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The document provides instructions on how to duplicate DVD movies by ripping the movie file from the DVD disc onto a computer. This allows the video to be used in different programs and edited. To make an identical backup copy, the ripped movie file can be burned back to a new DVD disc. The sections and headings clearly explain the different steps in the process. Details are included under each heading to describe that part of the duplication method. Some technical terms may be confusing without sufficient background knowledge. The writing is made clear visually through formatting with pictures and colors.
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The article discusses guidelines for designing an effective company brochure. It notes that the brochure is one of the most commonly used but misused marketing tools. The article provides 5 key points about brochures, including that they are designed to provide more information to customers who have learned about the company and requested details. It also explains that brochures are important for calling customers to action and educating them in detail about the company and its products. The article stresses the importance of understanding how to properly use and design a brochure to attract attention and positively represent the company.Ó¢Ó
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The document provides guidance on how to properly write business emails. It discusses that business emails should be polite, concise, precise, and avoid unnecessary words. Common guidelines that should be followed include being tidy, avoiding mistakes, and clearly signing off on emails. Personal emails should be distinguished from business emails in both content and formality.English
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Craigslist started as a local newsletter in San Francisco and has grown to be one of the most visited English websites, focusing classified listings in specific communities. It began as a personal project but incorporated in 1999 and now operates as a for-profit company. While the site hosts discussions and marketplace listings, it faces challenges removing scams but provides guidance to users on common tactics.Eigo1 1
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Fingerprint scanners work by generating an image of a fingerprint's ridges and valleys, then analyzing the unique pattern to determine if it matches fingerprints on file. There are two main types - optical scanners that use light to image fingerprints, and capacitive scanners that use electrical current. While movies show direct overlay of prints, real analysis involves more sophisticated matching of ridge and valley patterns to verify a user's identity.Eng3
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RSS allows users to aggregate headlines and content updates from multiple websites into a single feed that can be easily monitored. It works by websites publishing simple text files called RSS feeds that contain headlines, summaries and links to full articles. RSS readers then collect these text files from websites and display the new content in a single location, making it easier for users to keep up with information from many sources with less effort than visiting each site individually.Ó¢Ó
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