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Jay is nervous about starting at a new college. His father reassures him and uses his powers to help Jay get ready without being seen. In the car, Jay's father encourages him to be confident. When they arrive at the school, Jay is confused to see the other students using special powers, wondering if he has one too. His father tells him to enjoy his day.
First Draft
- 1. Zoltars Invasion Written By Evie Heffer Based on, if any PRODUCTION DRAFT Blue Revised Nov 17, 2013 Address Phone Number
- 2. 1 Blue Revised Nov 17, 2013 1. INT. JAY'S HOUSE - DAY Jay talking to his parents. JAY (nervously) How far away is the school from here, dad? 1 FATHER Not far away. We'll be leaving in half an hour. MUM (shouting from upstairs) Have you put your lunch in your bag, Jay? It's in the fridge. Jay walks over to the kitchen. 2 JAY (whispering to himself) I really really don't want to go to this new college, I'm scared to meet new people. FATHER Have you also remembered all of your books and paper work, you want to make a good effort (without Jay seeing) Don't worry son I'll put them in your bag for you. Jay's father using his powers without moving. He makes all of Jay's books fly from the shelves into Jays bag while Jay walks back into the kitchen. * 3 * 4 * * Jay's mum walks down the stairs and sorts out Jay's collar and tie. JAY (embarrassed) Get off me, mum! FATHER Come on Jay lets get going... (MORE) Blue Revised Nov 17, 2013 * 6 * 7 * 8 JAY (looking shocked) How did you do that so quickly? 5 *
- 3. 2 Blue Revised Nov 17, 2013 (CONT'D) Jay and his father are sitting in the car, Jay's father is talking to him about how to behave and be confident. FATHER I know you won't want to hear this Jay but this is a big opportunity for you to finally make some friends and grow up a little bit. You'll find out a lot about your self you've just got to be confident and believe in yourself. JAY (looking un-interested) Alright, dad. I will, what's the school like? Will it be like all the others? I just hate school, dad. 9 * 10, 11 * * 12 * FATHER You'll find out, Jay. Pulling up to the school, all the children are hyper, greeting each vother, some are using special powers. JAY (confused) What is this place, dad? They are all using their special powers, is that normal? Do i have one? FATHER Get out of the car, Jay. Enjoy your day i'll pick you up at the end of the day. Blue Revised Nov 17, 2013 *
- 4. 3 1 Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:41 PM 2 Double the,meant to say "too" Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:44 PM 3 Need a capital i Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:46 PM 4 Need a capital i Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:47 PM 5 Kitchen* Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:47 PM 6 Quickly* Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:48 PM 7 Collar* Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:48 PM 8 Embarrassed* Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:48 PM 9 Change to 'to' Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:50 PM 10 Capital letter Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:58 PM 11 Highfen Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:58 PM 12 Good - classic pep talk Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:57 PM