Redundancies (Cliches can make your writing sound tired) 0 INCONSISTENT SPELLING Target 0 0 INCONSISTENT HYPHENATION Target 0 23 INCONSISTENT CAPITALIZATION Target 0 Consistency (Checks for consistent spelling, hyphenation and capitalization.)
Usage Consistency Curls/Smart Double Quotes 0 Straight Double Quotes 0 Curly/Smart Single Quotes 0 Straight Single Quotes 0 Ellipsis characters 0 Three dots 0 Hyphens 5 En-dash 0 Em-dash 0 Read More About This Report Diction some 5 Simplify: Try the, this, that on 1 Avoid using prepositions such as "on" as the last word in a sentence there are 1 Wordy: avoid unless absolutely unavoidable to assert existence: "There are my brother." it is 1 Omit objective 1 Simplify: Try aim, goal Other Items
Vague & Abstract Words some 5 Vague also 2 Vague all 1 Vague deals with 1 Vague about 1 Vague Corporate Wording

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Writing pro fictitious essay

  • 1. 76 OVERALL SCORE / 100 79 GRAMMAR / 100 100 SPELLING / 100 48 STYLE / 100 N/A TERMINOLOGY / 100 Document Scores (Scores out of 100 for key document areas) 1. Readability measures suggest your document could be considered very dif鍖cult to read. Look at using shorter words and more concise sentences. 2. A high "glue index" suggests you're using lots of 鍖ller words. Try reducing these. Look at the sticky sentences section below for more speci鍖c guidance. Key Actions 544 WORD COUNT 44 SENTENCES 6 PARAGRAPHS 2,817 CHARACTERS No Spaces 3,418 CHARACTERS With Spaces Document Statistics (The key statistics about your document) 222 UNIQUE WORDS 199 WORD FAMILIES Most Unusual Words 1. amnesty 2. dictatorial 3. killings 4. genocides 5. org Vocabulary
  • 2. Most Used Words the 24 in 20 of 20 is 19 amnesty 15 many 13 that 12 has 12 human 11 and 11 Your vocabulary was more dynamic (unique words/total) than 24% of ProWritingAid users Tip! Readability scores are calculated using a combination of words per sentence and syllables per word. Grade Scores correspond to US school grades. i.e. 5th Grade is very easy to read and easily understood by an average 11-year-old student. To improve readability use shorter words and sentences. 48 FLESCH READING EASE Target > 60 Grade Level Measures Flesch-Kincaid Grade 9.7 Coleman-Liau 12.3 Automated Readability Index 9.1 Dale-Chall Grade 7 - 8 Other Measures Flesch Reading Ease 47.8 Dale-Chall 7.0 Readability by Paragraph Readability Measures (Your text analyzed using common readability measures)
  • 3. 1 Easy-to-Read Paragraph 1 Slightly Dif鍖cult-to-Read Paragraph 4 Very Dif鍖cult-to-Read Paragraphs Read More About This Report Tip! We compare your document to published writing in the same genre to show overused words and constructs. Identifying and reducing these will improve your writing. Note: Often this requires more than substituting a different word. 2 OVERUSED WORDS have 5 Reduce by 1 that 12 Reduce by 1 10 NOT OVERUSED generic descriptions (watch/notice/observe/very) 1 Not overused initial -ing 1 Not overused went 0 Not overused feel/feels/feeling/felt 0 Not overused hear/heard 0 Not overused Read More About This Report Overused Words (Words and phrases that are overused compared to published books) Tip! Varying your sentence length keeps the reader engaged. Too many long sentences are hard to read. 3.6 SENTENCE VARIETY Target > 3 12.4 SENTENCE LENGTH Target between 11 and 18 0 LONG SENTENCES Your sentence variety was higher than 14% of ProWritingAid users Your sentence length was higher than 31% of ProWritingAid users Read More About This Report Sentence Structure Tip! Look for areas where all your sentences are around the same length. These areas will bene鍖t from more variety to maintain the reader's interest. Sentence Lengths (The length of all the sentences in your document. Varying your sentence length engages your reader.)
