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Rough Cut Feedback
 From showing our rough cut to our class and
  teachers we gained insightful feedback that
  was very helpful towards getting to our final
  product. Here are a few things that have been
  changed in light of the comments
 The opening title was important as it
  introduced our video and had an element of
  intertextuality. However as our song is upbeat
  Louisa recommended that we did something
  to make the opening replicate this. So instead
  we added flashes in time with beat to
  replicate the tempo.
 Rebecca told us that we had very strong mise
  en scene in our music video and did not have
  to over do it with location shots. This would
  be problematic for us as it started to make
  some shots seem quite random, which could
  ultimately make us drop marks. So we got rid
  of quite a lot of shots.
 Another key thing in a music video is the
  framing. We were told that because we had a
  lot of good framed shots just a few would
  become really noticeable. So with any shots
  that were badly framed we either cut them
  out or reduced the amount of screen time
  they had.

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Rough cut feedback

  • 2. From showing our rough cut to our class and teachers we gained insightful feedback that was very helpful towards getting to our final product. Here are a few things that have been changed in light of the comments
  • 3. The opening title was important as it introduced our video and had an element of intertextuality. However as our song is upbeat Louisa recommended that we did something to make the opening replicate this. So instead we added flashes in time with beat to replicate the tempo.
  • 4. Rebecca told us that we had very strong mise en scene in our music video and did not have to over do it with location shots. This would be problematic for us as it started to make some shots seem quite random, which could ultimately make us drop marks. So we got rid of quite a lot of shots.
  • 5. Another key thing in a music video is the framing. We were told that because we had a lot of good framed shots just a few would become really noticeable. So with any shots that were badly framed we either cut them out or reduced the amount of screen time they had.