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WRITING
WORKSHOP
(3)
Writing workshop 3
Writing workshop 3
Writing workshop 3
Writing workshop 3
WHATS YOUR
DEAR WORLD
STATEMENT?
IN YOUR WRITERS NOTEBOOK, JOT
DOWN YOUR STATEMENT AND WHY.
Study Groups
30 minutes
Mini-Lesson: Reading like a
reader
I could hear it through the woolen cap Pa had
pulled down over my ears. A farm dog
answered the train, and then a second dog
joined in. They sang out, trains and dogs, for
a real long time. And when their voices faded
away it was as quiet as a dream. We walked
on toward the woods, Pa and I.
Reading like a Writer
I could hear it through the woolen cap Pa
had pulled down over my ears. A farm dog
answered the train, and then a second
dog joined in. They sang out, trains and
dogs, for a real long time. And when their
voices faded away it was as quiet as a
dream. We walked on toward the woods,
Pa and I.
Writing under the influence
She goes.
I go.....
You go.....
Feedback that Sticks
? Receiving vs giving
? Closing the gap
? Providing just in time feedback
? Ensuring the student understands
Partner Up and Look at Student Work
? Read and enjoy
? Talk about what 1 or 2 things the writer
needs to learn to close the gap
? Consider what mentor text might help the
student understand what to do
? Write a comment to the student that offers
tips for concrete next steps C
? And reflect on how the student might interpret the
comments.
20 minutes
Writing workshop 3
Time to
Write
Homework
Keep on reading your book and the blog
Bring a sample of student writing that shows
them writing under the influence and the
mentor
See you

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  • 6. WHATS YOUR DEAR WORLD STATEMENT? IN YOUR WRITERS NOTEBOOK, JOT DOWN YOUR STATEMENT AND WHY.
  • 8. Mini-Lesson: Reading like a reader I could hear it through the woolen cap Pa had pulled down over my ears. A farm dog answered the train, and then a second dog joined in. They sang out, trains and dogs, for a real long time. And when their voices faded away it was as quiet as a dream. We walked on toward the woods, Pa and I.
  • 9. Reading like a Writer I could hear it through the woolen cap Pa had pulled down over my ears. A farm dog answered the train, and then a second dog joined in. They sang out, trains and dogs, for a real long time. And when their voices faded away it was as quiet as a dream. We walked on toward the woods, Pa and I.
  • 10. Writing under the influence She goes. I go..... You go.....
  • 11. Feedback that Sticks ? Receiving vs giving ? Closing the gap ? Providing just in time feedback ? Ensuring the student understands
  • 12. Partner Up and Look at Student Work ? Read and enjoy ? Talk about what 1 or 2 things the writer needs to learn to close the gap ? Consider what mentor text might help the student understand what to do ? Write a comment to the student that offers tips for concrete next steps C ? And reflect on how the student might interpret the comments. 20 minutes
  • 15. Homework Keep on reading your book and the blog Bring a sample of student writing that shows them writing under the influence and the mentor See you