  • 4. Tip! Highlights common style issues such as passive voice, hidden verbs and adverb usage. 25 PASSIVE INDEX Target < 25 1 HIDDEN VERBS Target 0 3 ADVERBS 3 outside Dialogue Most Used Adverbs virtually 1 unlawfully 1 usually 1 0 REPEATED SENTENCE STARTS Target 0 8 STYLE SUGGESTIONS Top Style Suggestions more than over 1 either (omit) 1 objective aim 1 assisted in identifying help identify 1 that (omit) 1 Your readability was better (suggestions/sentences) than 78% of ProWritingAid users Read More About This Report Writing Style 2 GRAMMAR ISSUES Top Grammar Suggestions and , and 1 donations donations, 1 0 SPELLING ISSUES Your grammar was better (mistakes/sentences) than 67% of ProWritingAid users Read More About This Report Grammar & Spelling
  • 5. Tip! Sticky sentences are ones containing a high percentage of glue words. Glue words are the 200 or so most common words in English (excluding the personal pronouns). You can think of the glue words as the empty space in your writing. The more of them there are the more empty space your readers have to pass through to get to the actual meaning. By cutting down the amount of glue words in your sentences you help expose the true meaning and make the reader's job easier. 5 STICKY SENTENCES Target 0 50.0% GLUE INDEX Target < 40% Your glue index was better (glue words/total) than 14% of ProWritingAid users Read More About This Report Sticky Sentences (Sticky Sentences contain too many common words. They slow your reader down.) Tip! Dark areas in the chart indicate areas of slow pacing (backstory in creative writing). Where you have large chunks of slower pacing, try to add some faster pacing to keep the reader more engaged. 38.1% SLOW PACING Read More About This Report Pacing (Shows areas of slower pacing by looking at verb tenses.) Tip! Transitions are useful when you're trying to structure an argument. They link your sentences together forming a 鍖owing and cohesive structure. 86.4% TRANSITIONS Target > 25% Top Transitions and 11 where 4 as 3 because 2 There 2 Read More About This Report Transitions (Looks at words and phrases that link your writing together)
  • 6. Top 5-word phrases many countries of the world 2 Top 4-word phrases countries of the world 3 Amnesty International is a 2 it is found in 2 against their dictatorial governments 2 Top 3-word phrases Amnesty International has 6 human rights abuses 4 of the world 4 is found in 3 Amnesty International is 3 Top 2-word phrases Amnesty International 14 human rights 10 the world 6 many countries 5 non-governmental 3 Top 1-word phrases Amnesty 15 many 13 human 11 countries 10 abuses 6 Read More About This Report Repeated Phrases 0 CLICHES 0 REDUNDANCIES Read More About This Report Cliches & Redundancies (Cliches can make your writing sound tired) 0 INCONSISTENT SPELLING Target 0 0 INCONSISTENT HYPHENATION Target 0 23 INCONSISTENT CAPITALIZATION Target 0 Consistency (Checks for consistent spelling, hyphenation and capitalization.)
  • 7. Usage Consistency Curls/Smart Double Quotes 0 Straight Double Quotes 0 Curly/Smart Single Quotes 0 Straight Single Quotes 0 Ellipsis characters 0 Three dots 0 Hyphens 5 En-dash 0 Em-dash 0 Read More About This Report Diction some 5 Simplify: Try the, this, that on 1 Avoid using prepositions such as "on" as the last word in a sentence there are 1 Wordy: avoid unless absolutely unavoidable to assert existence: "There are my brother." it is 1 Omit objective 1 Simplify: Try aim, goal Other Items
  • 8. Vague & Abstract Words some 5 Vague also 2 Vague all 1 Vague deals with 1 Vague about 1 Vague Corporate Wording