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Drafts Poster
Draft 1
Feedback: From my Target Audience
 The image : good because, the hybird genre, fantasy is clearly shown through the smoke, and the
thriller hybrid of the genre is shown with Kate in the background as she is putting her finger on her
mouth, as if she has a dark secret
 Makes the diary obvious, and gives a hint to the audience
Improvements:
 Cannot see some of the billing box because of the boys arm
 The Title does not show any thriller element, too bright
 Billing box needs to be a different font
 Cannot see the strapline
 Add some reviews?
Draft 2
Feeback: from my target audience:
 Reviews make the poster look professional
 Like the gradient on the title
Improvements:
 The inside part of the title cannot really be seen
 Take one of the reviews out because its too busy
 Cannot see the names of the actors
Draft 3
Feeback: from my target audience:
 You can now see the actors names
Improvements:
 Need to move the inside title because its hard to notice
Draft 4
Feeback: from my target audience:
 Moved the inside
Improvements:
 Not sure if the strapline should go in the middle
 The title blends in with the image and it should stand out
 Need a logo
Draft 5
Feeback: from my target audience:
 Added logo
 website
Improvements:
 Move the strapline
 The title font is good but it dosent stand out enough
Draft 6
Feeback: from my target audience:
Improvements:
 The title is too small and the font is over powered by everything else around it

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Drafts poster

  • 2. Draft 1 Feedback: From my Target Audience The image : good because, the hybird genre, fantasy is clearly shown through the smoke, and the thriller hybrid of the genre is shown with Kate in the background as she is putting her finger on her mouth, as if she has a dark secret Makes the diary obvious, and gives a hint to the audience Improvements: Cannot see some of the billing box because of the boys arm The Title does not show any thriller element, too bright Billing box needs to be a different font Cannot see the strapline Add some reviews?
  • 3. Draft 2 Feeback: from my target audience: Reviews make the poster look professional Like the gradient on the title Improvements: The inside part of the title cannot really be seen Take one of the reviews out because its too busy Cannot see the names of the actors
  • 4. Draft 3 Feeback: from my target audience: You can now see the actors names Improvements: Need to move the inside title because its hard to notice
  • 5. Draft 4 Feeback: from my target audience: Moved the inside Improvements: Not sure if the strapline should go in the middle The title blends in with the image and it should stand out Need a logo
  • 6. Draft 5 Feeback: from my target audience: Added logo website Improvements: Move the strapline The title font is good but it dosent stand out enough
  • 7. Draft 6 Feeback: from my target audience: Improvements: The title is too small and the font is over powered by everything else around it