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Unit 1 Writing Task
goal
You are going to write sentences on the following topic:
Describe three of your daily activities that might be
interesting to someone from another country.
Step 1: Brainstorming Step 2: Make a draft Step 3: Submit your sentences
Step 1: Brainstorming
Brainstorm a list of things that you do in a typical day.
Things I do in a
typical day
Take a ferry
across the bay
Wake up in a
boathouse
Follow the steps to make notes for your sentences. Dont worry about
grammar or spelling. Dont write complete sentences.
Step 2: Make a draft
 Step 1: Look at your brainstorming list you just wrote. Choose
three activities that you think someone from another country
might find interesting.
 Step 2: Decide how you want to organize your ideas. For
example, you could put the activities in the order that you do
them every day. You could also put the most interesting activity
at the end.
 Step 3: Include at least one detail for each activity.
Step 2: Make a Draft
Things I do in a Typical Day Details (when, why, who with, etc)
Wake up in a boat house
Every day around 7:00 am
rent- boat house is cheaper
Take a ferry across the Bay
every morning around 8:00 am
Fastest way to get to the office
1. Your activity List details here
2. Your activity List details here
3. Your activity List details here
DRAFT 1
- I usually do my homework on
Saturday morning.
- My friends and I usually go to
the movies. We go on Saturdays.
- I practice the guitar every day
after school. Sometimes my
friends comes over and we play
the guitar together.
Before you start the first draft..
DRAFT 2
- I play tennis in the park on
Sunday mornings. Its fun and
its good exercise.
- My friends and I usually go to
the movies on Saturdays.
- We go the movies theater in the
mall.
- I practice the guitar everyday
after school. Sometimes my
friends come over and we play
the guitar together.
a. Replace an
unrelated idea
with a new one
b. Added a
detail about an
idea
c. Corrected a
verb form
d. Combined two
short
sentences.
Describe three leisure activities. Give one or more
details about each one. For example, explain when,
why or where you do them or who you do them with.
Lets practice!
Correct one mistake with the simple present tense in each of the sentences
1. I cooks food for 500 people every day.
 I cook food for 500 people every day.
 I think many people dont cook nowadays.
3. My husband drive me to work every morning.
 My husband drives me to work every morning.
4. He be a bus driver.
 He is a bus driver.
2. I think many people doesnt cook nowadays.
Lets practice!
Correct one mistake with the simple present tense in each of the sentences
5. I dont works in an office.
 I dont work in an office.
 I work in a laboratory.
7. My grandparents doesnt watch TV.
 My daughter doesnt have a job.
8. My daughter doesnt has a job.
 My grandparents dont watch TV.
6. I working in a laboratory.
Now use the information in your
outline to write your sentences
Check your
sentences!
Now use the questions below to revise your sentences
Are all your sentences about daily activities?
Did you include at least one detail for each
activity?
Are all the verb forms correct?
Did you combine short sentences
where suitable?
You can
do it!
Submit your sentences on edvance360
Describe three of your daily activities that might be
interesting to someone from another country.

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B1 Unit 1 Writing Task

  • 2. goal You are going to write sentences on the following topic: Describe three of your daily activities that might be interesting to someone from another country. Step 1: Brainstorming Step 2: Make a draft Step 3: Submit your sentences
  • 3. Step 1: Brainstorming Brainstorm a list of things that you do in a typical day. Things I do in a typical day Take a ferry across the bay Wake up in a boathouse
  • 4. Follow the steps to make notes for your sentences. Dont worry about grammar or spelling. Dont write complete sentences. Step 2: Make a draft Step 1: Look at your brainstorming list you just wrote. Choose three activities that you think someone from another country might find interesting. Step 2: Decide how you want to organize your ideas. For example, you could put the activities in the order that you do them every day. You could also put the most interesting activity at the end. Step 3: Include at least one detail for each activity.
  • 5. Step 2: Make a Draft Things I do in a Typical Day Details (when, why, who with, etc) Wake up in a boat house Every day around 7:00 am rent- boat house is cheaper Take a ferry across the Bay every morning around 8:00 am Fastest way to get to the office 1. Your activity List details here 2. Your activity List details here 3. Your activity List details here
  • 6. DRAFT 1 - I usually do my homework on Saturday morning. - My friends and I usually go to the movies. We go on Saturdays. - I practice the guitar every day after school. Sometimes my friends comes over and we play the guitar together. Before you start the first draft.. DRAFT 2 - I play tennis in the park on Sunday mornings. Its fun and its good exercise. - My friends and I usually go to the movies on Saturdays. - We go the movies theater in the mall. - I practice the guitar everyday after school. Sometimes my friends come over and we play the guitar together. a. Replace an unrelated idea with a new one b. Added a detail about an idea c. Corrected a verb form d. Combined two short sentences. Describe three leisure activities. Give one or more details about each one. For example, explain when, why or where you do them or who you do them with.
  • 7. Lets practice! Correct one mistake with the simple present tense in each of the sentences 1. I cooks food for 500 people every day. I cook food for 500 people every day. I think many people dont cook nowadays. 3. My husband drive me to work every morning. My husband drives me to work every morning. 4. He be a bus driver. He is a bus driver. 2. I think many people doesnt cook nowadays.
  • 8. Lets practice! Correct one mistake with the simple present tense in each of the sentences 5. I dont works in an office. I dont work in an office. I work in a laboratory. 7. My grandparents doesnt watch TV. My daughter doesnt have a job. 8. My daughter doesnt has a job. My grandparents dont watch TV. 6. I working in a laboratory.
  • 9. Now use the information in your outline to write your sentences
  • 10. Check your sentences! Now use the questions below to revise your sentences Are all your sentences about daily activities? Did you include at least one detail for each activity? Are all the verb forms correct? Did you combine short sentences where suitable?
  • 11. You can do it! Submit your sentences on edvance360 Describe three of your daily activities that might be interesting to someone from another country.

Editor's Notes

  • #9: I working in a laboratory. I work in a laboratory. My grandparents doesnt watch TV. My grandparents dont watch TV. My daughter doesnt has a job. 5 My daughter doesnt have a job.