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1ST Draft, 2nd Draft and
       3rd Draft

      OF ADVERT 2
1ST Draft
                                                                  Advert
Model Pose                                                        Title
I will make
her hold the                                                      I have
perfume                                                           placed
bottle, so                                                        the advert
that the                                                          title on
model                                                             top of the
seems as if                                                       large
she needs                                                         perfume
the
                                                                  bottle, be
perfume.
Also, I have                                                      cause it
made the                                                          stands
pose quite                                                        out, as it
simple to                                                         is also
create a                                                          covering
sense of                                                          the
elegance                                                          scenery
                                                                  slightly


 Layout

 I have placed the model slightly to the left, so that the scenery can be
 seen, but also because I need to leave space for the advert title and the
 picture of a perfume bottle
Original
2nd Draft




?   The image is completely different to the 1st Draft, due to the
    weather. Therefore, I couldn¡¯t go to the park and had to take
    it in the house. Therefore I have changed the product from
    perfume to fashion, due to the pose.
?   I cropped the picture, because there was a door, as well as
    there being too much white background, as the model
    couldn¡¯t stand out
3rd Draft




? I moved the model up, as there was
  a large gap at the top, which wasn¡¯t
  appealing to the eye
4th Draft




? Instead of having the advert title on the
  bottom left, I have moved it to the top of
  the picture, because of the pose and there
  is a white gap at the top.

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Drafts for advert 2

  • 1. 1ST Draft, 2nd Draft and 3rd Draft OF ADVERT 2
  • 2. 1ST Draft Advert Model Pose Title I will make her hold the I have perfume placed bottle, so the advert that the title on model top of the seems as if large she needs perfume the bottle, be perfume. Also, I have cause it made the stands pose quite out, as it simple to is also create a covering sense of the elegance scenery slightly Layout I have placed the model slightly to the left, so that the scenery can be seen, but also because I need to leave space for the advert title and the picture of a perfume bottle
  • 4. 2nd Draft ? The image is completely different to the 1st Draft, due to the weather. Therefore, I couldn¡¯t go to the park and had to take it in the house. Therefore I have changed the product from perfume to fashion, due to the pose. ? I cropped the picture, because there was a door, as well as there being too much white background, as the model couldn¡¯t stand out
  • 5. 3rd Draft ? I moved the model up, as there was a large gap at the top, which wasn¡¯t appealing to the eye
  • 6. 4th Draft ? Instead of having the advert title on the bottom left, I have moved it to the top of the picture, because of the pose and there is a white gap at the top.