The document provides feedback on a magazine project, noting that while the work showed an understanding of technology, it lacked a clear genre and audience. It suggests including more variety in pictures and directly addressing the intended readership. Additionally, the document notes the project contained too much writing and missed opportunities for creativity, recommending presenting the work as a Prezi instead of like an exam.
4. Magazine work
? even when showing good grasp of
technology, can be problematic
? needs a sense of genre
? research needs to feed into product
? is this really an R n¡¯B magazine?