Scientific Writing Task 2

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This document provides comments on the structure, clarity, content, and understanding of the research article "Landscape of Genomic Alterations in Cervical Carcinomas". It notes that the structure is unconventional without separate sections and the abstract is at the end. While the introduction, methods, results and conclusion are clearly presented, the discussion is missing. The title does not clearly explain the topic and there are no captions or subheads, though graphics are well presented. The subject and purpose are clearly stated regarding genomic alterations in cervical cancer and finding new treatment strategies, and the research conducted is well presented, though the unconventional structure makes it more complex to understand.

Scientific Writing
Task 2
Comments on "Landscape of Genomic
Alterations in Cervical Carcinomas"
By Andini Indyanita

Structure
• Its structure is not classified into seperate
sections.
• Abstract identified is located at the end of article
• Introduction, methods, results, and conclusion
are clearly stated.
• The discussion is not stated in this article.

Clarity
• The title does not clearly explain what the article
is about.
• There is no supporting captions, subheads, or
highlighted terms in this article.
• Graphics and pictures stated are well presented.

Content
• The subject is clearly stated : the genomic
alterations at servical cancer.
• The purpose is clearly stated : to find new
strategies to combat the disease.
• The research conducted is well presented.

Understanding
• Content of this article is easy to understand,
however the structure make it more complex.

IGRT shows promise for reducing toxicity and allowing dose escalation when used with brachytherapy for gynecologic cancers. However, IMRT alone is not recommended for primary cervical cancer treatment due to the complex organ motion and tumor regression over treatment. Image guidance is most important for brachytherapy to accurately target the tumor while sparing organs at risk. Further research is still needed to determine the optimal use of IMRT and image guidance for gynecologic cancers.

Endometrial ca by Dr noor muhammadAyub Medical College

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This document discusses endometrial carcinoma, including its anatomy, causes, risk factors, pathology, clinical features, diagnostic techniques, staging, treatment options, survival rates, and follow up. Endometrial carcinoma arises from the endometrial glands of the uterus. Risk factors include unopposed estrogen exposure. Diagnosis involves endometrial sampling and imaging. Treatment depends on staging but commonly includes surgery, radiation therapy, chemotherapy, and hormonal therapy. Follow up aims to detect recurrence or complications.

Management of Pulmonary Edema 2014manjhoo1982

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Pulmonary edema is excess fluid in the lungs that can be cardiogenic (heart-related) or non-cardiogenic. Cardiogenic pulmonary edema is caused by high pressures in the lungs from heart issues. Non-cardiogenic pulmonary edema can result from lung injury, infection, or high altitudes. Symptoms include shortness of breath, cough, and crackles in the lungs. Treatment focuses on oxygen, reducing pressures on the heart, and supporting breathing. Outcomes depend on the underlying cause but respiratory failure and death are possible complications if not properly managed.

Pulmonary edemareshmivunni

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Pulmonary edema is the abnormal accumulation of fluid in the interstitial spaces and alveoli of the lungs. There are three main types: cardiogenic, noncardiogenic, and neurogenic. Cardiogenic pulmonary edema is caused by issues like hypertension and heart failure that increase fluid filtration from blood vessels into the lungs. Noncardiogenic pulmonary edema has causes such as drug reactions, pneumonia, and smoke inhalation. Neurogenic pulmonary edema is caused by head injuries. Symptoms include dyspnea, tachycardia, cough with frothy sputum, and crackles heard on auscultation. Treatment focuses on correcting hypoxemia, reducing fluid overload with diuretics and positioning, and

Acute pulmonary edemaRushd Shammaa

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This document discusses the case of a 62-year-old man presenting with acute dyspnea. On examination, the patient is pale, sweaty, coughing pink sputum, and in respiratory distress. His pulse is 140 BPM, respiratory rate is 30, and oxygen saturation is 85%. The document outlines potential causes of acute dyspnea including pulmonary edema and provides guidance on evaluating, diagnosing, and initially managing such a patient. Key factors to consider include the patient's medical history, signs of heart failure on examination, and portable chest x-ray findings suggestive of pulmonary edema. The goals of treatment are to place the patient in a sitting position, provide high-flow oxygen, administer diuretics and opioids,

