The document provides feedback from showing a rough cut of a music video to others. Based on the feedback, the opening title was made more upbeat by adding flashes in time with the music's beat. Some location shots were removed as they seemed random and could hurt the scoring. Badly framed shots were also cut or had their screen time reduced to focus more on well-framed shots, as too many could be noticeable. The feedback helped strengthen the mise-en-scene and improve the overall final product.