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L3 – write strong P.E.E.

L4 – analyse P.E.E. with a focus of editing and
  understand a range of representations in
  gender
• Which is better and why?
Describe Vs. Analyse
‘At the beginning of the extract it shows a guy
  talking to a woman. The woman obviously has
  no money so cant buy the dress. The
  cinematography makes the shop assistant
  seem more powerful. Then the woman says
  ‘how much for the dress?’ and the shop
  assistant tells her, but in a harsh way and
  looks down on her which tells us he is more
  powerful.’
Describe Vs. Analyse
‘Gender is represented through the use of
  cinematography. The use of an high angle
  over-the-shoulder connotes weakness which
  illustrates the female character in a
  stereotypical way.’
Describe Vs. Analyse
‘Gender is represented through the use of
  cinematography. The use of an high angle
  over-the-shoulder connotes weakness which
  illustrates the female character in a
  stereotypical way.’
                        Write out this P.E.E. and underline
                        in coloured pencil
P = Your point.
E = The evidence.
E = What effect does it have on the audience?
Describe Vs. Analyse
‘Gender is represented through the use of
  cinematography. The use of an high angle
  over-the-shoulder suggests weakness which
  illustrates the female character in a
  stereotypical way.’
                        What are the white words?

P = Your point.
E = The evidence.
E = What effect does it have on the audience?
My writing focus is…
• Use P.E.E. structure – L3
• Improve my use of terminology / evidence – L3
• Improve my explanation – does the stereotype
  conform or subvert? – L4
• Use more analytical language – L4
Analysis/Explanation
                         Marking Criteria
                       Clear analysis of how the technical
                                                                 EX
                       aspects are used to
        20             construct the particular representation
                       Understanding of the constructed
                       nature of representation



  Use of Examples       Consistent evidence from the
                        extract offered. Offers frequent         EV
        20              relevant examples from the
                        extract


   Terminology
                       Frequent and Accurate use of
                       media terminology                         T
        10
Marking Criteria
  Point    Editing is used to represent gender.


           In this sequence an eyeline
              match of cuts from as close
Evidence      up of the male character’s
              eyes to a long shot of an
              attractive female is used.
                                                              EV
                                                                   T
Explain    This reinforces the stereotypical representation
           of a heterosexual masculine male as this           EX
           suggests he is attracted to the woman.
Editing                                      Sound
Weakest area of analysis. Some candidates    Was tackled well by some but too much
making no reference at all.                  focus on dialogue.

Stronger responses discussed the use 180-    Clear distinction between diegetic and
degree rule and continuity editing.          non-diegetic sound by some candidates.
 These candidates also referred to eyeline
matches, shot reverse shot, simultaneous
                                             Need to address use of music in more
action and use of ellipsis.
                                             detail-tempo, pace, sound bridges and link
Also some discussed the pace of editing to   specifically to representation.
represent age


Mise-en-scene                                Cinematography
Often very well discussed but at times too   Well handled by most with the most
much focus on this area. Some entirely       confident use of terminology in this
focused on mise-en-scene                     area.

Concentration on clothing and props but
little exploration of lighting.              Problems for some in just identifying
                                             camera shots/angle/position and not
                                             linking this to the construction of
Must link to how it constructs
                                             representation.
representation.
The Hustle Clip
• Brain storm notes on board
• L3 2 clear PEES
• L4 2 clear PEEs discussing range gender /
  masculinity & feminity, one of which is editing
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11 describe vs analyse

  • 1. L3 – write strong P.E.E. L4 – analyse P.E.E. with a focus of editing and understand a range of representations in gender
  • 2. • Which is better and why?
  • 3. Describe Vs. Analyse ‘At the beginning of the extract it shows a guy talking to a woman. The woman obviously has no money so cant buy the dress. The cinematography makes the shop assistant seem more powerful. Then the woman says ‘how much for the dress?’ and the shop assistant tells her, but in a harsh way and looks down on her which tells us he is more powerful.’
  • 4. Describe Vs. Analyse ‘Gender is represented through the use of cinematography. The use of an high angle over-the-shoulder connotes weakness which illustrates the female character in a stereotypical way.’
  • 5. Describe Vs. Analyse ‘Gender is represented through the use of cinematography. The use of an high angle over-the-shoulder connotes weakness which illustrates the female character in a stereotypical way.’ Write out this P.E.E. and underline in coloured pencil P = Your point. E = The evidence. E = What effect does it have on the audience?
  • 6. Describe Vs. Analyse ‘Gender is represented through the use of cinematography. The use of an high angle over-the-shoulder suggests weakness which illustrates the female character in a stereotypical way.’ What are the white words? P = Your point. E = The evidence. E = What effect does it have on the audience?
  • 7. My writing focus is… • Use P.E.E. structure – L3 • Improve my use of terminology / evidence – L3 • Improve my explanation – does the stereotype conform or subvert? – L4 • Use more analytical language – L4
  • 8. Analysis/Explanation Marking Criteria Clear analysis of how the technical EX aspects are used to 20 construct the particular representation Understanding of the constructed nature of representation Use of Examples Consistent evidence from the extract offered. Offers frequent EV 20 relevant examples from the extract Terminology Frequent and Accurate use of media terminology T 10
  • 9. Marking Criteria Point Editing is used to represent gender. In this sequence an eyeline match of cuts from as close Evidence up of the male character’s eyes to a long shot of an attractive female is used. EV T Explain This reinforces the stereotypical representation of a heterosexual masculine male as this EX suggests he is attracted to the woman.
  • 10. Editing Sound Weakest area of analysis. Some candidates Was tackled well by some but too much making no reference at all. focus on dialogue. Stronger responses discussed the use 180- Clear distinction between diegetic and degree rule and continuity editing. non-diegetic sound by some candidates. These candidates also referred to eyeline matches, shot reverse shot, simultaneous Need to address use of music in more action and use of ellipsis. detail-tempo, pace, sound bridges and link Also some discussed the pace of editing to specifically to representation. represent age Mise-en-scene Cinematography Often very well discussed but at times too Well handled by most with the most much focus on this area. Some entirely confident use of terminology in this focused on mise-en-scene area. Concentration on clothing and props but little exploration of lighting. Problems for some in just identifying camera shots/angle/position and not linking this to the construction of Must link to how it constructs representation. representation.
  • 11. The Hustle Clip • Brain storm notes on board • L3 2 clear PEES • L4 2 clear PEEs discussing range gender / masculinity & feminity, one of which is editing