Pulmonary edemaDrHarsh Pandya

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Pulmonary edema is fluid accumulation in the lungs caused by fluid leaking from blood vessels into the lung tissue and air spaces. It can be caused by issues that increase pressure in the blood vessels of the lungs like heart failure, or by problems that damage the blood vessel walls. Symptoms include shortness of breath, cough, and anxiety. Treatment depends on the underlying cause but aims to reduce fluid buildup and support breathing. Differentiating cardiogenic from non-cardiogenic pulmonary edema involves considering medical history, symptoms, physical exam findings, and chest imaging results.

Pulmonary edemaRodas Temesgen

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This document provides an overview of pulmonary edema, including its definition, epidemiology, pathophysiology, classifications, causes, clinical manifestations, diagnosis, and treatment. Pulmonary edema is fluid accumulation in the lungs caused by increased fluid filtration from pulmonary capillaries into lung tissue. It can be cardiogenic, caused by left ventricular failure which increases hydrostatic pressure, or non-cardiogenic, caused by altered capillary permeability independent of cardiac issues. Symptoms include shortness of breath, cough, and hypoxemia. Treatment focuses on supporting oxygenation, reducing preload and afterload on the heart, and addressing any underlying conditions.

Cervical cancer pptManali Solanki

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Cervical cancer develops slowly from precancerous dysplasia caused by human papillomavirus infection, which can be detected by Pap smears and treated to prevent cancer progression. Risk factors include multiple sexual partners, young age of first intercourse, smoking, and family history. Stages of cervical cancer are determined by how far the cancer has spread from the cervix, and treatment options include surgery, chemotherapy, radiation, and targeted therapies.

Comments on “Real Time Gesture Learning and Recognition: Towards Automatic Ca...Ikhsan Assaat

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The document provides comments on the paper "Real Time Gesture Learning and Recognition: Towards Automatic Categorization". It summarizes that the paper presents techniques to recognize gestures from accelerometer sensor data using supervised learning for fixed length gestures and unsupervised learning for variable length gestures. Comments praise the clear structure and use of graphs for data visualization, while noting some technical terms may be unfamiliar to broader audiences.

Scientific Writing Task 3Ikhsan Assaat

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This summary comments on an article about using immersive virtual reality in education. It analyzes the structure, clarity, content, and understanding of the original article. The summary states that the reviewed article has a clear structure with appropriately placed sections, a clear title, and sentences that are easy to read. It also notes that the reviewed article clearly states its subject and purpose and well presents the research that was conducted.

Scientific Writing Task 1Ikhsan Assaat

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Lesson learned from 'The Science of Scientific Writing'Ikhsan Assaat

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This document provides comments on the article "The Toxic Truth about Sugar" published in Nature in 2012. It notes that while the article lacks an explicit structure, the title clearly conveys the content which discusses whether sugar consumption should be controlled like tobacco and alcohol. The comments analyze the clarity, content, and understanding of the article, observing that it uses non-technical language and visuals to discuss reasons for lowering sugar intake and strategies like government regulation that could help control sugar products.

Development Using StoryboardIkhsan Assaat

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Scientific Writing Task 2

1. Scientific Writing Task 2 Comments on "Landscape of Genomic Alterations in Cervical Carcinomas" By Andini Indyanita

2. Structure • Its structure is not classified into seperate sections. • Abstract identified is located at the end of article • Introduction, methods, results, and conclusion are clearly stated. • The discussion is not stated in this article.

3. Clarity • The title does not clearly explain what the article is about. • There is no supporting captions, subheads, or highlighted terms in this article. • Graphics and pictures stated are well presented.

4. Content • The subject is clearly stated : the genomic alterations at servical cancer. • The purpose is clearly stated : to find new strategies to combat the disease. • The research conducted is well presented.

5. Understanding • Content of this article is easy to understand, however the structure make it more complex.

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